"Once More"[song]

Started by xDaRK_SuiKuNx March 23rd, 2005 7:15 AM
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the nexus of oblivion
Seen April 25th, 2007
Posted March 26th, 2007
188 posts
18.2 Years
NOTE: Also written to the music of "Sunday Morning" by maroon 5 cuz i can't get that song out my head XP

Rose petals leading up my steps;
I ascend them and i find
A silk sheet covering your hips
And in your hand a glass of wine.
You tell me to come on over
I've kept you waiting too long.
Your green eyes shine just like clovers,
And on your lips i see a song:

[2x][chorus v.1]
"It's been so long, but now you're mine.
I've been thinking about you all this time.
So dim the lights and shut the door,
I'm glad to have you here once more..."

I feel your temperture rising
From the rhythm of our flow.
I find your passion surprising,
you don't want me to let go.
Perfect timing, setting, and pace;
Your hands exploring my back.
Serene expression on your face,
I hear you sing as you relax:

[2x][chorus v.2]

"It's been so long, but now you're mine.
I've been thinking about you all this time.
And i know you have to leave at 4,
But promise me you'll return once more*..."



*on the 2nd time, hold the more



I'll make this dream team a reality.
Age 32
Snuggling with Satoshi while watching a movie.
Seen July 5th, 2007
Posted April 22nd, 2005
169 posts
18.2 Years
Wow. Very nice, Matt. A very good song that is. I like it much but I can't think of the right way to express how it makes one feel. Either way it's a very great song. Keep up the good work. ^^


Rival: Gohan | Pair: Rudy | Twin: Effy | Evil Twins: Katie & Aenir
Fangirl Of: Toto & Yami | Corrupter: Toto | Master: Blue | Clone: Yami
Bishies: Scar & Satoshi | Call Me: Kyu-san, Tabby, or Angel
Pairings: SesshomaruxKagura, Roy MustangxRiza Hawkeye, DaisukexSatoshi

I tear my heart open. I sew my self shut. My weakness is that I care to much.
And our scars remind us that the past is real. I tear my heart open just to feel.

All your | memories of me will | fade away
I will be a | page in a chapter | I closed today



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Natsuki

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Age 33
Female
Minnesota
Seen July 16th, 2015
Posted March 22nd, 2012
5,046 posts
18.2 Years
Weeee, Mattie wrote another song! <3~~~ I really liked this one, yes I did. *nods* XD I'm not the best song rater, but all I can say is it ish teh pwnz. ^.~

This song shows how love can be so sweet at times. <3 I really like this song because it helps to bring out the better sides of love rather than the sadness and heartbreak. ^^

But what's this I see? =O Looks like you have a few punctuation figures missing. ^^; *cough*attheendofthelines*cough* XD Anyways, overall shweet job Mattness. <3 *huggles*

~Kelsey
the nexus of oblivion
Seen April 25th, 2007
Posted March 26th, 2007
188 posts
18.2 Years
Weeee, Mattie wrote another song! <3~~~ I really liked this one, yes I did. *nods* XD I'm not the best song rater, but all I can say is it ish teh pwnz. ^.~

This song shows how love can be so sweet at times. <3 I really like this song because it helps to bring out the better sides of love rather than the sadness and heartbreak. ^^

But what's this I see? =O Loks like you have a few punctuation figures missing. ^^; *cough*attheendofthelines*cough* XD Anyways, overall shweet job Mattness. <3 *huggles*

~Kelsey
hehe punctuation you say ? =3 that's cuz although they seem like pauses, it 's different when sung. glad you liked it ^0^ as always, i like the "Official Kelsey Seal of Approval" lol

thanks everyone else as well ^ ^ tabby-sama, you're always the first to read, julia you aaalways know the song i'm talking about, and that makes it easier to write ^ ^ thanks to you too miyu-chan-chan [<----XD] i always respect what you write ^0^



I'll make this dream team a reality.