Fakemon by AtavanHalen343 Page 2

Started by AtavanHalen343 February 8th, 2012 2:04 PM
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Nowhereville. It's very nice in Autumn.
Seen October 11th, 2017
Posted May 10th, 2014
123 posts
11.4 Years
Yes, it is. lol :) New! Saptus evo! I'm rather proud of how my spriting is improving.


Cactofear
The Regret Pokemon
GRASS/GHOST

EDIt: Saptus improvement!

Woah, these are just becoming better and better! :D I'm really surprised as to how well your skills are developing. It'd be nice to see a third evo soon, not to rush you or anything. Take your time. :)

I don't really have any complaints about Cactofear. But Saptus looks somehow... odd? Maybe I'm just bad with color though. Unless you meant it to be brighter than the second one?
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AtavanHalen343

Dacaytus, one of my sprites.

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Seen October 30th, 2022
Posted December 9th, 2012
62 posts
11.3 Years
Recolored Saptus and edited the shading! It was meant to be a lot brighter so that, as the line got paler and paler, it would represent the life leaving the plant as it became a ghost, but my color for Saptus didn't mesh too well, so hopefully this'll be better! ^.^



EDIT: Still a bit bright...I'll toy with it tomorrow.

Atomic Pirate

I always win.

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Somewhere.
Seen September 22nd, 2014
Posted July 10th, 2014
930 posts
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Thanks! I'm working on him some now, and I just finished up working on the legendary!

It appears to still have the nose from it's old head on it's torso. Other than that, it looks much better than the old one.
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Nowhereville. It's very nice in Autumn.
Seen October 11th, 2017
Posted May 10th, 2014
123 posts
11.4 Years
You're right. lol I'll fix that!
And, IceyPinkLemons, here"s the third evo! :)


Dacaytus
Decrepit Pokemon
GRASS/GHOST

EDIT: Recolor of Saptus! I'm finally happy with his colors! :)

HOLY FLYING FUDGESICLES. You've really freaking applied yourself. :o I am legitimately impressed by your progress. But just one thing. You might want to play around and see what you can do with a little dithering in maybe some of the darkest spots. This one seems a little too much like the colors are just layered over each other, so the dithering might balance the sprite out. Other than that; THAT SPRITE FREAKING ASPLODED MY EYES WITH AWESOMENESS. It'd be great to see you rework some of your other sprites like that.
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Great Britain
Seen December 6th, 2014
Posted September 5th, 2012
48 posts
11.1 Years
Nice, keep em up. I love the designs. On the new fire starter, lower the saturation of the red, it stands out too much and ruins the effect of the black. Also, watch the shading on the legs of Sizzark, there should be atleast a bit of light on the back leg.
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Nowhereville. It's very nice in Autumn.
Seen October 11th, 2017
Posted May 10th, 2014
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11.4 Years
Thank yas! :) New Fakemon!

Bombwise

Cherry Bomb Pokemon
FIRE/STEEL
Haha, Pennywise. That's just creepy. :) I'd like to see the starter set finished. You never got past the grasses and waters.
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Posted May 3rd, 2012
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11.1 Years
I really like Patrobo, the grass starters, and the fire starters. Aarsun (besides having an awesome name) looks awesome I think, as does your legendary. My only comment there is that Aarsun definitely doesn't look like an electric type. I was thinking it would be FIRE/GROUND or FIRE/DARK when I saw it; I'm not sure I get an electric vibe from anything other than its name. Not a huge fan of Pomporb though, especially since it looks like it might evolve into a Lanturn (and you already have an electric starter). Awesome work though!

AtavanHalen343

Dacaytus, one of my sprites.

Male
Seen October 30th, 2022
Posted December 9th, 2012
62 posts
11.3 Years
I really like Patrobo, the grass starters, and the fire starters. Aarsun (besides having an awesome name) looks awesome I think, as does your legendary. My only comment there is that Aarsun definitely doesn't look like an electric type. I was thinking it would be FIRE/GROUND or FIRE/DARK when I saw it; I'm not sure I get an electric vibe from anything other than its name. Not a huge fan of Pomporb though, especially since it looks like it might evolve into a Lanturn (and you already have an electric starter). Awesome work though!
Thanks for commenting! When I first made Aarsun, his color scheme was red/yellow, and I changed it when I revamped him. Pomporb's appearance and shape will be more apparent soon. :)

hm, these pokemons are a bit irregular. I mean that some of them are cool and some of them aren't.

For example:
Dacaytus, Ogringe or Thundertyn are cool, but Hipposaur or Boonket are a lot worse!

Search which ones are the best and try to mantain that style with the other ones!
Well, Ogringe, Hipposaur, and Boonket are older sprites, and ones that were partially amalgamon, and are no longer actually a part of the fakedex I'm making. Hence the "Old Fakemon" heading. Thank you for commenting though! :)

NEW FAKEMON! Finally finished the water starter's first form!


Aquorm
Water Starter
WATER

Atomic Pirate

I always win.

