"You just..."

Started by xDaRK_SuiKuNx March 22nd, 2005 5:16 PM
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the nexus of oblivion
Seen April 25th, 2007
Posted March 26th, 2007
188 posts
18.2 Years
this song's tune is taken from "sunday morning" by maroon 5, the song is on that site. hope you like it. with the music in mind, it sounds better.

"You just..."
Like a lily or an orchid
That is swaying in the moon,
I could lie right here forever
From midnight till the noon
Because the spell you cast on me
Keeps me focused on you
I try and try, I search mind
But all I see is you

What is it you do to me?
Im trying to figure out
I had all these locked up feelings
But your love let them out.
Ive become dependent,
I cant see myself without
So love me, show me, teach me
What this love thing is about



I'll make this dream team a reality.
Age 32
Snuggling with Satoshi while watching a movie.
Seen July 5th, 2007
Posted April 22nd, 2005
169 posts
18.2 Years
As always you've written a very lovely poem, Matt. It's very sweet and soft. I like it just as much as any other poem of yours. I'm not sure what else to say. I mean it's so simple to state that your poem is great. They always seem to be. Anyways, that's beautiful poem, Matt!


Rival: Gohan | Pair: Rudy | Twin: Effy | Evil Twins: Katie & Aenir
Fangirl Of: Toto & Yami | Corrupter: Toto | Master: Blue | Clone: Yami
Bishies: Scar & Satoshi | Call Me: Kyu-san, Tabby, or Angel
Pairings: SesshomaruxKagura, Roy MustangxRiza Hawkeye, DaisukexSatoshi

I tear my heart open. I sew my self shut. My weakness is that I care to much.
And our scars remind us that the past is real. I tear my heart open just to feel.

All your | memories of me will | fade away
I will be a | page in a chapter | I closed today



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Natsuki

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Age 33
Female
Minnesota
Seen July 16th, 2015
Posted March 22nd, 2012
5,046 posts
18.2 Years
this song's tune is taken from "sunday morning" by maroon 5, the song is on that site. hope you like it. with the music in mind, it sounds better.

"You just..."
Like a lily or an orchid
That is swaying in the moon,
I could lie right here forever
From midnight till the noon
Because the spell you cast on me
Keeps me focused on you
I try and try, I search mind
But all I see is you

What is it you do to me?
Im trying to figure out
I had all these locked up feelings
But your love let them out.
Ive become dependent,
I cant see myself without
So love me, show me, teach me
What this love thing is about
I like this one even better than the other one. <3~~~ I have something I want to point out before I go any further...in the second to last line in the first stanza, did you possibly mean to put "I search my mind"? o.<

Anyways, seeing as you said the lines without a comma or whatever at the end represent pauses, I'll keep my mouth shut about those. =X

Okie dokie, this song really makes you feel good when you read it. <3 You get a good sense of sweet infatuation. ^^ How you look at someone you hold dear and want to tell them so much, but you can't seem to get any words out. Or at least none that make sense. XD

I lurved this song as always, Mattie. ^^ Awsome job! ^o^ *stamps "Kelsey Seal of Approval" on Matt's song* ^^

~Kelsey