Showcase Aethel Designs

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Arylett Charnoa

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Aethel Designs

In which I show you things that I have drawn with my bare hands. (No vectors, everything created by me from scratch)


Pokemon



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Adamini and Luthan (Fakemon) Super Sketchy
These are my fiance if he had a Pokemon species revolving around him! They're wearing glasses, that's not part of the actual body. Quite fond of these two. Think the last one in particular is a master of awesome. Especially since I drew him with very little reference. This design will also double (if altered a bit) as the Valstaen form of him. (From my original Aelita series, a race of anthro animals that inhabit the majority of the world) (1800x1000, LARGE. Downscaled. Click for full size.)

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Charita and Aethea (Fakemon) Super Sketchy
This is me as my own Pokemon species. Wearing glasses, not part of the body. Fond of this one, but a little less so because I didn't try as hard to replicate my own anatomy. (Needs to be less skinny.) It'll be fixed up later because I really like the picture anyway though. The pre-evolution looks like a cute Carbuncle fox rabbit. And the evolution gives off a very graceful Psychic/Fairyishness to it. Will double as my Valstaen form. (1500x1000, LARGE. Downscaled. Click for full size.)

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Arylett Charnoa (Braixen)
My new Pokesona and a much better rendering of it. It's the companion to Lunaris Admantine (Lucario) and is much smaller due to being drawn to scale.

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Lunaris Adamantine (Lucario)
My fiance's new Pokesona. Made for a roleplay I plan on creating here at some point. (1532x1091, SEMI-LARGE. Downscaled. Click for full size.)

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Mega Unown
Something inspired by the Psychic club. My take on what Mega Unown could be. Not my best work, rushed. (1694x1755, SEMI-LARGE. Downscaled. Click for full size.)

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Willful Esper and Skillful Aeon
Little buttons I made for my usertitle and Lunaris Adamantine's.

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Arylett Braixen (WIP)
I sure am self-centered. But here is me as a Braixen! I'm working on a completely new picture, so it won't be colored. Consider this a draft. This is my new Pokesona.

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Old Pokesonas
Mine is the Flareon, my boyfriend's is the Luxio. Outdated, our Pokesonas have been changed. (1900x1240, LARGE. Downscaled. Click for full size.)

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Chespin
An experiment in a new style. Not one of my favorites.

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Anna Salska
My human OC in some Pokemon RPs (2011)

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Aelita (My Original Series)



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Luthera
You might recognize this from the Lucario I posted. It makes me think of freedom, a very liberating symbol. This is Lunaris' symbol, and the one that started this whole redesigning thing. It has a crescent moon shape that also represents a bow and arrow, a crystalline spire which is the top of a spear/sword, and claws on the bottom to give it a more animalistic feel as we both have animal themes. It makes me think a lot of justice as well as freedom. I'm glad I managed to represent that feeling of action more, by giving it straight lines:

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Aethel
This is the redesign of a symbol that has been around for nearly ten years. I first designed it when I was 13 and haven't changed it much. But it's very drastic and draws on a more flowery spiritual theme. (The old version can be seen in the first, spoilered picture up there) It has a more wavy, swirly design to symbolize an aspect of me I am very identified with - my curly hair. There is also a fox head around the crystal, because foxes are creatures I symbolize myself with. Overall, it has a very biological feel to it, like a living creature:

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Aelita Crystal
This is a symbol used to symbolize many things. (Like a Xenosaga roleplay of mine) Mostly, my original Aelita series. It's gone through countless revisions until I've finally determined this design for it... only to be outdated again! Working on another redesign.

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Xeno



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God Slayer
This is Shulk of Xenoblade, made to match my Shion of Xenosaga for Lunaris Adamantine. (1932x1790, LARGE. Downscaled. Click for full size.)

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God Slayer Banner
Banner version of above.

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Aster Maiden
Made as a doodle, then turned awesome. It is Shion Uzuki of Xenosaga. (1932x1790, LARGE. Downscaled. Click for full size.)

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Aster Maiden Banner
Banner version of the above.

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Who I Am
That is Elly Van Houten (to the left from Xenogears) and myself. (to the right, as a Valstaen, a creature I created) This picture's purpose was originally to depict important parts of myself. Took forever due to involved shading and generally involved anatomy practice. I know it's far from perfect though. (3000x2310, VERY LARGE. Downscaled. Click for full size.)

