"A Day at the Psychic School"

Started by Peekimon February 8th, 2005 9:14 AM
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Age 29
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Seen February 2nd, 2008
Posted February 2nd, 2008
683 posts
18.3 Years
To give my honest oppinion...
Pros:
The text boxes are great! I have to say you have good spelling.
Cons:
The recolering job needs work even If it's a splice. Looks like you used irfan view. Irfanview is a VERY limited program you should know. Wheres the background? Not even a few desks to brighten the place up? That also needs some work. The sweat is to deformed and has a black outline making it look unnatural. Use a light shade of blue to fix that. The pokemon trainer sprites are VERY VERY VERY limited and look like they are some kind of cardboard cut out. There is no plot. Not even a cliched "Main character is late for school gig" Finally, the pokeball dissapears in the last panel. One more thing, The panels move around a lot and a rounded rectangle is NOT I repeat NOT A good shape for panels.

If you take these tips your next comic will be A LOT better...

Edit: Oh and log...give some advice to make it better next time...just saying you hate it isn't going to help you like it