The Bite of Betrayal

Started by EvIL_CAjUN_CHIkIN March 11th, 2005 5:55 PM
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Age 31
where it's always sunny when I feel it should be dark... dam florida
Seen May 29th, 2009
Posted May 3rd, 2006
759 posts
18.4 Years
It's a story....

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I walked amongst one of the so called 'dammed'. She was exactly the oppisite of that, though. To me, she was blessed. You ask me why she is called 'one of the dammed'? She is a vampire. Yes, a vampire whose mind could go from good to bad in a millisecond. And one night, it did. This is my story. But first, you need her point of view.

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Her story

As I was walking home, I spotted one of my brothers walking next to a human I knew he didn't know. He was about to attack, I could tell. Before I could reach them, his fangs were knee deep into his chest, sucking the very life out of him. I eventually caught up to him and asked the occasion, seeing as how we had always went to the slaughterhouse to feed together. He simply explained to me:

"We could rule them, you know."

"I know, but why waste our talent?"

"Because they could be the ones who feed off of our stock, hiding in the shadows, living beneath us!"

He had a since of evil red in his eyes. "But if we do, what will become of those who do not wish to cooperate?"

"Exactly what should become of them: We shall gather up all of our brothers and sisters and go feed until every last one of them has become one of us, or even better, dead."

"What if we fail, there is a lot to consider."

"We will not. Do not talk such nonsense!"

"But my friends, some of them are humans, you will not spare them, it is a bad idea!"

"You will be punished for your insolence! Later. There is more to feed on. You are coming with me to watch me feed on your bestest friend. Or better yet, I'll let you have the honor."

"I will not."

He grabbed my arm and pulled me close to him. I was forced to look in his eyes and become lost in a trance that would scar me for life.

"You will.", he said.

"Of course."

We departed and headed toward where my friend was walking, a killing I was to do in my very near future.

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My story.

I walked in the park, not knowing what was to become of me, nor a care in the world did as long as I was living a happy life. It was dark and cold. Suddenly I was surprised.

"Hello.", my best friend had just sneaked up on me, using her ability to make that more scary, seeing as how she is a vampire.

"Hey! What are you up to this fine evening?"

"I was just getting ready to feed, actually."

"That's cool, I was just taking a walk in the park. Would you like to--", I was interrupted almost instantly.

"No, you see, I did not specify who I was going to feed on tonight. And I think you ought to know."

"Wh-why?", I stuttered.

"Because tonight, I am having a craving for sweet blood, and you look like a person who would have it."

I could see something was wrong in her eyes and knew she wasn't being herself.
"What's wrong with you?"

"Nothing, I have just realized how much better the world would be if we ruled you, and NOT the other way around, how it is now."

"Stop, this isn't funny."

"Nor is it to me, I haven't had sweet blood touch my lips in so long, it seems lik ages ago."

"Please, snap out of--", Again, I was interrupted by the grabbing of MY arm and pulled towards her. She looked into my eyes, as I did hers. I couldn't pull away.

All of the sudden, I didn't know what was happening, except I could feel a sharp pain going throughout my body, as if I were in shock. I felt nothing but it, and thought nothing but it, except all about how my life would be changed forever.

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Now, I am one of the 'so called dammed'. And I dream of only to become one of living again. Instead of being evil, or being tranced into evil, I try to stop it, for not only our lives' sakes, but the humans' too.


mah name tis bee cheyenne.


wewt.


ahm back.


;DD


Age 31
where it's always sunny when I feel it should be dark... dam florida
Seen May 29th, 2009
Posted May 3rd, 2006
759 posts
18.4 Years
Thanks! I was just bored so I thought, 'Hey! why not write a story?' and it turned out pretty good. Everyone is always saying to space out my poems to make them look longer, so I kinda did that with this. It really isn't a long story. I could probably make and RP about this.....

~Sawrah~:)


mah name tis bee cheyenne.


wewt.


ahm back.


;DD


Natsuki

.bluefang.

Age 33
Female
Minnesota
Seen July 16th, 2015
Posted March 22nd, 2012
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18.2 Years
Fweeeeeeeeeee! ^____^ I really liked this one Sawrah! ^^ Is this a one-shot? o.O No matter, I still found it to be a very good read. ^_____^ This one kind of corrolates with WG's "She Wolf" so I really enjoyed it. <3 Overall nice work Sawrah! ^.~ I give it a thumbs up. ^^

~Kelsey