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Arylett Charnoa (WIP)
An OC based heavily on myself for my Xenosaga roleplay/original Aelita series. I have been working on this for quite some time, but it's kind of on hiatus right now due to me getting sick of it.

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Misc



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Tharja
Fire Emblem
This was a commission I did of a Fire Emblem character. Not actually a fan of the series, so I have no idea about anything of her! It has a few flaws, but it's still some fine work:

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Dream of A Sorceress
My Little Pony
A picture of my old ponysona with a nightly backscape. (1900x1240, LARGE. Downscaled. Click for full size.)

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Changelog





Fairy

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Seen January 27th, 2023
Posted January 6th, 2023
First off, it's amazing how practical your work is. I feel like people could really use your art in incredible displays with relative ease. I can tell you made this for people to really enjoy, and it shows. Your lines are so clean in your MLP pieces, I'm surprised you made them by hand.

I especially like this one. The mood and atmosphere of the entire piece is so calming and reads well with your character. I admit, I'm not much of a MLP fan, but I do know that your character is very unique, and you've done a lot to make it very original and beautiful. How long have you been developing the character? And is that a hibiscus flower? Awesome. <3

You've done a lot to improve over the time. Keep it up, you're going great work here. :)
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Arylett Charnoa

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First off, it's amazing how practical your work is. I feel like people could really use your art in incredible displays with relative ease. I can tell you made this for people to really enjoy, and it shows. Your lines are so clean in your MLP pieces, I'm surprised you made them by hand.

I especially like this one. The mood and atmosphere of the entire piece is so calming and reads well with your character. I admit, I'm not much of a MLP fan, but I do know that your character is very unique, and you've done a lot to make it very original and beautiful. How long have you been developing the character? And is that a hibiscus flower? Awesome. <3

You've done a lot to improve over the time. Keep it up, you're going great work here. :)
Thank you. :3 I'd honestly rather people not use my art in derivative works except myself, but I do like it when people enjoy it. The lines themselves took me years of practice to master. It just happens naturally over time when you're trying to emulate a vector and don't actually care to learn the process. (I tried, find it very tedious)

I'm glad I've managed to portray it through the picture. I wanted to show magic through my picture, my character doing what she is most comfortable with. I've been developing this character for many years, actually. But she's based on myself and I've been trying to catch the artistic side of my personality through her. Her thing is making light shows and displaying it for all to enjoy. Also, the flower isn't anything specific, but I did base it on hibiscus.

Thanks though again for your kind and thoughtful comment! I'm still trying to get better and I doubt I'll ever stop. Art's my passion.

Wow, I really like your style! All of these are very well drawn. The Old Pokesonas piece is my favorite, keep up the great work and I'll make sure to keep up with this gallery.
Thank you too! I quite like that one myself even if it's a bit old. I'm planning on remaking that one with our new Pokesonas. So keep an eye out for that.

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your artwork is adorable. i love how you have different styles. your vectoring for the mlp stuff is amazing. i could totally see the circle ones could be wallpapers/backgrounds.
i would definitely look at practicing drawing people. the way the feet/shoes are drawing look funny, like she's on her tippy toes.
can't wait to see more.

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Arylett Charnoa

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your artwork is adorable. i love how you have different styles. your vectoring for the mlp stuff is amazing. i could totally see the circle ones could be wallpapers/backgrounds.
i would definitely look at practicing drawing people. the way the feet/shoes are drawing look funny, like she's on her tippy toes.
can't wait to see more.
Thank you! Although it's NOT vectors. I actually hand-drew those. :P

I haven't really drawn a human since 2011, and that picture is really rather old. I've doubtless improved since then, but they still aren't my strong suit. I'll work on them when I have more time to get away from pony stuff. Feet, you are the bane of my existence. @[email protected]

Arylett Charnoa

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We have been dead for a very long time. And that must be fixed:

Aelita Crystal - This is a symbol used to symbolize many things. Mostly, my original Aelita series. It's gone through countless revisions until I've finally determined this design for it:


Who I Am - That is Elly Van Houten (to the left from Xenogears) and myself. (to the right, as a Valstaen, a creature I created) This picture's purpose was originally to depict important parts of myself. Took forever due to involved shading and generally involved anatomy practice. I know it's far from perfect though:

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Arylett Charnoa (WIP) - This is an OC based heavily on myself for my Xenosaga roleplay/original Aelita series. I have been working on this for quite some time and am finally about to start outlining/coloring. More practice on my humans, whoo! So here we go:

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And soon, we will triumphantly rise again!

