Showcase My Drawings

Started by Vegeta February 6th, 2016 11:08 AM
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Can you tell me which one you think is good? I don't really like any of my drawings. I have a couple of likes on my art album on facebook but I don't get feedbacks on it. Thanks.
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Heres gohan

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These are great! A few things I'll point out, although it looks like you fixed a lot of them going through:
http://orig12.deviantart.net/a777/f/2015/343/b/1/goku_crying_by_muhi313-d9jjwk2.jpg
I'll use this one as an example. The outline is really well done, but the hair looks like you used a really dull pencil, or maybe one layer of colored pencil? I myself struggle with colored pencils, but if you did use a pencil remember to always keep it sharp. Dull pencils make shading look like peach fuzz.

Second, the tears look a bit odd. Like his eye is a faucet or something, there's way too many tears to look natural.

http://orig09.deviantart.net/4fe8/f/2016/031/2/4/dragon_ball_super___kabe_cabba_cabe_kaba_by_muhi313-d9q0rfc.jpg

With this one, the body looks great! But, the head is disproportionate to the body, and the eyes/nose/mouth are all squashed together on the bottom of the face. I assume since you don't have that problem in other drawings that you've learned how to fix that.

http://orig14.deviantart.net/d2fc/f/2016/031/0/7/dragonball_z___broly_2_by_muhi313-d9q0rfy.jpg
http://orig15.deviantart.net/783c/f/2016/031/d/2/dragonball_z___broly_1_by_muhi313-d9q0rfo.jpg

These ones, I've yet to find a flaw in, which is awesome since I'm very picky XD So awesome job with them!


Overall you're really good and have huge potential in the future! Keep making more! I'm looking forward to seeing more stuff from you!