something untitled

Started by Eliana March 2nd, 2005 6:56 PM
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Eliana

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Omg Paige I love it!!! ^_____^ you put so much detail into it!!! it needs a name XD
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That was really good Hotaru ^^, its a nice love type poem that oyu put alot of effort into (I think XD).

I don't like to critize any type of poetry related to "love", because thats something that really comes from inside and I don't feel right saying wheather or not its good or not because of the diffrent views based on it, especially the person who wrote it. But let me say you really did a good job on it, the only thing that could be fixed though is puncuation after each stanza like capital letters and periods ^^'.
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