An elaborate loss for words

Started by xDaRK_SuiKuNx March 7th, 2005 7:58 PM
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the nexus of oblivion
Seen April 25th, 2007
Posted March 26th, 2007
188 posts
18.2 Years
I've been thinking really hard lately...
Losing sleep...
Over and over, I see you in my dreams.
Visible, yet transparent like a ghost...
Ethereal like an angel, clothed in the moon and stars...
You come to me as clearly as you do now,
Only-something is different about you...
Under the surface, when i'm with you, I-I feel warm...
Something I haven't felt before, at least I don't recall...
Outside the realm of what i know....I feel kind of enchanted
Maybe it's-no, not me. I can't be in lo-
Under your spell, I'm seeing things slightly different...
Could it be I finally found that special someone?
Hold me here-I like how this feels. You have me at loss for words.



I'll make this dream team a reality.

Master Chief

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Age 32
Seen March 15th, 2005
Posted March 15th, 2005
54 posts
18.2 Years
Hey pretty cool man. Amazing how the begining letters make "I love you so much"
Very creative. Nice work btw.
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Age 29
Non-binary
New South Wales, Australia
Seen December 3rd, 2022
Posted October 5th, 2016
14,976 posts
18.7 Years
Wow, an acrostic... such great use of words, Matt, I love this one ^^ I love how the person narrating the poem feels disbelieving that they are in love ^^
PON PON WAY WAY WAY

あの交差点で皆がもしスキップをして もしあの町の真中でてを繋いで空を見上げたら

Natsuki

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Age 33
Female
Minnesota
Seen July 16th, 2015
Posted March 22nd, 2012
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18.2 Years
Weeeeeeee, another wonderful poem Mattie! ^o^ I like the style you used too. It's all full of acrossticness, it's very cute. <3<3 Well, I see nothing wrong with it, everything looks wonderful! ^o^ Keep up the great poem-writing Mattie. 8D

~Kelsey