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Old February 4th, 2005 (7:55 PM). Edited February 22nd, 2005 by <[HaZaRdOuS_EnIgMa]>.
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    "Angel"[song]
    Theres no one that
    Id rather have
    Lying here next to me
    Than someone who
    Is just like you
    Who loves me
    And shares my dreams

    Honestly,
    I dont know where
    These feelings for you began
    But they will last
    Even longer than
    An hourglass that doesnt spill sand

    Your eyes, lips and hair
    Appear everywhere
    On my mind 24/7
    So beautiful
    More than physical
    I swear your sent from heaven

    [2x]
    Youre like an angel
    An angel
    An angel sent from above
    An angel
    An angel
    The embodiment of grace and love



    "let's just get through today"[short song]

    now i've been hurt by love,
    if you know what i speak of,
    then this should be so clear.
    I've been shattered and split
    my heart torn into bits,
    yet i have never shed a tear.
    because all that changed,
    when you stepped my way
    you erased all of my fears.
    and i'd do anything.
    for you this song i sing,
    i'm so glad to have you here.

    we may laugh and smile,
    then not speak for a while.
    but my love has never changed.
    when had that fight,
    you know, the other night.
    i'm so glad that you stayed.
    i'm lost without you,
    wouldn't know what to do
    if you ever went away.
    and sometimes it may hurt,
    but we'll make it work,
    first let's just get through today.
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    Old February 4th, 2005 (8:06 PM).
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    Awww, how sweet, sweetie. I'll give it a -408740794694794694653975694796943653869697075357830473446443645354
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    Old February 4th, 2005 (8:08 PM).
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      Oh they're both very sweet. I just loved the first one, it is so beautiful. Great job
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      Old February 4th, 2005 (8:09 PM).
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      Oh they're both very sweet. I just loved the first one, it is so beautiful. Great job
      Same here.
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      Old February 5th, 2005 (7:15 AM).
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        thanx everyone ^ ^ btw the first one, if you take a two second break in betwwen each line as you sing it, you'll understand the flow that i wrote it in a little better
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        Old February 5th, 2005 (4:47 PM).
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          i'll just keep editing this post i guess or something like that...so enjoy ^ ^ feel free to comment if you wanna


          "Angel"[song]
          Theres no one that
          Id rather have
          Lying here next to me
          Than someone who
          Is just like you
          Who loves me
          And shares my dreams

          Honestly,
          I dont know where
          These feelings for you began
          But they will last
          Even longer than
          An hourglass that doesnt spill sand

          Your eyes, lips and hair
          Appear everywhere
          On my mind 24/7
          So beautiful
          More than physical
          I swear your sent from heaven

          [2x]
          Youre like an angel
          An angel
          An angel sent from above
          An angel
          An angel
          The embodiment of grace and love



          "let's just get through today"[short song]

          now i've been hurt by love,
          if you know what i speak of,
          then this should be so clear.
          I've been shattered and split
          my heart torn into bits,
          yet i have never shed a tear.
          because all that changed,
          when you stepped my way
          you erased all of my fears.
          and i'd do anything.
          for you this song i sing,
          i'm so glad to have you here.

          we may laugh and smile,
          then not speak for a while.
          but my love has never changed.
          when had that fight,
          you know, the other night.
          i'm so glad that you stayed.
          i'm lost without you,
          wouldn't know what to do
          if you ever went away.
          and sometimes it may hurt,
          but we'll make it work,
          first let's just get through today.
          Awws, these songs are so wonderful Matt. ^___________^ Well, seeing as these obviously came from the heart and possibly real-life experiences, I shan't review them so hard as I do others. ;

          Well, your first song was beautiful, it made me feel so happy. It makes one think that love is real, you just have to know where to look and find it. ^______^

          The second song sounds familiar. XD But it makes me think of two people who were drawn to each other. Even when they'd bicker and fight they always bounced back to each other.

