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The rules of the section say that chapters can't be short, especially when the writing can be longer. Your story should have quite a bit more description to it, letting the reader know what's going on and why.
You have a story about a Sceptile in control of a group of wild Treecko, and I guess they get invaded by the lone Hoppip? What's happening in your story isn't completely clear. When writing, you should make sure that what you're trying to get across to the readers is clear enough to not have any confusion. I had to think a little about what you wrote to realize that the Hoppip was invading the land of evil Treecko for...some reason.
How did this Hoppip know about the evil Sceptile? They're regions apart, and Hoppip isn't in contact with anyone to hear about evil Sceptile. How is Sceptile even evil? You say that he is, but you haven't shown it to the reader. Instead of saying "Sceptile was evil!", show it by having him commit evil acts. Does he hoard food from his subjects? Put his subjects into slavery?
You also should add more description to what happens to the Hoppip. It's such an important event in his life, changing it completely and giving him the goal that's the focus of your story. That event where the humans come to kill Hoppip's family should be more detailed.
Adding in all these details will not only help your chapter reach the requirement set by FF&W's rules, but also clear up confusion in your story and make it read better. Rushing through important details about the plot, characters, and world just leave your readers confused and frustrated, which isn't a good thing.
Also, this story has quite a bit of grammar errors. Random capitalization, missing needed capitalization, and bits of punctuation in the wrong spot (or missing from the right spots) only made this more confusing to read.
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