new torchic comic

Started by Fox♠ March 13th, 2005 7:05 AM
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I live in tre's heart <3
Seen December 19th, 2005
Posted September 18th, 2005
1,282 posts
18.8 Years
XD I thought your comic was very funny XD You might want to just lower the swears. I would only advise not using "u r kewl " kind of talk for the charectors; other than that, the backround was great! I loved the explosian effects and the sprites are amazing! ^_^ I hope you make more, they're really funny
I've left ;_; I might come back to check in on
a few comics, but otherwise i'm pretty much gone.


if you wanna find me i'll be here ^_^
I live in tre's heart <3
Seen December 19th, 2005
Posted September 18th, 2005
1,282 posts
18.8 Years
It's okay ^_^ everyone makes mistakes, and we learn from them, so no harm done, i'm very happy that you're continueing with them, take your time with them, there's no time limit to comic making =D
I've left ;_; I might come back to check in on
a few comics, but otherwise i'm pretty much gone.


if you wanna find me i'll be here ^_^
Age 30
Stealin' your clothes and identity
Seen January 12th, 2006
Posted November 21st, 2005
773 posts
18.3 Years
I like swearing in a comic, just, for the sake of everyone else at PC, tone it down. Other than that, I like it!


Paired with Tiger-Chan, and it's not gonna change any time soon! :P
Deceived by my eyes and all I was told I should see
Opinions not mine, the person they taught me to be
One night in the dark, a vision of someone I knew
And in the darkness I saw, a voice say, I'm you.
Inside me a light was turned on Then I was alive

(v chorus v)
If you close your eyes your life, an empty truth revealed
Dreams you never lived, and scars never healed
In the darkness, light will take you to the other side
and find me waiting there you'll see, if you just close your eyes

Hearts uninspired, trapped inside somebody's dream
Too close to the fire, yet cold and numb with the pain
But the fever has broken, and the river has run to the sea
Washed to the ocean, and saved by a voice inside me.
Inside me a light was turned on Then I was alive
(chorus)
Never thought I would be here, so high in the air
This was my unanswered prayer
Defined by another, so much wasted time
Out of the darkness, each breath that I take will be mine
(chorus)
If you just close your eyes...