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Old November 19th, 2013 (4:27 PM).
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Alright, cool.

Now, to go watch every single episode of the anime in order to uncover the secrets of move learning. XD
Lol xD good luck just google stuff like "Ash's Pikachu learns Volt Tackle" or whatever xD you're certain to find some vids.
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Old November 19th, 2013 (5:40 PM). Edited November 20th, 2013 by TheZenTraveler.
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Alright, cool.

Now, to go watch every single episode of the anime in order to uncover the secrets of move learning. XD
Haha! I'm over here, revisiting several episodes for similar reasons. Nice to know I'm not alone lol.
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Old November 19th, 2013 (6:41 PM).
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    Name: Aon Lonsinger

    Age: 17

    Gender: Male

    Pokegear: Bleeder

    Appearance: Aon is a tall, slender boy. Standing at just a hair below 6 feet 5 tall, and weighing exactly 147 pounds. He has dull, blue eyes – but if you didn’t look at them long enough, you would think they were simply grey. He has short pitch-black hair, with his bangs not quite coming down half way of his forehead. His face is a simple one, with very blank expressions on his mouth and eyes. His head is sort of a U shape, with the chin ending it at a point. He wears a pair of glasses, with no frame on the bottom of them. They also help block the sun out his eyes.

    He wears knee-length navy blue jeans and a bright pink v-neck. Along with this, he also carries a dull orange bag that he carries on his left side as it loops through his belt loops. He wears a pair of light blue sneakers with white highlights and white ankle socks. This is his main style, but he sometimes decides to wear different colored shirts. For colder climates, he wears his light but very warm dark blue winter coat. It rests inside his bag, in case he ever needs it.

    Personality:
    Aon is a calm-minded individual, often keeping to himself. While he doesn’t avoid crowds or groups purposely, he is constantly busy with other activates that he doesn’t have time to join them. He is also often forgetful and has a minor memory problem, due to an accident with his Pineco. Aon is often optimistic about events, except in the face of danger where he would turn into the complete opposite - a pessimist. He is also fascinated with bug Pokemon, along with grass types.

    Starter Pokemon: Pineco. (Female, no nickname.)

    Starters traits/personality:
    This Pineco is one that would rather hide away than battle. She prefers to stay in her pokeball than go outside, so Aon would often need to force the Pineco out her pokeball just to eat. Needless to say, she is a lazy pokemon. Pineco hates being injured, so if she feels threatened she will attack in a burst of anger.

    Roleplay Sample:
    Don looked around, noticing how dark it was getting. He scolded himself, knowing that he was late getting home. His legs were getting tired from walking all day long. Dons goal was to catch a bug Pokemon, as he wanted to get a head start at training Pokemon. He never gave up, however he noticed how he only had one more Pokeball left. He sighed at the thought of his father being disappointed that he lost nine Pokeballs and didn’t get a single Pokemon.

    He continued to walk towards the exit that would lead to Azalea Town, the last pokeball in his left hand, just incase he saw any extra Pokemon that didn’t flee, and he did. Don spotted a Noctowl, a very rare sight. While he wanted a different kind of Pokemon, he couldn’t say no to this rare chance – so he threw the Pokeball. His efforts were in vain. The Noctowl quickly flew away, leaving the sense quickly. Don jogged over to find the ball, but he couldn’t spot it anywhere.

    “Dang it!” He said, sighing heavily. In his despite, he simply kicked the nearest tree. “Well, things simply couldn’t get worse, so that’s something.” As he began to sit down on the ground to rest, he heard a thud on the ground beside him. He quickly glanced over and saw a green-ish blob land before he blacked out from an explosion.

    Don woke up around 5 feet away from where he sat beforehand. His vision was blurry, and his glasses were flung a foot away from his head. He reached for the pair, and he carefully slide them on. He blinked a few times, regaining his focus. He painfully sat up, having to use both hands to push himself up. Across from him laid a Pineco, fainted from the Self-Destruct move it used in self defense. Don realized he had to save the Pineco, and himself, from a night in the forest. Don painfully picked himself up and carried himself towards the fainted Pokemon. He picked up the Pineco, and wrapped both arms around it to carry it. Thankfully, thought Don, that Pinecoes weigh less than they look.
    Once Don reached the end of the forest, he felt better and was no longer sore, so he jogged to the local Pokemon Center to get healed up. At the center, the wait was around 30 minutes long. While waiting, a local came up and asked if the Pineco was his, and Don denied. When the local asked if he would like a special pokeball to catch the Pineco. Don agreed, but said “Well, it’s truly up to the Pineco really.” The local handed Don a Pokeball with a blue top with black markings resembling a net before walking out. Don watched the local walk out when he was called over by Nurse Joy. Don thanked the Nurse while picking up Pineco and leaving. When he stepped outside, he asked the Pineco “Do you want to come with me?” with the answer of her cry and tapping her on the Net Ball Don was holding.

