@Queeniewolf: Hey thanks! Let me break down your reply:
-The main reason why I used that kind of lining for page 4 is because I wasn't drawing on paper. It was a different kind of paper;I could only use a pen, if I drew with pencil it wouldn't be clear. I was at school, and I forgot to bring blank paper with me, but since you like that lining, I might want to do it more often in the future!
-I will try to put the lettering and different lines into page 6. I hope you like it when I release it!
-I.... sadly don't have a digital software at the moment, so yeah. Sorry about that.
-But I will try my best with the body angles thing. Thank you for the tips!
@UAREMAD: Thanks!
PAGE 5 INCOMING:
Hooray for off screen evolving? Generally I'm not extremely impressed with this page, but things will get better later on. I'm halfway through page 6, gonna want to release it next week, and maybe some other pages so stay tuned!