Pokemon:Allian Page 2

Started by Esupio November 12th, 2005 1:01 PM
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Roy-Kun

t i t l e g o e s h e r e

Male
In the house, next to the car, that is close to the sea.
Seen January 25th, 2011
Posted April 30th, 2010
1,018 posts
18.1 Years
When you do it, try to make something that can difference pannel per pannel, the first one was a bit in disorder ^^;

Curremt obsession: (MMO)RPG, and S4 League.


Spoiler:

Credits to WindLord for the FE9 Roy sprite, and RoyLover for Sig and avvy.

Age 29
England.
Seen January 5th, 2008
Posted August 8th, 2007
4,419 posts
18.7 Years
suppose so. Don't call me that... you never say my old name did you anyway.

The next comic onle requires one more frame. It introduces TEAM NINJA. and guess who its lead by... no its not koga :P

edit: Its the first appearance of team ninja and a robot :P
check first post... AND ITS ANIMATED not much though

Roy-Kun

t i t l e g o e s h e r e

Male
In the house, next to the car, that is close to the sea.
Seen January 25th, 2011
Posted April 30th, 2010
1,018 posts
18.1 Years
Err... alright the backsprites are ok, but the bad thing is... well... i told you to have order right? And that means: Separate the pannels and guess what? You didn't! Man -_-

Curremt obsession: (MMO)RPG, and S4 League.


Spoiler:

Credits to WindLord for the FE9 Roy sprite, and RoyLover for Sig and avvy.

Age 29
England.
Seen January 5th, 2008
Posted August 8th, 2007
4,419 posts
18.7 Years
I don't do seperate pannels. it goes

1=Top left
2=Top Right
3=middle left
4=middle right
5=Bottom Left
6=Bottom right

or take out the 3 and 4 and make 5 and 6 bottom left or bottom right. ;

also you never said anything about seperate pannels you said order. DID YOU SEE THE BLACK LINE

Roy-Kun

t i t l e g o e s h e r e

Male
In the house, next to the car, that is close to the sea.
Seen January 25th, 2011
Posted April 30th, 2010
1,018 posts
18.1 Years
I know hwo's the sequence >_> but bot makng separated pannels makes the comic looks bad.

Sorry for saying this but... it needs more work

Curremt obsession: (MMO)RPG, and S4 League.


Spoiler:

Credits to WindLord for the FE9 Roy sprite, and RoyLover for Sig and avvy.

Age 31
Seen October 20th, 2019
Posted April 8th, 2016
2,881 posts
18.9 Years
I know hwo's the sequence >_> but bot makng separated pannels makes the comic looks bad.

Sorry for saying this but... it needs more work
Why are you apoligizing? You didn't do anything wrong. I agree with you. All that really needs to be done is make the lines easier to see, and make the word bubbles a bit better. Rememer square bubbles are alot easier.