Lie to Me

Started by FaerieEsqueThing March 9th, 2005 2:35 PM
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Age 32
Arlington. Which one? D:
Seen January 2nd, 2011
Posted August 24th, 2009
295 posts
18.4 Years
I actually wrote a poem that is half-way NOT SAD!! Okay it is kinda sad...but...it's uber-long! Um, some words might kinda blocked out...PM me for the link to the original version.

I know you don't want me now
I looked up and asked god how
I know that you hate me, that you tire
Of this *****, this whore, this liar

Despite whatever I've said, it's not true
For you see, I never really stopped loving you
Lie to me, tell me you love me forever
Your touch was comfort, it was my cover

Please, be the old person that I knew
Hold me, and tell me you love me too
Say you're sorry, fix it until it's mended
It wasn't misconstrue, it was all what god intended

I'm sick, I may hurt like this forever
Just stay by me until I get better
Lie to me, tell me I'm still sane
I do not care whether I have fame

You will never return to me, this I know
I'm too weak to hate you, despite what I show
I bleed for you, I breathe for you
Maybe even died you, I don't know what's true

Perhaps I already died, I'm in heaven
Just wait, don't leave me till I get better
Through all my fruitless attempts to get you back
You won't come for something I lack

Lie to me, tell me I'll get better
I might be sick, so sick forever
Lie to me now, block out whatever I've seen
Awaken me, awaken my soul, my senses so keen

Save me, before I die
Tell me what I want to hear, tell me the lie
Beautiful lies, they keep me alive, breathing
The spirits, my bandages, they stop my bleeding

Lie to me, lie to me, lie to me
So I can live, so may breathe
And breathe, so I can love again
I know now you loved me then

Beautiful lies, without them I can't breathe
I bleed, without lies, I can't see
Lie to me, I want it all to make sense so I can sore
Lie or I breathe, breathe, breathe no more

Lie to me, those beautiful lies
Part the clouds, so I can see the skies
Call out my name, ask god to make me better
Please, I beg you, or I may be sick forever

We all have changed, but I'm still the same
Inside, I never regret when you came
Be yourself again, save me from death
Or will you forget me, turn yourself deaf?

We can never be again, though I miss you
I have lost all sense of what is true
But I do not wish to know, for beautiful lies
Through every shout, all those anguished sighs

Please, god, make it okay
Turn back time, before I can say
"I hate you" and tear us apart
Back to the beginning, a fresh start

You come to visit me in my sleep, the screams
My fear, your lust, too real to be dreams
Leave me, leave me to wither and die
I should not force you to lie

But once more, lie to me, lie
Tell me a beautiful lie, then say goodbye
I close my eyes, prepare for eternal sleep
Shh, leave me, don't say a peep

Though I've come so far, I'm done
I'm flickering, fading, with the sun
And I'm dying, I'm soring, I'm bleeding
Now I just have to till I stop breathing

Beautiful lies, they are my killer and life
I fade out in the silence of the night
I'm leaving now, so I can sore
into heaven, for we are together no more

Together no more.
One does not simply POKEMON into Mordor...




Natsuki

.bluefang.

Age 33
Female
Minnesota
Seen July 16th, 2015
Posted March 22nd, 2012
5,046 posts
18.2 Years
Wow, this poem is yet another masterpiece, Ashlein. ^____^ From what I can percieve, this poem is saying how often people only listen to what they want to hear.

The part that says "Lie to me, tell me you love me." is explaining my point. For you know that love is true, for you've felt it. But when that moment comes when you know your heart is preparing to break, you give one last stretch of hope and beg for love.

You fall on your knees, begging and hoping for your love you have for another to keep on going. I have felt this many times. I'd be perfectly happy with someone, but then I come to realize that there wasn't really "love" between us. I want to say it's over, but something compels me to at least try and hold on, until with one final shove I break.

Great work yet again Ashlein. ^^ Keep it up! ^.~

~Kelsey