~Opposites Attract~

Started by Jeremy January 4th, 2005 6:08 PM
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Jeremy

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~Opposites Attract~

I believed I wouldn't find true love, and I couldn't careless
But now, I realized now I'm gratefully blessed
For now I found the love I want to spend my life with
Knowing that she loves me back is the greatest gift
At first we just argued and fought one another
Then suddenly, we end up liking each other
Fate had us together at heart
But reality had kept us appart
Not being together in person tears me up at night
When we become an item, that will complete my life
We are very different, and both of us know
But despite our differences, we love each other so
Now we are proof of this fact
We are proof that opposites attract


I'm not really good at making poems. ^^'
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Seen February 25th, 2005
Posted February 19th, 2005
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Awwwness. ^________^ Jeremy thats so kawaii. Great job. ^o^ I dont think you're bad at writing poems. >.O You're really good.

~Karli
Let the two of us become one
Holding on to the coward waves
We continue with our journey
The space between our hug
An endless dream
Cutting through the rainbow
Heading for the promised light
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That was really well written I must say, there was alot of rhyming and that sometimes can be bad, but the way you did it made it work so well great job!
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Ah, don't be so hard on yourself! It's not that bad... just kidding, hehe.

I learned that there's one important key to making a good poem, especially for someone you truly care about... and that's to always trust in yourself. As long as you give it your all, and really believe in your own ability, despite if you've never written one before, your poem will always be considered dear... to that special someone. And from the looks of it, you put your very heart and soul into making for her, and there's nothing more special than that to the one you love like no other!

So, great poem, PIKA2! You really have a way with words!
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Seen March 30th, 2005
Posted March 11th, 2005
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Jeremy dear!! I never knew you were such a talented writer! ^___^ I think this poem is beautiful. There are absolutely no flaws at all. I think this poem is so wonderful, I absolutely love it! ^o^ *huggles Jer-Jer*

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