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Old September 26th, 2005 (9:58 PM).
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    Comments: I think it turned out okay. I haven't faked in a very long time. I havent revised FK's tutorial as well. Point out errors, I know there are plenty mistakes here and there. Be kind XD

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    Old September 27th, 2005 (7:46 AM).
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      wow, thats a gr8 card, and the attacks! 10/10 kepp up the good work
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      Old September 27th, 2005 (10:36 AM).
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        nice! But you can hardly see the card name.(unless that's what you intended to do)
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        Old September 27th, 2005 (10:41 AM).
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          oh wow, thats so cool, ilove the sephy art
          well done on making a excellent card
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          Old September 27th, 2005 (12:51 PM).
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            there are some slight errors in the card like the plus symbol should be down more
            the hp should be moved over the psychic symbol should be inline with the e in resisitance and the card number looks odd make it 1/1 so far coz u don't have a set yet
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            Old September 27th, 2005 (1:08 PM).
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              Nice card!
              But besides those errors Blennix already said, I found another one:

              In the Masamune attack, the text says:

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              If there are no pokmon in your bench, this attack does 40 damage...
              The damage of that attack is 50
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              Old September 28th, 2005 (8:25 AM).
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                Yes, I think those (the mistakes) are true!

                Also, the HP is very small and the + symbol is too huge!

                I think I saw the name Masamune in Civilization III Conquests... Wasn't it a Japanese Damiyo??!!

                Any way, great card, and not very bad mistakes!

                Hope the second draft is better!
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                Old September 28th, 2005 (1:20 PM).
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                  Masamune is also Sephiroth's sword's name (I think..)
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                  Old September 28th, 2005 (6:29 PM).
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                    Here is the 2nd draft.
                    Thank for the nice comments.
                    Masamune is Sephiroth's sword, yes, the longass sword.
                    The name of the card isn't supposed to be not-seenable but it is supposed to be silver so I cant do anything about it. =\
                    I've fixed the 40 damage error, and the + symbol has changed slightly.
                    I made the HP font bigger and moved it a bit to the left. I also moved the Resistance psychic symbol a bit to the right. Blennix, sorry but I dont know what 'e' is it.
                    Tell me if this is better tho.
                    Thanks..
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                    Old September 28th, 2005 (10:41 PM).
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                      Youi forgot to capitalize Paralyzed!
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                      Old September 29th, 2005 (12:09 AM).
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                        Oh my god i can't believe it.
                        Sorry ._.
                        A remake of the 2nd draft will be here soon >>
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                        Old September 29th, 2005 (12:26 AM).
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                          there are still some errors, please look at the tutorial
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                          Old September 29th, 2005 (10:27 AM).
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                            Also, the HP is a bit of shrunk!
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                            Old October 2nd, 2005 (9:38 AM).
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                              Hooray! My bishie has his own card!! ^___^ Nice work. Looks sweeter than sweetness itself. Athough- are you going to color the picture?
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                              Old October 4th, 2005 (4:39 AM).
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                                Lishakara: Recoloring huh? Good idea Although im not really looking forward to it (im not good at computer art xD) I would give it a shot.
                                Thanks for your comments.
                                QFred: It shrunk? X_x I'll look into it.
                                Blennix: Tutorial? I have no time for tutorials. The reason why I post cards instead is not for the sole reason to show off. Its for people to tell me what errors I made, and what to do to fix the errors, I want don't want to know faking at the back of my hand by reading a tutorial, thats all i want you to know. There might be major errors, or just little errors, I dont appreciate people coming up to my cards and saying "Read a tutorial." Thanks. You might disagree with me or something, but I like my own kind of constructive criticism.
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                                Old October 4th, 2005 (10:06 PM).
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                                  Very nice card you have there. the name font looks cool!!! You have a nice way of using your resources. I do have a small tip. Change the line spacing in between each line of the effect text to one number lower than font size. 9/10 for that draft. Good work.
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                                  Old October 5th, 2005 (1:16 PM).
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                                    er look at the tutorial person, and don't get smart with me, if you look at the tutorial you can produce cards like King Shuckle
                                    ^ with the 50+<--- the plus symbol is what im about, it looks odd and sorry for my outburst it will not happen again
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