form my old rhyme book...PG-14 i guess =3

Started by <[HaZaRdOuS_EnIgMa]> February 28th, 2005 1:50 PM
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Age 34
Airyglyph
Seen March 9th, 2005
Posted March 4th, 2005
168 posts
18.4 Years
i'll post my more serious poems here:

Purgatorio
I trudge through the dark, i'll never see your face
No matter how hard i try, i'll never see that place.
Valhalla, Elysian Fields, Heaven, i'll never reach
Because I don't agree with what you preach.
A noble pagan, a learned one
Who will never see the sun
I want to be free, to move on, to go,
But i'm trapped here in Purgatorio...
*name changed to ~\Ethereal_Knight/~
Seen September 28th, 2009
Posted September 28th, 2009
2,830 posts
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Ooh! Me likes! >=3 Purgatorio means Purgatory, right? The place between Heaven and hell? xD;; Yeah it is.

I think you are basically saying you will be stuck there forever because you don't agree with teachings of certain religions.. That's probably only scratching the surface though ^^-;

Great job on this poem! No rating though. xD;; I don't rate poems. Good job anyways, Matt-kun! Keep it up. ~origin
i love you. </3
Age 37
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South of Heaven, East of Hell, just past Gone Mad Boulevard
Seen July 5th, 2015
Posted August 18th, 2010
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0.o I so love this poem! Speaks the truth. Guess you and I'll be stuck there since I also don't agree with Christian teachings, that's why I converted to Wicca. But anyway I totally loved the poem, short but deep ^_^
.~Proud Ashaholic~.
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