The Rhyme game! Page 5

Started by tajaros July 26th, 2012 10:14 PM
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ShinyUmbreon189

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Age 31
Male
Chicago
Seen December 17th, 2022
Posted July 7th, 2019
1,461 posts
11.2 Years
yo, yo, i can't take it no more my flow is like hard to the core and this times its sicker than ever before. imma go see a ***** that i adore, thats gonna happen at four, yea my body may be soar but i just survived another world war, and this is stuff that you cannot ignore, ya i seen the gore, and now im on the dance floor. i know this is what youve been waitin for imma explore the and world thats for sure, and hope i don't run into a mad boar, thats got a beastly roar. i might join the marine corps, naw instead imma make a trip to the liquor store, and i cant keep score i ran outta rhymes so now im done for.

ShinyUmbreon189

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Age 31
Male
Chicago
Seen December 17th, 2022
Posted July 7th, 2019
1,461 posts
11.2 Years
yo im raw as the vets from the vietnam war
you don't know who you messin wit' now imma take you outta the rap game and make yo ass poor, cos my flows so sick and now your done for

It's really hard to make rap lines with these rhymes, I wonder if we can change it?

ShinyUmbreon189

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Chicago
Seen December 17th, 2022
Posted July 7th, 2019
1,461 posts
11.2 Years
ok you didn't even rhyme in those lines so idk whats up but some stuff i say wont be necessary for this site so i cant go with my full potential.

yo when im rollin down the streets im rappin to dem beats
your tryin to rhyme while im here doin victimless crimes
im smokin on dat dro and your thinkin your a pro
well i aint scared to go but i think you are tho
Age 26
Male
United states, New York, New York City, Bronx
Seen June 25th, 2021
Posted December 11th, 2014
391 posts
11.3 Years
^i pronounced flammed like flame
You rappin you beats in the street
to bad my rhymes got you beat
you came back for more now im raising the heat
you need a whole army fleet
cause im so elite

ShinyUmbreon189

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Chicago
Seen December 17th, 2022
Posted July 7th, 2019
1,461 posts
11.2 Years
you were so sweet but now your obsolete
what you talkin about army fleet? i got the gangs on the street
i already slammed you into the concrete cuz your so petite
what you mean you got me beat? I already brought you to defeat

ShinyUmbreon189

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Age 31
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Chicago
Seen December 17th, 2022
Posted July 7th, 2019
1,461 posts
11.2 Years
yo, your rhymes are so whack thats why you livin on the streets
now you cant afford to eat because you were so deceit
you say your so elite, yo im the one that's killin the silenced beat
yo, i aint tryin to mistreat but my skills are so secrete

ShinyUmbreon189

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Age 31
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Chicago
Seen December 17th, 2022
Posted July 7th, 2019
1,461 posts
11.2 Years
verse 1
yo, naw this aint gotta be a rap more of a freestyle recap
there's not a of words to rhyme so i know its gonna sound like crap
im runnin from the cops and goin through the speed trap
now i got the swat team after me cuz i had to pop a cap
now im gettin my mug shot for bein a street thug
i got thrown in the penitentiary for stealin spark plugs
im the illest in this century that's why i roll with the juggs
now im fightin criminals and squashing them like bugs
they lived in the hood block and had to bust them slugs
some are in cos they sold the illegal drugs
when they rollin down the streets theyre lookin for people to mug
theyle jack anything they see even if its a rug

check it, your rhymes are so lame and you don't even got a stage name
you aint got no punchlines and in rap that's like committin crimes
yo i murder everything you throw at me, and then convert it to mp3
so you aint got nothin on me and that's the way it's gotta be
imma take you through a tour of why im in the rap game
that might explain why i always put yall to shame
yall are the same and i aint tryin to flame
you arent even tame that's why you use your last name








next rhyme is gonna go with fame and what not.