Frosted Flakes of Corn

Started by O January 6th, 2005 2:00 AM
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Age 29
I'm not sure myself. :(
Seen January 14th, 2008
Posted January 14th, 2008
1,261 posts
18.7 Years
Tony the Tiger, oh your the one
You make my breakfast, so much fun
Those corn flakes are sugary yum yum yum
I get it everywhere, even my bum

Cinnamon toast crunch, Miniwheats,
None of these are something that Frosties can't beat
Gimme some milk, and a spoon
I'll be eating breakfast anytime soon

Frosties, make me strong
That is why I'm singing this song
Frosties, oh they are so good
So good even agreed did that old man who never stood.

So I eat you everyday,
Eating all away
I got to Costco, and buy the all the time.
Don't care how much they cost, even a dime
Surely eating you... Isn't a crime.

Obsession with Frosties... Kinda weird. It popped into my head.
O

KLS

PC's Eternal Witness

Age 32
patiently waiting for zappy to come back
Seen November 7th, 2005
Posted August 4th, 2005
1,397 posts
19.7 Years
haha, i got a kick out of this, you talk about cereal... haha...
i'm sorry for being rude.
Anyways, it's very creative, but i question your syntax in the poem, and i've found out that the best of poems usually compares 1 thing to another.
If you can somehow compare "frosted flakes" to something in life, i'd give you much more credit.
but overall, i had fun reading this.

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