Dark Light

Started by purple,-sweetflower December 3rd, 2005 7:49 AM
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Age 32
Female
In the night sky
Seen November 25th, 2009
Posted November 25th, 2009
111 posts
18.1 Years
Now I dont care if it rhymes or not,so zip it........


Dark Light~

.Once the light has hit my heart,
i've realized the dark is here.The dark light is something weard,
but not to me but to you all.
My dark light is un sight, to realize my light you must realize.....
....realize who you are..who I am..
The dark light is inside, but if you dont take it out......
the light shall shiver to ultimate dark.The dark that will hurt, quiver and
cry.Take it out and exept who you are.Thats just who you are...
exept...the dark light..
Its who you are inside...and you shall be one day..the dark light itself...
Listen to the night's wind, what's it saying?


Yuki's the coolest........ Look at her....Purple's the best.....
The Best Person To Me: pink-tiger
Age 32
Female
In the night sky
Seen November 25th, 2009
Posted November 25th, 2009
111 posts
18.1 Years
*sight*
I guess thats a good rating, but 4 me.....I give it a 10...I think the reason is because ....I know what it stands 4 and what it means.......
Listen to the night's wind, what's it saying?


Yuki's the coolest........ Look at her....Purple's the best.....
The Best Person To Me: pink-tiger
Age 32
Female
In the night sky
Seen November 25th, 2009
Posted November 25th, 2009
111 posts
18.1 Years
Yeah,I give it a 10 as well,if u know my sis very well.....u know what it means, and its a deep pasion....so yeah, great job....
Thanks it means 2 me a lot...And now I have 2 go and find a dark siggy pic. 4 my sig.
Listen to the night's wind, what's it saying?


Yuki's the coolest........ Look at her....Purple's the best.....
The Best Person To Me: pink-tiger
Age 32
Female
In the night sky
Seen November 25th, 2009
Posted November 25th, 2009
111 posts
18.1 Years
It has a very powerful message there. ^_^
You're done a very good job, you just have to fix some grammarical errors. =D
thanks ......but its not that I dont know spelling,but I was not in a good typing mood that day...I'll fix it later.....Thanks again..finally another person understands.
Listen to the night's wind, what's it saying?


Yuki's the coolest........ Look at her....Purple's the best.....
The Best Person To Me: pink-tiger
Age 32
Female
In the night sky
Seen November 25th, 2009
Posted November 25th, 2009
111 posts
18.1 Years
Hehehe...I wasent having a good day..but this posr shall be the place were I keep my poetry....my next 1 is comming soon....
Listen to the night's wind, what's it saying?


Yuki's the coolest........ Look at her....Purple's the best.....
The Best Person To Me: pink-tiger
Age 32
Female
In the night sky
Seen November 25th, 2009
Posted November 25th, 2009
111 posts
18.1 Years
I'll post my next poem now...

When you left


When you left,
my hear shattered, as if my life was
coming to an end.

When you left,
my heart cried out to you, my friend.
But my cries were useless.

When you left,
I tried to hold my tears for you.
But my heart couldn't hold them in.

When you left,
I laid where I played and remembered
the old days...before you left.

When you left,
Oh, how I dreamed of our times
together. And now I know...losing
you was wrong.

When you left,
time was longer, happiness became shorter...

When you left,
my face became pale, my room
became dark and gloomy.

When you left,
I became lonely, and I felt
like crying inside.

When you left,
I wanted you to come back, and
I wanted to smile again.

When you left,
I realized that my life had no meaning,
and that you weren't coming back...

When you left,
I decided to leave myself, to reach
you beyond..Just know, I'm coming
my friend, and then I'll smile once again...
Listen to the night's wind, what's it saying?


Yuki's the coolest........ Look at her....Purple's the best.....
The Best Person To Me: pink-tiger

.: Kira Yamato :.