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Somewhere.
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Posted July 10th, 2014
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Thanks for commenting! When I first made Aarsun, his color scheme was red/yellow, and I changed it when I revamped him. Pomporb's appearance and shape will be more apparent soon. :)



Well, Ogringe, Hipposaur, and Boonket are older sprites, and ones that were partially amalgamon, and are no longer actually a part of the fakedex I'm making. Hence the "Old Fakemon" heading. Thank you for commenting though! :)

NEW FAKEMON! Finally finished the water starter's first form!


Aquorm
Water Starter
WATER
Just a suggestion, but this Pokemon looks a bit too much like it will be an Electric type, and you already have many Electrics made. Maybe you should change the yellow bits to another color or something, but I'm interested to see what the final evolution looks like. And the Aarsun comment is valid, it looks nothing like an Electric type in it's new appearance.
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countryemo

Kicking against the earth!

Age 29
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Littleroot Town
Seen February 9th, 2021
Posted September 10th, 2018
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13.5 Years
When I looked at your first post, I was a bit put off until I started scrolling down. Wow these are getting good!

I love some of the concepts like Boonket. -huggles- :D
I think the fire starter looked better in his older color, maybe find a nice balance between the two. Anyways keep up the good work!

Also I would would work on the outlines, their a bit rugged instead of smooth.
(which is good for some, but yeah)
Seen May 27th, 2012
Posted May 8th, 2012
19 posts
11.2 Years
This is some really nice spriting, the lines are realistic and believable. its not messy or over cluttered with too many details, or too few for that matter. what im saying is that these are believable for some real Nintendo sprites. I don't care for the fire starter much, buts that's just opinion cause the sprite is done good.

Mr. Mammoth

One cool snowman

Age 26
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Wherever there is ice
Seen March 8th, 2016
Posted May 11th, 2014
812 posts
11.8 Years

Aarsun recolor!
Wow, these are just... Awesome. I wish that I could sprite like you do, but alas, I can not. So instead I'll just come here to give my honest opinion! I like the Embvaark-line in their current form. But I feel like it would be more apropriate for them to be Dark-type in that case. However, with this coloration, it looks more like an electric type. The problem is that I (who is the greatest sprite-critic of all time because that's the way the world doesn't work) feel like the black and the yellow don't contrast too well? It's just that the red/black color-scheme seemed less cluttered to me, where as this new one has a lot of colors going on, and thus it can come off as a bit cluttered. Or maybe I'm just talking straight outta my a**? Point being, I liked the red/black Aarsun better.

AtavanHalen343

Dacaytus, one of my sprites.

Male
Seen October 30th, 2022
Posted December 9th, 2012
62 posts
11.3 Years
Wow, these are just... Awesome. I wish that I could sprite like you do, but alas, I can not. So instead I'll just come here to give my honest opinion! I like the Embvaark-line in their current form. But I feel like it would be more apropriate for them to be Dark-type in that case. However, with this coloration, it looks more like an electric type. The problem is that I (who is the greatest sprite-critic of all time because that's the way the world doesn't work) feel like the black and the yellow don't contrast too well? It's just that the red/black color-scheme seemed less cluttered to me, where as this new one has a lot of colors going on, and thus it can come off as a bit cluttered. Or maybe I'm just talking straight outta my a**? Point being, I liked the red/black Aarsun better.
I actually plan on redoing the fire starter line, and making the current line a standard three-stage evo line. I'm also beginning to make movelists and stats for the pokemon. I'm also gonna reveal a pokemon's stats and move set before the sprite, as I'm not 100% certain of what it will be. Anyway, here it is!

TYPES: Water/Ground

ABILITY/IES: Sap Sipper/Hydration

HP: 150
Atk: 23
Def: 125
SpA: 117
SpD: 125
Spe: 5

LEVEL UP MOVES:
-- Bubble
-- Growl
7. Pound
14. Yawn
21. Water Pulse
28. Calm Mind
35. Earth Power
42. Slack Off
49. Acid Armor
56. Nasty Plot
63. Dark Pulse
70. Hydro Pump

TM/HM MOVES:
04 Calm Mind
05 Roar
06 Toxic
07 Hail
08 Bulk Up
10 Hidden Power
12 Taunt
13 Ice Beam
14 Blizzard
15 Hyper Beam
16 Light Screen
17 Protect
18 Rain Dance
20 Safeguard
26 Earthquake
28 Dig
29 Psychic
30 Shadow Ball
32 Double Team
33 Reflect
37 Sandstorm
41 Torment
44 Rest
45 Attract
48 Round
49 Echoed Voice
52 Focus Blast
53 Energy Ball
55 Scald
61 Will-O-Wisp
63 Embargo
64 Explosion
71 Stone Edge
73 Thunder Wave
75 Swords Dance
78 Bulldoze
79 Frost Breath
82 Dragon Tail
83 Work Up
86 Grass Knot
90 Substitute
91 Flash Cannon
H03 Surf
H04 Strength
H06 Dive