Arylett Braixen WIP - I sure am self-centered. But here is me as a Braixen! It will be colored eventually. This is my Pokesona.

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Tharja - This was a commission I did of a Fire Emblem character. Not actually a fan of the series, so I have no idea about anything of her! It has a few flaws, but it's still some fine work:

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Oh, oh, oh! This is something that was inspired by the Psychic Pokemon club here. It was done quickly, so it doesn't have much finesse and is really uneven and stuff. And I was also practicing on clipping layers in Photoshop, which I just learned was a thing I can do. But I'll show it anyways because I'm proud of the beginning of a new technique and the idea behind this:

Mega Unown

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Whew! Tough crowd, eh? Well, no worries. I'll keep going until I win ya over.

Some Xenosaga nonsense here. You may recognize it as my current avatar:

Aster Maiden

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And here's the banner as well, for when I decide to change it in the future:


Also, these are two little buttons I made:



Fairy

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I am in love with those buttons and I want one so, so bad. :X Those are the cutest things ever omg.
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Arylett Charnoa

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Thank you. I am glad you like them. :3

And we've got some Pokemon stuff here. This is my fiance's Pokesona. He's on this forum as Lunaris Adamantine.

Here we go:

Lunaris Adamantine (Lucario)

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(He'll probably be using it for a roleplay I'm planning to make here. :3)

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I cant see the 1st photo XD ..But i know its nice and good portrait :) . The other photo, i can see hmm.. its nice too and clearly. Not to much heavy colors its shiny colors haha . Keep it up and more artwork you made up~ :)
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Arylett Charnoa

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I cant see the 1st photo XD ..But i know its nice and good portrait :) . The other photo, i can see hmm.. its nice too and clearly. Not to much heavy colors its shiny colors haha . Keep it up and more artwork you made up~ :)
I thought I removed all of the links that led to nothing... ah well. Thanks for telling me! I removed that one too, and I'll just go ahead and repost it even though it's ridiculously outdated:

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Thank you for your appreciation as well, everyone. :3

But that's not all I've got! I've got some new stuff. Otherwise, wouldn't be posting here.

It's just some emblems that represent myself and my fiance Lunaris Adamantine:

Luthera - You might recognize this from the Lucario I posted. It makes me think of freedom, a very liberating symbol. This is Lunaris' symbol, and the one that started this whole redesigning thing. It has a crescent moon shape that also represents a bow and arrow, a crystalline spire which is the top of a spear/sword, and claws on the bottom to give it a more animalistic feel as we both have animal themes. It makes me think a lot of justice as well as freedom. I'm glad I managed to represent that feeling of action more, by giving it straight lines:


Aethel - This is the redesign of a symbol that has been around for nearly ten years. I first designed it when I was 13 and haven't changed it much. But it's very drastic and draws on a more flowery spiritual theme. (The old version can be seen in the first, spoilered picture up there) It has a more wavy, swirly design to symbolize an aspect of me I am very identified with - my curly hair. There is also a fox head around the crystal, because foxes are creatures I symbolize myself with. Overall, it has a very biological feel to it, like a living creature:

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I love how clean your art looks! Seriously, it's not vectors, but I'm sure it could pass for them! Care to share how one gets their lineart so smooth looking? ;-;

I think my two favs are the first and second pic. :) I don't really watch MLP, but I love how crispy and clean the picture looks. As for the second one, I love Flareon, so that one's pretty much a given lol. I especially like the style you did for the fur. :3

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Oh well no problem! About the photo you too show us, for me is amazing its that a regular colors ? or you mix something ? hehe :D . Nevermind. Haha nice artwork :)
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Arylett Charnoa

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I love how clean your art looks! Seriously, it's not vectors, but I'm sure it could pass for them! Care to share how one gets their lineart so smooth looking? ;-;

I think my two favs are the first and second pic. :) I don't really watch MLP, but I love how crispy and clean the picture looks. As for the second one, I love Flareon, so that one's pretty much a given lol. I especially like the style you did for the fur. :3
Cleanness is something I am very obsessed about. Actually, due to that, I really don't understand how other people manage to create such sketchy artwork. It's something I actually have to put effort in to do. :P

But there's no trick to getting such outlines. You just have to be crazy patient. That's all it takes. I just draw the outline like a normal person, and then I go through it and fix up every single pixel out of place. It's rather time-consuming. I've gotten faster at it, but it still typically takes half an hour to an hour. That's why I have to specify that it isn't vectors all the time though, because I always have a person who pops out of nowhere and says: "Nice vector!" And I don't want that association on me, because I am a person who wants people to know the things I do with my bare hands.

