Pokemon Fever

Started by Jaybob September 4th, 2005 1:16 PM
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Jaybob

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Age 29
Somewhere in the Uk not quite sure where XD
Seen June 5th, 2016
Posted November 19th, 2013
1,624 posts
18 Years
Hi guys this is my comic called Pokemon Fever. It is a continuation to Signomis "Pokemon FR/LG continued". So here goes nothing


Part one



Part Two



Part Three



Part Four



Part Five


Part siz


Part seven


Part Eight



Ok well this is them so far... so can I have your comments and if you wanna be in here you have to gimme overworlds and sprites

Edit: Too see it in full size... clik on pic
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Jaybob

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Age 29
Somewhere in the Uk not quite sure where XD
Seen June 5th, 2016
Posted November 19th, 2013
1,624 posts
18 Years
the acpes are full black and i know they arent that good because i am not that good of a spriter in in my newer comics i do have backgrounds it's just there i didnt have one so...
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Seen June 3rd, 2006
Posted October 9th, 2005
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17.9 Years
The most recent comic makes no sense. In the second to last panel, a Chansey is attacking a Mew that's covered by a bubble with an egg bomb, and in the next they're both gone and there's some silhouette of a guy in a yellow circle. This is another reason why the lazy style of text doesn't work at all.

And between those scenes, the 3 trainers at the northern part of the island magically switch places and the birds are no longer in front of them. Try to keep continuity in your comics.

Jaybob

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Age 29
Somewhere in the Uk not quite sure where XD
Seen June 5th, 2016
Posted November 19th, 2013
1,624 posts
18 Years
kool ty renegadez sorry bout the delay lol but i got skool again now i am gettin some soon but only adamski's in it at the moment
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Safari Pokemon: Chansey - Lillipup - Minccino
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