          Awsome job on both songs Mattie, woot! X3

          ~Kelsey
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          Old February 5th, 2005 (4:56 PM).
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            [color='royal blue'] awesome job matt ^___^ keep up the good work okai? XD ~origin [/color]
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            Old February 12th, 2005 (7:44 PM).
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              for valentine's day:

              song#1
              She moves so confidently
              Oh, son, shes lookin at me
              What could it possibly be?
              Can she read my mind?
              Does she know that I think shes fine?
              Or that I wanna hook up some time?
              I dont know what to do,
              Butterflies in my stomach, but oooh
              I wanna whisper in her ear,
              And make it perfectly clear
              That theres nothing to fear.
              I wish she would come over here
              So I can tell her how I feel
              And let her know
              That Im a gentleman for real

              Im tryin to keep my cool
              But you
              Make a ----- wanna buy you jewels
              Tell me what do you like to do?
              And how I can get next you.
              To be honest, youve got me trippin
              When I talk, I keep on slippin
              And I dont know
              In any way
              The perfect things to say
              Walk by you everyday
              Inside, youve got me flippin
              My heartbeats keep on skippin,
              Mami, every time you walk by,
              And I can tell that you want me too
              From the naughty look
              I see in your eyes.
              Tell me what its gonna be,
              Will I see you at 9:30?
              Your place? My place?
              Any place is fine with me.



              song #2
              All I can say is ----
              Every time you walk by
              Make me wanna swallow my pride
              And ask you what youre doin tonight.
              Can you
              Come out and play?
              We can do it your way
              Im not picky at all,
              Any way is okay
              Tell me the time and place
              And Ill be there in my whip
              Drop top rolled up
              Well be in the back seat
              If you promise you wont trip.

              And shorty, I
              Cant get you out my mind.
              Just cmon get in
              Lets ride
              Baby, show me whats up tonight
              Want me to drive fast or slow?
              Tell me which way to go
              But Im warning you, once I start,
              Its hard to break the flow.
              Just let me make your day
              Like burger king: have it your way
              Im not down for those one-night stands,
              I can assure you Im here to stay.
              Whenever you need me,
              Call me and Ill be on my way
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              Old February 17th, 2005 (1:55 PM).
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                Ooh, these songs are super good Mattie! ^______^ I really like the first one. XD It makes me think of a guy who's just checkin' a girl out. XD (A funny sight, trust me, I know. ;D) I think the flow to the first song is done well and the words were well used also.

                The second song ish beautiful, I remember it from a while ago actually, I think it had been in your siggie or something. ^______^ All I can say is I love it. <3

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                Old February 18th, 2005 (5:55 AM).
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                  Those are so sweet.
                  I miss my kohji.
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                  Old February 18th, 2005 (2:57 PM).
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                    thanx for the review kelsey-chan, and thanx angel
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                    Old February 22nd, 2005 (6:43 AM).
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                      Your welcome.
                      I Can't wait for some more poems.
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                      Old February 22nd, 2005 (4:11 PM). Edited February 22nd, 2005 by <[HaZaRdOuS_EnIgMa]>.
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                        well if you can't wait, here's a new one XD

                        Whats up? Howre you doin?
                        Ive been watching the way youre movin
                        And from the look youve been givin me,
                        Im assuming you dont have a man
                        Could you brief me on your plans
                        While I take you to the middle of the floor and dance?
                        You know, its February, the perfect month for some romance.
                        I know you can tell youve got me buggin
                        I play most girls off by shruggin,
                        But shorty, theres somethin about you
                        That made me drop the attitude Im luggin
                        Im an Aries, whats your sign?
                        Do you like my pick-up lines?
                        Whether you do or dont
                        You dont need me to tell you that youre fine.
                        But first, let me know your name.
                        Im willin to play your game.
                        We can be like Bonnie and Clyde, Jay-Z and B,
                        With or without the fame.
                        I see Ive got you blushin,
                        Truth is, youve got me crushin.
                        And for once, Im not goin for a hit and quit,
                        Hope this encounter adds up to somethin
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                        Old February 23rd, 2005 (6:48 AM).
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                          Thats really good.
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                          Old February 23rd, 2005 (11:12 AM).
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                            XD thanx. i was listening to a song on the radio, and i used the beat to write that =3
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                            Old February 23rd, 2005 (1:45 PM).
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                              Matt-kun!!!!!! [glomps] I really like the latest song you wrote =3 Awesome job!!! ^__^ xD;; ~origin
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                              Old February 23rd, 2005 (1:50 PM).
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                                thanx for the support julia ^____~
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