    Hope it isn't too bad. I didn't get a chance to proof-read it. Also, it is kind of rushed the ending, so I'll change some things tomorrow when I'm not so tired! I've been working all day on this puppy.
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    Old November 20th, 2013 (1:02 AM). Edited November 20th, 2013 by Ahri.
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    GoldenRayquaza and Dylan_DJ, you're both accepted.
    Here's your starters' info:

    (King)
    Male/Torrent
    Aqua Ring/Bubble/Growl/Peck


    Female/Sturdy
    Tackle/Protect/Selfdestruct/Bug Bite

    And well, since apparently, a handful of people still wish to join, I've decided to tap into the PokéGears list and add a few more.
    I present you the following:
    (Ruby)
    (Forest)
    (Gastly Edition)
    (Emerald)
    (Fantasy)
    (Midnight)
    (Vintage)

    So, there's now 7(yes, SEVEN) new slots. I won't wait for them to fill up though. As soon as the people that already signed up finish their SUs (which should be before the end of this weekend hopefully), I'll submit the IC thread. So, whoever signs up from now on, will have less time to complete their SU if they want to be ready when the IC is getting posted. Otherwise, you can finish it whenever and well, catch up I guess
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    Old November 20th, 2013 (5:03 AM).
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      Old November 20th, 2013 (9:28 AM).
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      I would like to reserve the Emerald Gear while I work on my sign up. I need to think about some things for my character still.
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      Old November 20th, 2013 (10:19 AM).
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      Hai pair <3

      And okies xD
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      Old November 20th, 2013 (8:05 PM).
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        And my SU is complete. I'm sorry about the RP sample, nothing was flowing as well as it wanted to. Let me know what you think!
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        Old November 21st, 2013 (1:29 AM). Edited November 21st, 2013 by Ahri.
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        And my SU is complete. I'm sorry about the RP sample, nothing was flowing as well as it wanted to. Let me know what you think!

        Loving your SU *-*
        And there's nothing wrong with the RP sample, I loved it!
        You are officially accepted
        Here's Riolu's info:

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        Foresight/Endure/Counter/Force Palm

        So far, there's 11 accepted characters. This means I can post the IC thread soon. So, expect to see the IC thread up sometimes this weekend. The rest of you that didn't get to finish your SUs by then, will have to catch up I guess xD But I can no longer keep people waiting. There's been a whole week for SUs and stuff

        Oh and remember to let me know when you finished your SU, especially if you started posting it pages back and kept adding to it there. I do check daily, but there's chances I might miss stuff >.<
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        Old November 21st, 2013 (6:32 AM).
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          Hooray! Thank you! This will be fun. Time to get back to the rp scene!
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          Old November 21st, 2013 (3:20 PM).
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          Well I got all of my Thanksgiving HW and projects done, as well as the fact that Thanksgiving falls on an odd day this year so I have an extremely long thanksgiving break . I will be able to resume my writing as well as have plenty of free time for IC.
          This will be great!
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          Old November 21st, 2013 (4:45 PM). Edited November 22nd, 2013 by TheSnivyMaster.
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            Name:
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            Age:
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            Gender:
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            Pokégear Choice:
            Gastly Edition

            Appearance:
            Josh is a scrawny boy, standing at 5'3. He has long, brown hair and a black toboggan covering it, like there's a secret under it. He has piercing green eyes, eyes that seem to stare into your soul when he looks at you. He has a rather light tan complexion, and a straight face always. He wears a white button up shirt (unbuttoned), and a black shirt under it. He has a few bracelets on his left wrist, one red and one white. He also carries a green, one strap shoulder bag. He has black jeans on, the jeans torn a little bit, but otherwise nice and clean. He also has white shoes, which tend to be (unnaturally) clean.

            Personality:
            He's a bit of the silent type, but not dead-silent. He may talk once in a while, if someone else is talking to him, but other than that, he never talks. He's also quite relaxed, slouching in his chair when he's getting lectured. But despite his teenagery-like personalty, he's always been interested in the rumors of old Johto. How rural it was, nature seen everywhere (except Goldenrod City, of course), and he's always wanted to see it with his own eyes.

            Starter Pokémon:
            Chestnut (Chespin)


            (Female)


            Short description of your Pokémon’s traits and personality:
            Chestnut is silent, just like Josh, except she shows lack of interest most of the time. When something upsets her, she just sighs and kicks the dirt up. Although she is quiet, her attacks are potentially deadly, usually defeating a Pokemon of the same strength in less than five turns. She also never backs down from a fight, even when it looks like she has no will to battle.

