Pokemon : DreamStarMail

Hi! I've stop making pokemon sunshine because i've use grapchics , script , maps other PPL.
So i am start making Pokemon DreamStarMail.
I've use new graphics and other.i am make all stuff by me.
so i've made title.(thanks @ Mushrino For help in logo)

So plz Comments :)

Thanks Matt;)

I don't think that there's any harm in using other people's graphics and resources if you've got their permission. Anyway, good luck with this game. Tell me if you've closed the pokemon sun project completely.

The title screen needs a little tweaking.

>Pok?mon needs to be a bit bigger to emphasize that that is a pokemon game.
> Could add more pokemon to make it look cool

That's my opinion.
Anyway, good luck.

Title Looks A Little Dangerous, Might Scare Some One.
(No Offense, I Suggest You Get Someone To make A Title.)

Other Than That Good Luck, Oh & Whats The Dream Star Mail?
(Is It A Special Item?)

Ash_Ketchum_From_Pallet said:

Title Looks A Little Dangerous, Might Scare Some One.
(No Offense, I Suggest You Get Someone To make A Title.)

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That is a peculiar comment to make :) The title screen looks decent, I'd suggest removing the trainer and Pokemon and adding more stars because they look cool.

phoenix316 said:

That is a peculiar comment to make :) The title screen looks decent, I'd suggest removing the trainer and Pokemon and adding more stars because they look cool.

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So Phoenix i add more stars.
How you think about this , now?

Thanks Matt;)

I suggest that you change the words "star" and "mail" The added pokemon make the screen look a bit squashed, but then again, that's just me.

And do i see a greenish background behind Pokemon? Is it meant to be like that?

My main suggestion would be to lose the Pokemon from the title screen. I think title screens lose their 'professionalism' when people add sprites to it. The color behind the Pokemon logo is slightly off too.

Sorry for not update.
i've school :)
about title: sorry but i like it :P
i am before mapping work on the cms , cbs and grapchics.
i post tommorow new character and some of cms and cbs :)

Thanks Matt;)

I had some spare time so I made a title screen for you matt.

Hmmm...
Before i use them , how all think about this?

Thanks Matt;)

Hey, I think you should use it.
But that's just me.

i ts very good i think you could use it

Hmmmmm... Breakout ... this good :)
but see in my first post:

Matt said:

i am make all stuff by me.

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Sorry but i've make all graphics by me ( if u want , can you make me some with graphics , else you can change some my title and add you credit in title :) )

Thanks Matt;)

I think Breakout's title screen is great. Matt, you should use that one since he's offering it to ya. ;)

hey i've good news!
I've done first chipset!( New Water , New Sand , New Grass , New Wild Grass , New Light Grass , New Houses , New Bulding , Add New stuff( New Leaf in water etc. , 4 level Tree: Mini , Small , Big , Larg Tree's!
I am post later screenies(i dont start maping now )
So Plz comment :P

Thanks Matt;)

I'd like to see how you use this chipset in the game. I'll look forward to seeing some screenshots!

Phoenix316 said:

I'd like to see how you use this chipset in the game. I'll look forward to seeing some screenshots!

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So good news! I've end New Menu... Would you like any menu?

Thanks Matt;)

The color's are very, erm, bright. The backgrounds kinda clash with the text. Try getting colors that blend well together, and use a darker color for the text to make it easier to see. Have you got any in game screenshots to show us?