EVA02

avatar made by KazuyaSato

Age 30
Seen December 15th, 2005
Posted March 13th, 2005
360 posts
18.7 Years
long title hey XD heres the comic i call it kyorges problem
from aviex is that right i got this from Radical_Edward srry if thats rong
made by C.O.R
kazuya's forum
im twins with KazuyaSato

my eevee fusions i adopted them from angel tabitha i think neopets thanks pokemon gurl 11

EVA02

avatar made by KazuyaSato

Age 30
Seen December 15th, 2005
Posted March 13th, 2005
360 posts
18.7 Years
srry i just needed two pokemon and the ruby and sap legendarys came into mind
from aviex is that right i got this from Radical_Edward srry if thats rong
made by C.O.R
kazuya's forum
im twins with KazuyaSato

my eevee fusions i adopted them from angel tabitha i think neopets thanks pokemon gurl 11
Age 31
Somewhere dark where the only light is the stars and the moon
Seen October 23rd, 2012
Posted October 16th, 2006
775 posts
19.6 Years
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I'm back, after to long away from here. I don't plan on picking up where I left off. I'm here to make new memories.
Want art> Send me a message. :D
I CLAIMED UMBREON from pokemon, LEON(squall), and TIDUS from FF at the Bishie thread so no touchy!

Demonic Angel

I remember when I lost my mind

Female
Australia
Seen April 4th, 2010
Posted March 7th, 2010
571 posts
18.4 Years
Figured I'd post on how to improve it...

Firstly, the background.
Do not rush.
It doesn't matter how much of a hurry you're in, it'll always be there tomorrow (unless the world blows up O.O but we won't go into that). So, take a bit more time, make things more accurate. I can tell you're doing this in MS Paint, but just take the time to shade things, and not have just blue sky and green grass kinda thing.

Secondly, make sure you have the pokemon positioned correctly. Like DF said, the Groudon's feet aren't touching the ground.
And also, don't leave excess background parts on the sprites after you delete the background. That also makes it seem very rushed. x.x

Thirdly, text bubbles.
You have to admit, it looks kind of dumb just having text float there. =\
Get the line tool, 1px, black, hold **** and draw some straight lines to form a text bubble/box of some sort, then fill it with white.

Finally, the story line/plot/what the pokemon did/whatever you want to call it.
Honestly, the plot was stupid, and not funny (in my opinion, anyway). Next time, try to be a bit more creative. ;)


Sorry for sounding so harsh before, but it was the truth, even if put in a somewhat mean way. ._.;



[still] paired with Blade.

EVA02

avatar made by KazuyaSato

Age 30
Seen December 15th, 2005
Posted March 13th, 2005
360 posts
18.7 Years
well now thats my thing so i suck at nearlly every thing on pc
from aviex is that right i got this from Radical_Edward srry if thats rong
made by C.O.R
kazuya's forum
im twins with KazuyaSato

my eevee fusions i adopted them from angel tabitha i think neopets thanks pokemon gurl 11

Demonic Angel

I remember when I lost my mind

Female
Australia
Seen April 4th, 2010
Posted March 7th, 2010
571 posts
18.4 Years
well now thats my thing so i suck at nearlly every thing on pc
You don't suck at everything on PC...not that I know what you're referring to, but you don't. -_-
No one's saying you suck, but you can improve.
You have to accept critisism, along with comments. I don't mean critisism like, "OMFG dat suckd so much u suk!!11!", because that's just plain idiotic. I mean critisism like this, "I didn't like it, the plot was sucky.", that actually tells you what they didn't like about it, so you can make to improve it next time.
Sometimes people tell you how to improve it, though, and you should really take their advice. If your posting it on a public forum, you can't expect to have all praise.
For example, if someone submitted, say, a blank 200x200 blue square, and people kept saying things like, "omg that was so great", the person is obviously not going to improve (bad example, I know).

Anyway, yeah...please, just try and take critisism into account, along with praise..



[still] paired with Blade.

Lokhlan

Formerly "Tendo"

Age 36
Male
Bossier City, Louisiana
Seen July 27th, 2018
Posted January 5th, 2014
1,818 posts
19.5 Years
Kyrogue bashing? Honestly, if making fun of a pokemon really offends you, then you should probably check in to your local psychiatrist.

Eva02, I assume by how childish the comic looks that you weren't really trying to do your best, so um... I award you effort points! XD


Friend Safari is Normal Type 5455-9491-0290
Aipmon, Audino, Smeargle
Age 62
Male
Melbourne, Australia
Seen April 26th, 2018
Posted June 9th, 2014
11,439 posts
19.7 Years
*giggles* I like Kyogre! Can't you bash, like, Delibird or something? (I just think that the "Present" attack is kinda pointless :P)


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Age 29
Non-binary
New South Wales, Australia
Seen December 3rd, 2022
Posted October 5th, 2016
14,976 posts
18.7 Years
Weell, Yami, Claire, and Ty said it for me, there is room for improvement and plenty of it. ^^; But I think if you did what Yami said and extended the plot... it might - yeah. XD

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