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NOT 27 Whitewood Road, Bayswater Avenue, Auckland, New Zealand
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Posted August 14th, 2014
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posts
11.6
Years
Tom has never been the type to go out of his way looking for love—he'd much rather wait while all his friends start dating (and breaking up) in elementary school, junior high, and high school. However, when a special girl walks into his life, and has a good chance of never leaving, he finds himself struggling to deny his feelings for her. If only he knew what was coming soon after, he would never have changed his mind.

A story about a boy who regrets the one thing he could never have changed.

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A story about a boy who regrets the one thing he could never have changed.
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NOT 27 Whitewood Road, Bayswater Avenue, Auckland, New Zealand
Seen 1 Week Ago
Posted August 14th, 2014
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posts
11.6
Years
Tom has never been the type to go out of his way looking for love—he'd much rather wait while all his friends start dating (and breaking up) in elementary school, junior high, and high school. However, when a special girl walks into his life, and has a good chance of never leaving, he finds himself struggling to deny his feelings for her. If only he knew what was coming soon after, he would never have changed his mind.

A story about a boy who regrets the one thing he could never have changed.

(Working Title)
A story about a boy who regrets the one thing he could never have changed.
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NOT 27 Whitewood Road, Bayswater Avenue, Auckland, New Zealand
Seen 1 Week Ago
Posted August 14th, 2014
40
posts
11.6
Years
Tom has never been the type to go out of his way looking for love—he'd much rather wait while all his friends start dating (and breaking up) in elementary school, junior high, and high school. However, when a special girl walks into his life, and has a good chance of never leaving, he finds himself struggling to deny his feelings for her. If only he knew what was coming soon after, he would never have changed his mind.

A story about a boy who regrets the one thing he could never have changed.

(Working Title)
A story about a boy who regrets the one thing he could never have changed.
murder is unnecessary
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peace is key...
hey guys... check my trading shop...
http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=305409
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overuser of the ellipsis ...
peace is key...
hey guys... check my trading shop...
http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=305409
..........................................................................................................................................they call me red.http://www.pokecommunity.com/signaturepics/sigpic362557_3.gif


