Pokémon Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Dimensional Justice

Started by GoldenRiolu/Veemon8810 July 20th, 2013 6:46 AM
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GoldenRiolu/Veemon8810

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Seen December 22nd, 2013
Posted December 22nd, 2013
18 posts
10.3 Years
Chapter 1: Have to Find Him...

"You okay over there?" My companion had asked me.

"I-I'm fine!" I replied hastily. I hadn't gone through AND held open a Dimension Gate at once before. I was afraid that if I messed up, my partner'd...
"Stay focused! We can't let the gate close until we're through!" He encouraged. But I felt lightheaded, my eyes coudn't stay open...the last thing I heard before blacking out was his cry for my help...

I can't forget my mistake...I have to get him back...at all costs...

"Hey!!" A voice shouted. I couldn't tell who...my vision was still blurred from the Dimensional Rift... "You okay?!" It asked. I quickly sat up and looked around...I wasn't in TimeSpace anymore... "Yeah...I'm good..." I replied. "Good thing, too. Around here, we don't see many shiny Riolu!" The voice laughed. "Shiny...what...?" I asked in confusion. I looked down at my hands...I'd turned into a Pokémon..."You're telling me you didn't remember being a Pokemon?" The person inquired. "No...because I was never a Pokèmon to begin with...I was a human on a quest..." I replied, trying not to give away much information. The Pokemon stared at me, then began to bust out laughing. "A human? You?!" It laughed. I growled and stood up, still a bit shaky. "Where you going?" The Pokemon asked again. "I'm going where you'll stop asking me questions." I replied sternly, then walked out.

"Hey, Ekans..." A Pokèmon sitting atop a spire whispered.

."Yeah, I see him, too. Fresh and ripe for the picking. I mean, he's colored rich!" Ekans grinned. The two jumped down from the spire and landed in front of me. I backed up and, with no idea how to fight as a Pokemon, felt helpless.

"Aww....what's wrong, Goldilocks? Can't fight back?" Ekans sneered, "Come along quietly, and Skorupi here won't mess you up." "Tch...* I groaned. From behind me, suddenly, came flames, and the Pokemon from earlier landed at my side. "Why are you back?" I asked.

"I wasn't gonna let you get beaten up. Name's Tepig...but you can call me Scorch." I grinned, then turned back to our opponents...gone. "Where'd they go?" I wondered, "Oh, no...they have the..." "Have the what?" Scorch asked. "Its a special device. I use it to open doors to new Dimensions. If they find out how to use that...everyone...and everything...could be in danger..." I replied.


(Chapter 2: Hunting for the Dimensional Ripper. Keep an eye out.)

Okay, if you could, please ignore the derps? DX I didn't go to bed last night, and so I wrote this half asleep.
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Seen June 2nd, 2014
Posted May 23rd, 2014
22 posts
9.9 Years
I Love The idea. It was a bit short though. As for whats in it... well as I said, its not long, there are a few grammar problems (The main being you not putting spaces after your ellipses.*)

*Ellipses are the ... if you didn't know.
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