Humanity and Insanity

Started by Satoshi's Angel March 26th, 2005 1:21 AM
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Age 32
Snuggling with Satoshi while watching a movie.
Seen July 5th, 2007
Posted April 22nd, 2005
169 posts
18.2 Years
I just cooked this up. I actually think I used a bit more proper punctuation on my own for once. It's another song. Enjoy and feel free to critic.


They call it humanity,
I call it insanity.
There's no way we're sane,
If we call life a game.

I dont understand,
Together we won't band.
We say we're different races
Just because we have different faces.

Different color of skin,
Separates the races of men.
We all live on this earth,
But still some of us never make it to birth.

If you kill someone already born it's murder,
But taking away a baby's life before it's gained is normal.
I can't see why we are how we are,
If we keep going at this rate we won't get to far.

You call it humanity,
I call it insanity.
I know we aren't sane,
And we're losing this life-like game.


Rival: Gohan | Pair: Rudy | Twin: Effy | Evil Twins: Katie & Aenir
Fangirl Of: Toto & Yami | Corrupter: Toto | Master: Blue | Clone: Yami
Bishies: Scar & Satoshi | Call Me: Kyu-san, Tabby, or Angel
Pairings: SesshomaruxKagura, Roy MustangxRiza Hawkeye, DaisukexSatoshi

I tear my heart open. I sew my self shut. My weakness is that I care to much.
And our scars remind us that the past is real. I tear my heart open just to feel.

All your | memories of me will | fade away
I will be a | page in a chapter | I closed today



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Miyu-chan

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Age 34
Seen April 23rd, 2014
Posted January 17th, 2010
5,956 posts
19.7 Years
And we're losing this life-like game.
I think that adding a hyphen 'tween life and like would make it easier to read though. xD

Wow, your song has lots of those major issues in life. I <3 this, most of the songs I hear nowadays are just about love, love, and more love. xD;

So you're saying those of mixed birth are killed before they're born, ne? (If not, sorry! xD; ) A bit fast topic-switching on the 3rd stanza. But again, very nice rhythm. =3

(Yay, you posted another of your works! x3) Keep it up! =D


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Age 32
Snuggling with Satoshi while watching a movie.
Seen July 5th, 2007
Posted April 22nd, 2005
169 posts
18.2 Years
Thanks, espyon. And Miyu naw that's not what I was suggesting about the mixed birth being killed before they're born. And yeah I did make it switch topics pretty fast. Anyways thanks. I'm glad some people like this.


Rival: Gohan | Pair: Rudy | Twin: Effy | Evil Twins: Katie & Aenir
Fangirl Of: Toto & Yami | Corrupter: Toto | Master: Blue | Clone: Yami
Bishies: Scar & Satoshi | Call Me: Kyu-san, Tabby, or Angel
Pairings: SesshomaruxKagura, Roy MustangxRiza Hawkeye, DaisukexSatoshi

I tear my heart open. I sew my self shut. My weakness is that I care to much.
And our scars remind us that the past is real. I tear my heart open just to feel.

All your | memories of me will | fade away
I will be a | page in a chapter | I closed today



Alchemy Community My...fanclub?