I'm glad you like them though! Hee, even though the Flareon is a rather old one, it's still one of my favorites as well for the coloring and textures.

Oh well no problem! About the photo you too show us, for me is amazing its that a regular colors ? or you mix something ? hehe :D . Nevermind. Haha nice artwork :)
I'm not sure what you mean by your question, but thank you once again for your compliments!

_____

So I went up to my first post a few days ago and I basically made a quick CSS layout for it and organized all the images. Now you can see everything I've posted up until now easily!

Now, there is a new piece here, and one I rather like.

Arylett Charnoa (Braixen) - This is my new pokesona and a much better rendering of it. It's the companion to that Lucario I posted earlier and is much smaller due to being drawn to scale.

Neko

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Cleanness is something I am very obsessed about. Actually, due to that, I really don't understand how other people manage to create such sketchy artwork. It's something I actually have to put effort in to do. :P

But there's no trick to getting such outlines. You just have to be crazy patient. That's all it takes. I just draw the outline like a normal person, and then I go through it and fix up every single pixel out of place. It's rather time-consuming. I've gotten faster at it, but it still typically takes half an hour to an hour. That's why I have to specify that it isn't vectors all the time though, because I always have a person who pops out of nowhere and says: "Nice vector!" And I don't want that association on me, because I am a person who wants people to know the things I do with my bare hands.

I'm glad you like them though! Hee, even though the Flareon is a rather old one, it's still one of my favorites as well for the coloring and textures.
Man, I so wish I could get mine that smooth though! XD When it comes time to do the outlining on my work, my hand seems to know and gets super shakey. I end up setting the stabilizer on Sai to something ridiculous like S-2 and just hope for the best. Even then though, I have to go back and fix the lineart. I know all too well the pay off for patience and spending that extra time going back and fixing all the little mistakes, and you artwork shows that you know too; it shows the amount of effort that was put into it.

As for sketchy drawings, I like them as well, but I guess it just depends on your style and preference in regards to how you feel about them. I find all different kinds of styles interesting in their own way. :)

Arylett Charnoa

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Man, I so wish I could get mine that smooth though! XD When it comes time to do the outlining on my work, my hand seems to know and gets super shakey. I end up setting the stabilizer on Sai to something ridiculous like S-2 and just hope for the best. Even then though, I have to go back and fix the lineart. I know all too well the pay off for patience and spending that extra time going back and fixing all the little mistakes, and you artwork shows that you know too; it shows the amount of effort that was put into it.

As for sketchy drawings, I like them as well, but I guess it just depends on your style and preference in regards to how you feel about them. I find all different kinds of styles interesting in their own way. :)
There's a stabilizer? Had no idea such a thing existed. Whew, have I been old fashioned. Don't know if it's in Photoshop, but it doesn't really matter so much. My lines come out less shaky the first time around in terms of stroke due to all of the practice I've had. Just takes time!

Oh, I can prefer either sketchy or not. I'm just saying that I literally am bad at being sketchy. Anything sketchy of mine ends up being a total mess or completely clean. There's no inbetween. And I'm saying I don't understand how people can get that sort of natural sketchiness going on. It's unnatural for me to do that due to my intensely strict clean up process.

Speaking of my version of sketchy, let's take a look real quick at two things I'll be coloring. I just doodled these up, and whilst there are quite a few issues I need to fix, I still like them:

Adamini and Luthan (Fakemon) Super Sketchy - These are my fiance if he had a Pokemon species revolving around him! They're wearing glasses, that's not part of the actual body. Quite fond of these two. Think the last one in particular is a master of awesome. Especially since I drew him with very little reference. This design will also double (if altered a bit) as the Valstaen form of him. (From my original Aelita series, a race of anthro animals that inhabit the majority of the world)

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Charita and Aethea (Fakemon) Super Sketchy - This is me as my own Pokemon species. Wearing glasses, not part of the body. Fond of this one, but a little less so because I didn't try as hard to replicate my own anatomy. (Needs to be less skinny.) It'll be fixed up later because I really like the picture anyway though. The pre-evolution looks like a cute Carbuncle fox rabbit. And the evolution gives off a very graceful Psychic/Fairyishness to it. Will double as my Valstaen form.