            Roleplay Sample:
            "Chestnut, can you hurry? We gotta leave for Professor Lyra's office." Josh said, pacing a bit quicker than he usually does. The Spiny Nut Pokemon was training on a doll dummy of a Fennekin, which was a gift from a friend before it became Chestnut's training doll. The Pokemon nodded her head no, and then continued tackling and slashing at the doll. "Well, please hurry. I wanna get to the Lab so that we can get out of this town and see Johto." Josh told the feisty Chespin. The Pokemon then sighed, and nodded her head as if she was saying "Let's go, then, smart guy". Josh then ran downstairs, with the Pokemon following him from behind, and ran to the exit of his house. "Ah-ah-ah! Where do you think you're going, mister?" Josh's mother yelled right when Josh reached the door. "Mom, I'm going to get a Pokedex from Professor Lyra. Is there a problem with that?" He said, a look of impatience on his face. She then sighed, "No, there isn't... it's just, I don't want you to go out into the world and get hurt. You know how dangerous this region's gotten in the-" "Yea, yea, yea, the region's gotten dangerous, people are mugging others atleast once a month, there are punks who offer you drugs, yada-yada-yada. Can I go now?" Josh asked, now tapping his foot. She said again, and said, "Fine. But don't come back and tell me I didn't warn you." But she turned to see Josh had already left, the door still swinging wide open.

            If I could make some improvements, just tell me, and I'll fix them.
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            Old November 22nd, 2013 (11:43 AM). Edited November 22nd, 2013 by Ahri.
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            LakituBroz, you're accepted

            Here's Chespin's info:

            (Chestnut)
            Female/Overgrow
            Tackle/Growl/Vine Whip/Leech Seed

            By the way guys, even though it might seem I skipped a move or two when choosing your starters' movesets, your Pokémon can learn those moves whenever during your role play. With no levels, learning moves comes a bit more naturally than it does in the games and a Pokémon can learn the moves regardless of the level requirement.

            Just remember, when you want your Pokémon to learn a new move, you should talk to a GM about it first.

            HUGE NEWS!

            The IC thread has now been POSTED!
            Just gotta wait for Mod approval now
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            Old November 22nd, 2013 (7:32 PM).
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              Quote:
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              LakituBroz, you're accepted

              Here's Chespin's info:

              (Chestnut)
              Female/Overgrow
              Tackle/Growl/Vine Whip/Leech Seed

              By the way guys, even though it might seem I skipped a move or two when choosing your starters' movesets, your Pokémon can learn those moves whenever during your role play. With no levels, learning moves comes a bit more naturally than it does in the games and a Pokémon can learn the moves regardless of the level requirement.

              Just remember, when you want your Pokémon to learn a new move, you should talk to a GM about it first.

              HUGE NEWS!

              The IC thread has now been POSTED!
              Just gotta wait for Mod approval now
              *Gasp* I'm so excited! I can't wait to start on the roleplay! It'll be so much fun... also, tell me if I'm doing something wrong. I'll try to fix it.
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              Old November 22nd, 2013 (11:00 PM).
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              I had been thinking and I have a question about inventory. Starting out what are we looking at money wise? I don't think anyone has posted towards that yet.
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              Old November 23rd, 2013 (6:02 AM). Edited December 4th, 2013 by Nate.
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                Johto Mysteries SU

                Name: Kiki

                Age: 14

                Gender: Male

                Pokégear Choice: Midnight

                Appearance: Kiki is a tall lad with fair hair, dyed a luxurious blue and of a decent length, down over his ears, yet styled to perfection with thick bundles spiked in a even places to match his jagged personality.
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                His eyes are a piercing purple and show no light in them, like dark orbs in a plain of snow-like white. His face and complexion show much youth, and life yet to live, and his mouth is of a perfect size and makes him look naturally handsome. He is quite muscular, and of a thin build, with perfect sized arms and legs you would expect from someone of that build. He wears a black t-shirt with places of a lush red and casual jeans, along with his converse boots and often a red jacket. He also wears a black expensive watch that he treasures dearly.

                Personality: Kiki's name is actually Kieran, but he doesn't mind being called Kiki, as he thinks it brings out the cuteness in his heart. He is very often a fine fellow, speaking politely and confidently to all those he deems worthy to hear him, yet he has a somewhat darker side, not caring about bugs and insects too much and small little things such as not caring if he's standing on plants makes people view him as somewhat arrogant, and when he begins to argue often violence is his idea of winning. His darker personality usually shows up either when he's alone or annoyed, but most of the time he will be calm and quiet. He enjoys music as much as the next person, and has a considerable taste for fish, his favorite being smoked feebas. He has never really viewed pokémon as something he has wanted to do, he wanted a casual life, easy-going kind where he spends each day with friends and family, however his taste for adventure got him thinking about the possibilities of travelling with a pokémon. His friends all had pokégears, he could easily call them from a pc. Soon his mind was considering all kinds of things, such as what he would need. Suddenly Kiki had to become an organised person, but he learned quickly, and that's his last skill, his organisation is excellent.

