Master Cheif's World

Started by PrinceOfDarkness September 3rd, 2005 11:21 AM
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Age 30
Let's keep it to, Maryland >_>
Seen February 3rd, 2006
Posted January 20th, 2006
1,282 posts
18.2 Years
Now this is a horrible sprite comic made by me, so please make as many crits as you would like XD I really can't accept comments cause I'm a newbie to sprite comics >>

http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/2172/stupidspritecomic4zx.png
^ my stupid sprite comic featuring Master Cheif, Leon (from Kingdom Hearts), Frieza, some Megaman guy and this girl Master Cheif is obsessed with XD

AI O.O I made a mistake on it "as" is suppose to be "has"
Age 30
Let's keep it to, Maryland >_>
Seen February 3rd, 2006
Posted January 20th, 2006
1,282 posts
18.2 Years
see, thank you, I confirm/agree, I thought that sprite comic looked horrible

but the way you said it sounded like an insult XD

It is a horrible sprite comic made by you.
^ makes it sound like your trying to call me horrible XD^
Age 33
Seen June 2nd, 2014
Posted January 23rd, 2012
2,010 posts
19.7 Years
see, thank you, I confirm/agree, I thought that sprite comic looked horrible

but the way you said it sounded like an insult XD


^ makes it sound like your trying to call me horrible XD^
I just said what you yourself acknowledged. Quit being so negative. Quit wasting our time and pull off something that YOU'RE content with. Because if you don't like it, why should we?
Age 32
Female
Wyoming.
Seen June 26th, 2009
Posted March 17th, 2007
1,568 posts
18.6 Years
Shuttup Allstories. He knows its pretty bad and you'll just make things much worse. You know, from all of your criticism, I've never seen a sprite comic from YOU.
Good job, LunaticJohnny. It might be bad, but I'm sure it will get better. Much better. Only thing I might suggest is a background? Yours is okay but, everything looks warped to me.
Seen June 3rd, 2006
Posted October 9th, 2005
208 posts
17.9 Years
Yeah, doesn't mean he doesn't know how to make one, but it seems like he's a hypocrit, telling others, when he doesn't have a comic. At least they've taken the time to try and think up a bit of a plot and put it together.
You don't have to do something to know the rules of it.

And the text bubbles are horrible. They should be filled.