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Old December 21st, 2009 (4:23 PM).
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    This is my game I'm making called Pokemon Opal.

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    This is Rosewind Town which is the starting town.

    1. Your House

    2. Lab (Can Someone Help Me Think Of A Name For The Prof.?)

    3. Rival's House

    4. After Getting HM Cut and Badge 3 cut down and get the item, Stone Plate

    Please post comments to tell me where I need to improve.
    I may not be very good at this beceause I am only 11.
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    Old December 21st, 2009 (5:51 PM).
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      hehehe!
      My scripter notified me someone had a game with the same name.. XD
      You'll probably need to change it to move it into the Game Dev Forum.
      All I can say is that you'll need to learn how to make graphics. I suggest pixel art, it's fairly easy after you do it often.
      Besides that, you'll need a story to go any further.

      Good luck.
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      Old December 21st, 2009 (9:52 PM).
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        thanks
        sorry i didnt know yours was called opal
        I'm still working on the story plot
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        Old December 22nd, 2009 (2:18 AM).
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          Hi!

          I still have no story plot but i have made alot of new places. Oh and by the way this is the Tylox Region.

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          This is Route 1.

          1. After getting HM Cut and badge 3 get this item, Revive.

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          The first gym town! It is unnacsessible until you visit poke park so come back later.

          1. Poke Mart. At the moment only sells Potions, Repels and Pokeballs. I'll add inside image later.

          2. Pokemon Center. I'll add inside image later.

          3. Gumnut Town Gym: Grass Type, Leader Frank. I'll add inside image later. I will also add images of the leader as well.

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          Poke Park is like Amity Square in D/P/Plt except u can walk with anyone. There is a playground there that acts as a daycare.

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          Sorry there is actually meant to be trainers there i dont really know how to make them, like sprites and that.

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          Again, there is trainers, actually 3.
          Post more later, maybe even starter sprites, c u!
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          Old December 22nd, 2009 (2:24 AM). Edited December 22nd, 2009 by ajroxx.
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            Hi!

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            This is Mt. Alpha, which later in the game is where you catch the game's legendary

            1. You will see your Rival standing near these two fossils. He will get the one you dont get. They are both rock/ground types. He'll battle you after that!

            2. Camper Lucas and Hiker Bob's Tent. They each give you an item Bob = Everstone. Lucas = Nugget.

            3. Secret Tyre Entrance Locked Now

            Nearly done starter sprites! C U
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            Old December 22nd, 2009 (2:31 AM).
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              Story Plot:
              You are an 11 year old trainer and for your birthday you get a pokemon from the prof. He will give you and your friend a choice of one each.

              Grass = Pigletty the Tiny Piglett Pokemon
              Water = Clamilly the Oyster Clam Pokemon
              Fire = Turtcluster the Ember Turtle Pokemon

              After getting one you go home and fall asleep on the couch. Then you dream about a future event of you being watched by two people. The one in white claims that they are the good one called Team Lightness and the one in black says that they will take over the world and they are team Darkness. They aproach you then the title screen starts up.
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              Old December 22nd, 2009 (2:17 PM).
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                These are the starter pokemon.
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                  Don't get mad at me for this, but you're graphics are, well, unprofessional.

                  I'm not a good artist either, but you might want to stick to mapping or something else instead of making graphics, because like I said before, you're graphics aren't very good.

                  All CC aside, your game could be very good if you're devoted to making it. You can improve your game further by making a better plot. You have an endless number of possibilities for your story!
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                  Old December 22nd, 2009 (3:21 PM).
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                    This is ornamental forest.

                    1. Pokemon Statue. It will look as if it is straing at you. Press A on it and you will get a glass flute, a new type of flute that sharply raises the your pokemon's Sp. Att and Attack and Sharply lowers the foes Sp. Def and Defence.

                    2. Techical Machine Grass Knot

                    3. After getting badge 3 and HM Cut obtain the hidden TM Swords Dance
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                    Old December 22nd, 2009 (3:24 PM).
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                      Don't get mad at me for this, but you're graphics are, well, unprofessional.

                      I'm not a good artist either, but you might want to stick to mapping or something else instead of making graphics, because like I said before, you're graphics aren't very good.