                Starter Pokémon: Absol

                Short description of your Pokémon’s traits and personality: Absol is a very calm pokémon, and looks down on other pokémon often, turning his head away from foes he doesn't deem strong. He is quite arrogant yet can be very caring and selfless. It wants to help out in as many ways as possible, and trusts it's trainer well. He would never betray his trainer.

                Roleplay Sample: The dark fog spread across the misty sky, enshrouding me and my partner. The full moon seemed to dance with every whistle of wind that passed by, as did the clouds that followed the path of the wind. Never before had I seen such a sight, for the darkness of the world seemed to behold light within every corner, the glorious moon and the patterns that were created by the rolling clouds were enough to make me smile a little. I carry on home, ignoring the few complaining people. "You shouldn't be out this late!" They say that all the time, it's starting to get old. Now I've know my partner for about a day, I think it was time to show it to my parents. I open the door slowly, and absol follows, his tail dragging against the floor nervously.
                "Mum," I say, nervously twisting my feet, "The professor entrusted me with a pokémon." She laughs.
                "I know," she says, "I accepted a short while ago, I think it's time you saw the world for yourself." I'm not sure, but I might have shed a tear there.
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                Old November 23rd, 2013 (6:16 AM).
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                I had been thinking and I have a question about inventory. Starting out what are we looking at money wise? I don't think anyone has posted towards that yet.
                Oh right xD good question. I completely forgot about the money <.< Lyra will be giving each trainer 3000 P along with the starter kit. I'll edit the first post to include that when I manage to get on a computer
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                Can I reserve please Just as I read the rules and stuff

                I think I'll reserve midnight...
                Sure you can tha Midnight one's yours
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                Old November 23rd, 2013 (6:20 AM).
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                Thanks for clearing that question up , and SU Extended history has been updated, most of it is there, I have one or two holes I need to patch, but I will do it later today/tomorrow.
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                Old November 23rd, 2013 (6:37 AM).
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                  Old November 23rd, 2013 (9:38 AM).
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                  Finally done with the SU and the Roleplay Sample in particular. I had the most part of it done for a while, but only got around to finsihing it now. I doubt that all of my posts will be that long, and it was quite rushed at the end but I'd appreciate you checking it out, it's all open to change.
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                  Old November 23rd, 2013 (11:46 AM).
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                    The IC Thread is up, by the way.
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                    Old November 23rd, 2013 (1:10 PM). Edited November 23rd, 2013 by Ahri.
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                    Crimson0191 and TurkishDelight, you are both accepted

                    Though, Crimson, do you think you can switch from 1st person to 3rd person? Most everyone's using 3rd person in the RP and a sudden swap to 1st Person might confuse a few people. Your SU also looks kind of rushed and everything's crammed up together. Maybe you can look around a bit and include some basic spacing between paragraphs and all? I know you have a whole lot of potential and that's why you're accepted despite the issues I had with your SU and particularely, your RP Sample.

                    Here's your Pokémon's info:

                    (Minerva)
                    Magician
                    Tackle/Fairy Lock/Fairy Wind


                    Male/Pressure
                    Scratch/Feint/Quick Attack/Pursuit


                    Oh and guys?

                    BE CAREFUL NOT TO METAGAME about the PokéGear and all. I only had everyone choose one now to avoid conflicting posts in the IC in the case of people choosing the same one. Sure, you can try to fight over them IC, but eventually your characters will settle for the one you picked during sign-up.

                    And careful with reaching the Lab too fast. The Complex is huge and Lyra's Lab is right in the middle. The mountain route towards the complex (which both those that posted seemed to overlook) is not that easy to get through either and not THAT short.

                    So please pay attention to the tiny details
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                    Old November 23rd, 2013 (1:40 PM).
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                      Quick clarification: we can't catch Pokemon until we meet Lyra, right?
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                      Old November 23rd, 2013 (2:44 PM).
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                        Sorry, your right it was rushed. I wanted to start right away because I hard you had already posted the IC thread, sorry about that, and I shall TRY to use third person but I'm not the best at it. Thanks anyways.
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                        Old November 23rd, 2013 (2:59 PM).
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                        Originally Posted by Fuyu View Post
                        Quick clarification: we can't catch Pokemon until we meet Lyra, right?

                        Well, you don't really have PokéBalls, do you? xDD So the answer's no

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                        Originally Posted by Crimson0191 View Post
                        Sorry, your right it was rushed. I wanted to start right away because I hard you had already posted the IC thread, sorry about that, and I shall TRY to use third person but I'm not the best at it. Thanks anyways.
                        Well, I honestly came back to the RP scene not even two weeks ago and look at me now xD I'm doing things I didn't think I was capable of, like proper spacin g and giving RP advice xD

                        I'm sure that once you get the hang of it, 3rd person will be easy for you to RP in
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