Some Fakemon -> Critiques are so welcome

Started by Twinkle-Chamst February 6th, 2012 8:22 PM
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Seen June 26th, 2013
Posted December 5th, 2012
8 posts
11.4 Years
Alright, so hi guys.

I have never been really good with sprites... especially the colors, God, I hate my coloring.

Last time I sprited, I have to say it, I sucked really bad (like 2 years ago)
(The first image in the attachments)

I just started spriting again today; however, I feel so useless.
I thought I would improve but I'm still missing something :/
I made the second row today...
Suggestions/critiques are so welcome! I need help with them... Especially on the chatot evolution.
BTW, please, just constructive critiques... I want to improve, so I'd like to know WHAT I need to improve :D

PD: Sorry for the attachment, but I still can't post links from other sites, lol.
PD2: Hope I'm posting this on the right forum >:o! if not, I'm sorry!

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Posted February 12th, 2012
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11.3 Years
The wing on our left on the Chatot evo looks a bit off, slightly smaller than it should be. Also, a few sprites have fully coloured outlines :/
Still good though, so keep practising! :D
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Seen June 26th, 2013
Posted December 5th, 2012
8 posts
11.4 Years
The wing on our left on the Chatot evo looks a bit off, slightly smaller than it should be. Also, a few sprites have fully coloured outlines :/
Still good though, so keep practising! :D
Ok, I'll try to fix the wing when I have some time this afternoon~
And if you can, could you tell me which sprites?
I though I was adding to much black :0

Thanks for the help :D

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Posted 4 Minutes Ago
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16.6 Years
I really like these, but the way you executed the colored outlines is really hard on my eyes, especially on the first two. I noticed what you usually do for outlines is pick a color very far to the right of the color picker from your base color; as a result the color comes out very "blinding" and tough to look at. I'd recommend going a bit to the left on the color picker instead of right, so there'll be a slight mix of black/gray in your image which'll make the colors less straining. :3

I have a tough time seeing the outline in your other sprites so I definitely say work on what colors you choose for your sprite outlines!