Hi MJB, I'll just take the time to comment on your story :3
The year is 1997 and the world is getting ready to enter into a crisis. The four regions Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, and Sinnoh have all teamed up to take on the biggest threat in history, Team R.A.M.G the combination of the evil syndicates of each region. The combined forces are more ruthless than ever attempting to kill everyone in their way if it means they will achieve their ultimate goal of taking control of the entire world. Anyone of the age of 18 through 26 has been mailed a letter by the government to join in the battle against this deadly foe and no is not an option. Join Leon Kimera as he embarks in this long war as he witnesses death, betrayal, defeat and most certainly success!
This isn't really what you'd call a prologue. It's more like a summary, or even something you'd find on the back of a book. A prologue should be a piece of story that comes before the
actual story, something that might provide a little more information and set the mood and explain the setting a little... Which you do here, yes, but it's so concise and explanatory that it doesn't really feel like a part of the story. It feels more like a straightforward summary. So I'd suggest expanding it a little and writing it a bit more in the same style as the rest of the story, or just rename it summary! :3
Leon stood at about 5'10", light brown complexion, short black hair, and light brown eyes. He was a well known trainer, winning countless battles and even winning various badges around Kanto. He went into his closet and pulled out a black t-shirt, blue jeans, and black tennis shoes and slipped everything on.
This is totally okay when writing posts in the Roleplay Corner here on PC, where people often want straightforward explanations to be able to refer well to the character when it's their turn to write. But in a fictional story that you write on your own, I'd say you should only describe looks and clothes and such this closely if it's
significant for our understanding of the character in some way.
For example, if you write about an old man with no teeth or hair and eyes narrow like lines, it's probably okay to describe him like that. Because those things are things you'd think about the moment you saw him. With your trainer Leon though, there's not really a memorable or very significant look about him, or at least not from what I've picked up. So perhaps you could try to
show rather than tell here. Maybe he could look himself in the mirror and pull a hand through his black hair and reflect for a moment on how his brown eyes matched his complexion? Rather than just have the narrator state what he looks like, as if a list was read out loud.
totally learned this from the moderator earlier
Also, I noticed that Leon doesn't seem to pack anything. He receives a letter and a little while later, he just takes off. Had he received the letter earlier and already packed without telling his parents, or did the letter state that he didn't need to bring any belongings beside his pokémon? Just details but it affects how believable the story is :3
Other than that, I like the way you write and like the premise. A war with pokémon that forces young people to join in? This has me intrigued. Hope you'll write more soon!