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Age 33
With Lacus at ORB
Seen July 27th, 2006
Posted July 27th, 2006
228 posts
17.9 Years
OH MY GOD....your poems are very beutiful SP*, I really do like them alot....Iam crying, I don't cry much but you poems touch me so much.... the second one is...is so.....*leaves a note*
10/10 ^-^ keep up the good work PM me if you want to be friends ^^

As the memories of old days disappear,
As should all your losses and fears.
I shall always be there for you,
Even though you start anew.
The days we spent so lost and worried,
Will always be there never buried.
You were always the bravest of us both,
And we had both taken the oath.
So as you stand there so brave,
While you weep upon my grave.
And while the days pass you by,
Just remember…I did not die.

family: My PC son is redpikachu2 YAY!!
paired with Reyna_Fire, YAY!!!
If you wish to be part of my family please pm me.
Age 32
Female
In the night sky
Seen November 25th, 2009
Posted November 25th, 2009
111 posts
18.1 Years
Thanks and I think I already have another poem, and Kira Yamato I want 2 be your friend. Pm me sometime.
Listen to the night's wind, what's it saying?


Yuki's the coolest........ Look at her....Purple's the best.....
The Best Person To Me: pink-tiger
Age 32
Female
In the night sky
Seen November 25th, 2009
Posted November 25th, 2009
111 posts
18.1 Years
Sorry, my next poem's more about my favorite color....Purple....Sorry again.


*Purple*

As the wind comes through my hair
I see a different shade of color...
As the wind is known for being blue
To me, it's a shade of purple.....

Our eyes are supposed to see different colors
My eyes choose to see only one..
Only one color... purple..

As I was young, I loved the color
It was used in so many things:
crayons, flowers, bowls
There's so many shades of it...

But the one thing I love the most
Is the color I see in the wind
Although the color exists in objects
This I can only see...

The wind suddenly becomes smooth and cool
And changes from blue to purple..
When it blows, it cries to me
And then my heart becomes warm
I become happy inside
Because the wind cries to me
As it's happy to see me....

For as now, you should've known
That my favorite color and thing is purple..
For to me
Purple's who I am......

Maybe grammer errors..sorry..
Listen to the night's wind, what's it saying?


Yuki's the coolest........ Look at her....Purple's the best.....
The Best Person To Me: pink-tiger
Age 32
Female
In the night sky
Seen November 25th, 2009
Posted November 25th, 2009
111 posts
18.1 Years
Thanks for saying that sis..your always there for me.And I do love purple as much as you like pink....And im glad you like the poem.
Listen to the night's wind, what's it saying?


Yuki's the coolest........ Look at her....Purple's the best.....
The Best Person To Me: pink-tiger

.: Kira Yamato :.

.: Clyne Faction General :.

Age 33
With Lacus at ORB
Seen July 27th, 2006
Posted July 27th, 2006
228 posts
17.9 Years
wow that is awsome ^^ keep it up ^^

As the memories of old days disappear,
As should all your losses and fears.
I shall always be there for you,
Even though you start anew.
The days we spent so lost and worried,
Will always be there never buried.
You were always the bravest of us both,
And we had both taken the oath.
So as you stand there so brave,
While you weep upon my grave.
And while the days pass you by,
Just remember…I did not die.

family: My PC son is redpikachu2 YAY!!
paired with Reyna_Fire, YAY!!!
If you wish to be part of my family please pm me.
Age 32
Female
In the night sky
Seen November 25th, 2009
Posted November 25th, 2009
111 posts
18.1 Years
Hmm..From what I can see, there doesn't seem to be any errors in spelling or grammar. Plus, the poetry itself is WONDERFUL! PLease write more. You're a good poet. ^^
I did do this poem i'll be posting in the weekend..its about ..someone who misses her mother..
The title is ~mom~
Listen to the night's wind, what's it saying?


Yuki's the coolest........ Look at her....Purple's the best.....
The Best Person To Me: pink-tiger
Age 32
Female
In the night sky
Seen November 25th, 2009
Posted November 25th, 2009
111 posts
18.1 Years
~Mom ~

Tonight i've realized that you're gone
Although I always really knew it
T tried to deny it everytime
Because I never wanted you to go, mom....

You're not being has made things different
I've realized that having you around was great
And that I miss you so much

After time passed by
I've prayed for you to come back
Mom I want you to know how much I love you

I've realize that the love of a mom is needed in my life
Oh, how I wish for you to be here
To see all i've accomplished

In my life today i've dome well
And I wish you were here to seeFor everything i've done is for you

Mom I wish to see you
Your eyes
Your hair
Your smile

I want to smell the frangrant of your perfume
Which i've gotten used to smell
Although I see eyes, hair, and smile of mothers
No one can compare to yours......
Listen to the night's wind, what's it saying?


Yuki's the coolest........ Look at her....Purple's the best.....
The Best Person To Me: pink-tiger