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Arylett Charnoa

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Here we have what I've been struggling to get motivation to finish for around ten or so days.

God Slayer - It's a big one. Click on the smaller version to get to the full-size. This is Shulk of Xenoblade, made to match my Shion of Xenosaga for Lunaris Adamantine.


God Slayer Banner - Speaking of which, here's the banner!

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I like it, there's great detail on the design, and the colours all fit well. I know nothing about xenoblade, so maybe it comes from the games, but I have a few quips about the clothing design and some other things. As far as I can see, the clothing from the "Is only there to look cool" syndrome. Of course the sword suffers from it, with all the holes, but cool swords are always a good thing. The leg things, though, what purpose do they serve? They're not identical and support the each leg differently, so I'm assuming it has something to do with the God Slayer having bad ankles? I find it also weird that his left trouserpipe has sharp things sticking out, and his left not. Maybe there is a very good story reason, and even if there is not, it not something wrong with the art, just something I was wondering about.

Then I have a small bit of commentary on his position, because with the way he's standing, it looks like he broke his right ankle, or at least badly twisted it. Depending on how he's standing, as I have a bit of trouble finding out because of his complicated (but quite cool) shorts design, Are the upper legs and his hips seen from a side perspective or slightly turned? Depending on that either his upper body or his legs should be turned something like 45 degrees.
Actually giving it a better look, I doubt that position is comfortable. It seems like you had some internal conflict in what of the design you wanted to showcase, and what would position he should be in. If his head were the basic position, his upper body would be in a 45 degree angle, his left leg in a 60, and his right leg in a 90 degree.
I think his left arm is a little too short, and should be extended a little. Especially because his left shoulder should be more visible too. The arm kinda looks dis-attached ones you notice it, it doesn't seem to be attached to any kind of shoulder.
The next thing may come down to my knowledge of the Xenoblade series, so sorry if I critique something that makes sense storywise, but, do the swords have weight? With the way he's running with it it seem like either he's superhumanly strong, or the sword incredibly light? The way he would hold it wouldn't make any sense if the sword had weight and he had the strengt of a human. His hand doesn't seem to grip the sword that well, either. There seems to be a lot of space around the hilt. Did you draw the sword and the character seperate? It also has a slight curve where the hilt is. While the hilt points down, the sword curves up from that point. The sword, as I said earlier already, looks really cool though.
I like the japanese signs, but the rest of the background seems a bit rushed. The drawing that is supposed to match this one has a wonderful background, and these random lines and squibles seem not to fit very well.

I like the design overall, don't get me wrong, I just tried to be thorough with the critique because you seem to be at a point where you know most of the basics, and just need get the hang of some other things, so I really hope this is helpful with picking out the errors and improving your drawing skill. I'm sorry if some parts don't make sense, or if I just straight up forgot words and letters, I'm on a lot of meds right now, and it is noticeable in my writing. If I need to expand on something, or if I was too cryptical, just say so, and I'll try to explain better, haha.

Arylett Charnoa

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Age 31
Female
Seen January 5th, 2023
Posted October 18th, 2017
1,130 posts
9.2 Years
I like it, there's great detail on the design, and the colours all fit well. I know nothing about xenoblade, so maybe it comes from the games, but I have a few quips about the clothing design and some other things. As far as I can see, the clothing from the "Is only there to look cool" syndrome. Of course the sword suffers from it, with all the holes, but cool swords are always a good thing. The leg things, though, what purpose do they serve? They're not identical and support the each leg differently, so I'm assuming it has something to do with the God Slayer having bad ankles? I find it also weird that his left trouserpipe has sharp things sticking out, and his left not. Maybe there is a very good story reason, and even if there is not, it not something wrong with the art, just something I was wondering about.

