Season of the Star

Started by Super Torchic March 11th, 2005 7:28 AM
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Super Torchic

HEY!!!WHO AT MY SOCKS!!!

Age 29
...gee...somewhere in the solar system...
Seen September 22nd, 2005
Posted July 15th, 2005
928 posts
18.9 Years
Authors note^^: hey this is a FF that I wrote and gonna post its not that good but >> oh ignore the title I can't think of a better one so yaaaaXD You'll know why I put the title as this later^^I'm not exactly you know*points to age* ya....
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hmm??? Where am I??? Who are you.wait I rememberbut why am I here??? Those black horns on your capeWHAT!!!It cant be.AHHHH!!!SOMEONE HELP ME!!! A scream of pain rang through out the quiet country side but it was midnight no one noticed that one girl is missing from the nearby village, Fire clan.
Hey, Iris, remember that girl you knew from fire clan???
Safire??? Ya what about her
Shes missing a girl with hazel eyes and light brown hair said and stifled a cry. Iris a girl from the village Rainbow clan and Silver from Thunder clan was two of the special people that got selected to possess powers of the elements. Safire was one of them too. But now the number is down to five because six of them are either not found or gone to the evil side.
Silver, we have to find the rest of the people, I know were they are but I cant get there fast enough youre gonna have to use a flying type
Hey stupid head none of us have a flying type
But Safire does,
She did she never told anyone, Angel was her joy and pride
Doesnt she keep with her?
No its with Selena
BUT SHES AT LEAST A HUNDRED MILES AWAY FROM US!!! Silver screamed and sweatdroped. Selena was a girl from Wind Clan although her real name is Selenis, she preferred Selena.
Silver dropped her back pack on the ground and took out two tickets, on the blue tickets that was wrinkled with time it said, The Altaria Express, Well take you to the ends of the world
Yep, one way tickets to anywhere Silver grinned and remembered back then before everything started before her future self came to her and gave her the marble, of course Safire had a fit about risking her life to do something she didnt want to but she calmed downover time. They went to the nearest Altaria Express stop, Fire Clan. Fire Clan was one of the biggest villages in the ten mile radius. Of Course its also the central of business technology, travel, and shopping which is something Iris cant resist to do. The Altaria express was on the outskirts of the town being it having a lot of flying pokemon and what not.
Silver!!!
Masco Silver yelled smiling Its wonderful to see you again, when did you start working here
ummmmYesterday Masco a boy with natural gray hair and brown eyes and a dazzling smile said.
Going to wind clan
Yep wind clan the barrenness place in the world There is not a stop there but there is one close to it atShadow Clan
Shadow Clan, I hope Sombra isnt there Sombra was the boy who received the power of the shadows. His powers can only be beat by Iris and Safire but since Safire isnt here theyll have to avoid shadow clan

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Authors note: my gosh I cant spell today.. I know the ciries aren't real but hey I don't like writing with real places^^;I know this is short but hey its the intro ^^; it can be chapter one I guess XD c yall next time.
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thankys!!!

Hi, I was once Fireflameryu, but I'm now Super Torchic^^;;; May you RIP FFR!

Oh screw this-_-; I'll Be FFR again on christmas...if I remeber><!!!!!

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Seen March 2nd, 2014
Posted December 28th, 2012
135 posts
18.2 Years
It seems interesting, but its very hard to read. You shuold write with proper grammar and put spaces between your paragraphs. Don't try to rush the story to fast either. I suggest you write your story in a word proccesor because it looks like you wrote in the reply box. its kind of confusing introducing all those clans and charachters at once. You should spend some time describing them more

Super Torchic

HEY!!!WHO AT MY SOCKS!!!

Age 29
...gee...somewhere in the solar system...
Seen September 22nd, 2005
Posted July 15th, 2005
928 posts
18.9 Years
I wrote it in Microsoft word..>> I guess it broke(me added to much custom words to itO_O)
Visit my website at:Chickamiru Fourms




thankys!!!

Hi, I was once Fireflameryu, but I'm now Super Torchic^^;;; May you RIP FFR!

Oh screw this-_-; I'll Be FFR again on christmas...if I remeber><!!!!!

I support Ebil Shipping:P