                      All CC aside, your game could be very good if you're devoted to making it. You can improve your game further by making a better plot. You have an endless number of possibilities for your story!
                      Thanks. I am really bad at graphics i have to admit. But I'm only 11 so don't expect too much out of me. I will take your advice and add thurther explanation to my Plot. C U.
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                      Old December 22nd, 2009 (3:54 PM).
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                        lol not bad for an 11 year old... its actually pretty good concidering your age
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                        Old December 22nd, 2009 (4:05 PM).
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                          lol not bad for an 11 year old... its actually pretty good concidering your age
                          thanks! your game is pretty good
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                          Old December 22nd, 2009 (4:48 PM).
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                            These are 4 new pokemon i just created. Again not very graphically good but i atleast like them!
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                              You 2nd and 3rd Pokemon look like Gastly and Umbreon. Are they supposed to be related to them in some way?
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                              Old December 23rd, 2009 (7:08 PM).
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                                You 2nd and 3rd Pokemon look like Gastly and Umbreon. Are they supposed to be related to them in some way?
                                Thanks! I was hoping you would notice. Its not meant to looke like umbreon but the other one was inspired by gastly. It wasn't meant to look to much like Gastly but it is inspired by Gastly
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                                Old December 23rd, 2009 (7:27 PM).
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                                  For once a 11 year old without an attitude!! -shudders at a certain thought of one-

                                  You seem pretty up to it. I'll tell you this - many people here on the forum will not finish their game. So PLEASE don't let the difficulty drive you crazy. Some people try for one week hoping it will be a revolution and then give up becasuse.. well.. usually, they don't have time or just are too lazy and can't be very observant to such errors in the games.

                                  If you complete it.. THAT would be a revolution. XD Please try your hardest!
                                  I'm glad you know how to accept critique. I look forward to seeing where you'll get!
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                                    Just adding onto what Nyu here said.

                                    The best way to learn is often by doing. When I had my first attempt to make a game, it was pretty bad, but I got most of the way through it before I looked back on it to see how bad it was. I then stopped and tried to join higher quality projects (all failed, but I learned quite a bit from them). They were great for me. I learned so much from the experiences.

                                    Like Nyu said, most games will not be completed. But here's my suggestion for you: Try to finish this project. Do everything by yourself, and learn. When starting a new part of development, you should ask questions on if you are going about doing it right.
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                                    Old December 23rd, 2009 (7:45 PM).
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                                      For once a 11 year old without an attitude!! -shudders at a certain thought of one-

                                      You seem pretty up to it. I'll tell you this - many people here on the forum will not finish their game. So PLEASE don't let the difficulty drive you crazy. Some people try for one week hoping it will be a revolution and then give up becasuse.. well.. usually, they don't have time or just are too lazy and can't be very observant to such errors in the games.

                                      If you complete it.. THAT would be a revolution. XD Please try your hardest!
                                      I'm glad you know how to accept critique. I look forward to seeing where you'll get!
                                      so far actually no difficulties
                                      the towns andd routes are actually really easy!
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                                      Old December 23rd, 2009 (7:49 PM).
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                                        For once a 11 year old without an attitude!! -shudders at a certain thought of one-

                                        You seem pretty up to it. I'll tell you this - many people here on the forum will not finish their game. So PLEASE don't let the difficulty drive you crazy. Some people try for one week hoping it will be a revolution and then give up becasuse.. well.. usually, they don't have time or just are too lazy and can't be very observant to such errors in the games.

                                        If you complete it.. THAT would be a revolution. XD Please try your hardest!
                                        I'm glad you know how to accept critique. I look forward to seeing where you'll get!
                                        so far actually no difficulties
                                        the towns routes and cities are easy

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                                        this took like 5 - 10 minutes!
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                                          so far actually no difficulties
                                          the towns routes and cities are easy

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                                          this took like 5 - 10 minutes!

                                          What program are you using to make the maps anyway?
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                                            For your "Flute" item:

                                            I think you should have sharply raise the Att. and Sp. Att. of your Pokemon and harshly lower the Def. and Sp. Def. of your Pokemon, because if it lowers the stats of the opponent, then that would be incredibly cheap.

                                            You know what I like about this game, though? You have determination. You're taking the CC very well, unlike some other game makers. (I used to be of those myself, BTW)

                                            What I expect is for this game to hopefully make it to a release.

                                            Again, good luck on your project!
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                                              What program are you using to make the maps anyway?
                                              dont know what its called all i know is that is is ownage!
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                                                You should know what it is called if you have used it as much as you have. Why don't you check?
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                                                  You should know what it is called if you have used it as much as you have. Why don't you check?
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