Then I have a small bit of commentary on his position, because with the way he's standing, it looks like he broke his right ankle, or at least badly twisted it. Depending on how he's standing, as I have a bit of trouble finding out because of his complicated (but quite cool) shorts design, Are the upper legs and his hips seen from a side perspective or slightly turned? Depending on that either his upper body or his legs should be turned something like 45 degrees.
Actually giving it a better look, I doubt that position is comfortable. It seems like you had some internal conflict in what of the design you wanted to showcase, and what would position he should be in. If his head were the basic position, his upper body would be in a 45 degree angle, his left leg in a 60, and his right leg in a 90 degree.
I think his left arm is a little too short, and should be extended a little. Especially because his left shoulder should be more visible too. The arm kinda looks dis-attached ones you notice it, it doesn't seem to be attached to any kind of shoulder.
The next thing may come down to my knowledge of the Xenoblade series, so sorry if I critique something that makes sense storywise, but, do the swords have weight? With the way he's running with it it seem like either he's superhumanly strong, or the sword incredibly light? The way he would hold it wouldn't make any sense if the sword had weight and he had the strengt of a human. His hand doesn't seem to grip the sword that well, either. There seems to be a lot of space around the hilt. Did you draw the sword and the character seperate? It also has a slight curve where the hilt is. While the hilt points down, the sword curves up from that point. The sword, as I said earlier already, looks really cool though.
I like the japanese signs, but the rest of the background seems a bit rushed. The drawing that is supposed to match this one has a wonderful background, and these random lines and squibles seem not to fit very well.

I like the design overall, don't get me wrong, I just tried to be thorough with the critique because you seem to be at a point where you know most of the basics, and just need get the hang of some other things, so I really hope this is helpful with picking out the errors and improving your drawing skill. I'm sorry if some parts don't make sense, or if I just straight up forgot words and letters, I'm on a lot of meds right now, and it is noticeable in my writing. If I need to expand on something, or if I was too cryptical, just say so, and I'll try to explain better, haha.
I agree with you 100% on the clothing design. But that bit of criticism is lost on me, as I am not the original designer. That's why it took me so long to draw this is because I absolutely hate the designs of Xenoblade. I was only being as accurate as I could to the actual design. Next time, I'll probably do my own version of the outfit that is much simpler.

I also did not design the sword, by the way. That's from the game. And it is also outrageously huge in-game. And actually, it grows larger when he attacks with it. This incarnation of it is made of some kind of light energy though, so I assume that it doesn't weigh very much. But hey, most video games of this kind disregard physics anyway, so I don't think it really matters.

Honestly, I don't actually understand what you're saying to fix the angles. Describing things in terms of angles with numbers like that is really confusing for me and I doubt there's any way you could word it that it would make sense without the use of a picture. But I am aware that there's something wrong with his leg, the perspective, and the angles. (For instance, I'm aware that by the angle he's holding the sword, we should be looking at its edge if he intends to slash any Gods with it. But I didn't know how to portray that without making the sword unrecognizable, so I left it intact.) It was something I was aware of as I was drawing him, but it would've taken me much longer to figure out how to fix it, so I left it intact. I'm not too good with the perspective still. This pose was ultimately an experiment though, and I'm working on bettering myself with more dynamic poses that I'm not used to in the future by attempting them in the first place. So basically, I'll keep doing it over and over again until I crack the secret. After this image, I'm sure the next one will have improvements.

The arm wasn't something I noticed, however, so I'll work on that for the next one as well.

I drew the sword at the same time as Shulk. It's another weakness I'm already aware of - the fact that it's difficult for me to draw people holding things/interacting with them without it looking weirdly out of place. Also, I really should've used straighter lines. I'm not used to drawing objects like that, so I tend to just use my natural hand and not fix up the little curvatures. Especially something that is supposed to be quickly done like this. But I'll try to make myself use them next time, even though I have an aversion to straight lines. ><

The background was rushed, yes. I wanted to finish this picture and move on to the next one already, as it was something I was stuck on for weeks. My new philosophy is to move on if something can't be fixed, and get better on the next one rather than fixing up the same old thing over and over again. (Which results in my art taking months to produce and also kills morale.) For what it's worth, even if it's scribbled and hurried, I kind of like it myself. But it isn't my favorite and I've done better in the past. Also, the other drawing (I presume you're speaking of Aster Shion) actually had its background done in about the same amount of time. It's just I thought about it a bit more, so hence the perceived increase in quality.

All in all, I thank you for taking the time to critique me and actually response here. Your well thought-out comment is appreciated.

Ice

Seen October 16th, 2022
Posted February 3rd, 2020
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8.8 Years
Well that explains the design, haha. It looks so... JRPG in that picture, haha.

I tried to explain the angles and positions a bit better with this circle I made in paint.



I hope it speaks for itself. With normal humans, it's incredibly uncomfortable and for some body parts even impossible to turn so far away from the torso. I suggest taking your boyfriend as a model next time, haha, or searching for an image in which someone, drawing or not, has a similar position as to what you try to draw.