You still need to change all instances of the word to "Pokémon" and capitalize the species names. So they should all be "Eevee", "Bidoof", "Rattata", and etc.
Ever since the early days of generation one, where the unhealthily obsessed character, Bill, first introduced us to one of the few pokemon that can give Ditto a run for its money in the indecisiveness category, Eevee has been amongst the pokemon community’s favourites.
This sentence is rather long, and can cause a reader to get tripped up in the middle. Maybe cut out the part about Ditto to save words.
Possessing a spread of 55/45/55 for its attack, special attack and speed, at first glance Eevee doesn’t look half bad for an unevolved pokemon, it even packs an excellent ability in Adaptability.
Put "it even packs an excellent ability in Adaptability" as its own sentence.
This first glance is misleading, Eevee sucks.
Personally, I'd pack more of a wallop to the last two words by either using a colon or having them as their own sentence.
Especially, if you’re not smart enough to use a set with Bite, ghosts too.
Cut "Especially."
Sorry, Nathan! I would say start the sentence with "And," but that gets a big NO from most people I talk to. So maybe an "Also" instead of "Especially"? Or just reword the sentence to "Ghosts can also cause problems if you're not smart enough to use a set with Bite."
What people forget, is that these evolutions also cause little Eevee to have a painfully limited movepool.
No need for the comma after "forget."
“Well there’s nothing better.” you might contend, but once again, that would be a fallacy.
Comma" after "better."
All fourof these pokemon hit harder than Eevee, have much wider coverage that covers their weaknesses and with the exception of Porygon (which doesn’t need to) are all faster.
"four of"
Also, "with the exception of Porygon (which doesn't need to" should be split from the rest of the sentence better. I can never remember when you use dashes or parenthesis, but it would be something like "All four of these Pokémon hit harder than Eevee, have much wider coverage that covers their weaknesses and (with the exception of Porygon, who doesn't need to be) are all faster."
And now that I've copied that sentence over again, maybe reword the part about weakness coverage so you're not using similar words so close together. So "are able to cover their weaknesses better" or something like that.
That’ right, even the likes of Rattata are in the top percentage of LC normal-types when compared to Eevee.
"That's"
This might sound good to you, but we need to remember that’s Eevee still lacks any resistance to other types outside of its immunity to ghost attacks and it’s going to be absolutely slaughtered by the potent fighting type threats of the LC meta-game such as Meditite, Mienfoo and Scraggy.
"that"
This sentence is long. Put the part about Eevee's lack of resistance in one sentence, and then the part about its weakness to Fighting-type attacks in another.
It’s not like Eevee is your only option defensively either (in fact calling it an option next to the pokemon I’m about to mention is rather generous), Lickitung, Munchlax and (again) Porygon are much better alternatives.
Another sentence that should be split. Put a full stop after the closing parenthesis after "generous" so the next part is on its own.
Porygon in particular stands out as a phenomenal defensive normal type, thanks to its reliable recovery through Recover and access to Psychic to punish fighting-types switching in.
Maybe find a way to reword "reliable recovery through Recover" because of the repeating words (unless you want some alliteration?)
That's everything that I saw, with the exception of all the missed capitalization for Pokémon terms. Just read through your article and make sure you have everything capitalized that needs to be.