//AJUSTed-Vision//

Started by AJUST September 5th, 2005 8:13 AM
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AJUST

/Kusagaki. The Grass Kid./

Age 35
South Africa
Seen August 31st, 2009
Posted June 2nd, 2009
139 posts
17.7 Years
Just wanted to show you guys some of my stuff...


Heres' my buddy Kurachu...


Some follow pics I was working on...


My Trainer Card...


Please check out my Animated Comic, FBH over at DeviantArt...
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/18942794/*

*Download it, right-click and view in quicktime... for best results.






(FBH = Flat Broke in Hoenn, which is set in a Hoenn where everything isn't free...)

PLEASE DON'T STEAL.

AJUST

/Kusagaki. The Grass Kid./

Age 35
South Africa
Seen August 31st, 2009
Posted June 2nd, 2009
139 posts
17.7 Years
that was the greatest comic i've seen so far
plaease pm me if you want to be friend and tell me more
if your going to make another comic
Thanks. ;)
I'm just as proud, it's one of my best works.

I was planning to make episode 2, but I'm quite busy right now. It's still a possibility though.

MegaFuz

Über Title

Bubbletown
Seen February 11th, 2011
Posted December 11th, 2009
4,565 posts
17.9 Years
The outline on Kurachu's tail and ears could be improved. The black outline on the lighter areas look really bad. The follow pics look good for the most part, the only complaint there is on the first Bulbasaur pic it looks like you missed the teal on the head. The head being colored the same as the bulb looks off. As far as the trainer card goes, I'm not a big fan of the bigger version but there is some cool stuff in there. When I get more time I'll be checking out the comic, but from the little preview there it looks really good. :P
MegaDex: Returning soon?

This is where I'd post my PC family if any of them were still here. D:

AJUST

/Kusagaki. The Grass Kid./

Age 35
South Africa
Seen August 31st, 2009
Posted June 2nd, 2009
139 posts
17.7 Years
The outline on Kurachu's tail and ears could be improved. The black outline on the lighter areas look really bad. The follow pics look good for the most part, the only complaint there is on the first Bulbasaur pic it looks like you missed the teal on the head. The head being colored the same as the bulb looks off. As far as the trainer card goes, I'm not a big fan of the bigger version but there is some cool stuff in there. When I get more time I'll be checking out the comic, but from the little preview there it looks really good. :P
Thanks for the constructive critisism. ;)

I see what you mean with Kurachu, The bulbasaur's head isn't really the same colour as the bulb :P , and thanks for the Trainer-card compliment. (Even though it's not your thing.)

Sylphiel

Between your fantasy and my reality
Seen March 28th, 2023
Posted January 9th, 2023
13,114 posts
18.5 Years
Hah, that animated comic was a neat idea, I thought. Definitely more unique than a lot of other comics.

Since sprite comics and trainer cards aren't a commenting specialty of mine, I'll stay on your regular sprites. The Kurachu looks interesting, though I'm not sure if that gray-brown outline color on the tan(?) areas works too well...

Got nothing to say about the "follow" sprites, really, except that I think they look good. Keep up the good work. ^_^

AJUST

/Kusagaki. The Grass Kid./

Age 35
South Africa
Seen August 31st, 2009
Posted June 2nd, 2009
139 posts
17.7 Years
The comic looks kinda grainy.
Try resaving the frames or use a different animation program.
I know about that.
It not exactly a problem, as such.

;) It's the gif compression. I like gif, and it's the only way that I have to save it, since windows movie maker distorts the movies.

AJUST

/Kusagaki. The Grass Kid./

Age 35
South Africa
Seen August 31st, 2009
Posted June 2nd, 2009
139 posts
17.7 Years
Thanks for all the awesome responses everyone, I really do appreciate it!

P.S. I dunno about a sprite shop... Kurachu took a while to come up with, so far I've only ever "invented" 3 pokemon... *One of which is at my deviantart, if you wanna go look.
Age 30
A box c:
Seen May 2nd, 2010
Posted February 22nd, 2010
989 posts
18.3 Years
where did you get the pinball sprites for your t card, i've been looking for them but i haven't found them yet.
~JapaneseWolf
Improvement and tutorials on my accounts gallery, Flarveon!~ Now open for commissions of all sorts!

Fall back on reasons we know won't stand a chance, Confusing passion for the love he never gave...
Age 30
A box c:
Seen May 2nd, 2010
Posted February 22nd, 2010
989 posts
18.3 Years
thankyou ADJUST *gives rep for helping me*and the first one is interesting.
~JapaneseWolf
Improvement and tutorials on my accounts gallery, Flarveon!~ Now open for commissions of all sorts!

Fall back on reasons we know won't stand a chance, Confusing passion for the love he never gave...