Pokemon Hoenn XDA

Started by Flaming Quilava December 8th, 2005 6:32 PM
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What do you think of my Comic?

Age 28
By a tree next to a beach relaxing.
Seen August 9th, 2007
Posted March 6th, 2007
868 posts
17.5 Years
Hey heres my comic! I hope you like it! btw this is my first comic. I hope you have a fun time reading it!
~Rules~
1. Dont spam.
2.Follow the main rules.

There are 8 opened spots on this comic! If you have any ideas pm me!

Ok and here are the eposodes. I will fix the grammer in the first one later. Plz rate it!

Intruduction:http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Polt.png

Sesion 1:The biggining

Comic1 http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/X_Comic_X_1.png
Comic2 http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Pokemon_Hoenn_XDA.png
Comic3 http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Pokemon_Hoenn_XDA3.png
Comic4 http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Pokemon_Hoenn_XDA4.png
Comic5 http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Pokemon_Hoenn_XDA5.png
Comic6 http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Pokemon_Hoenn_XDA6.png
Comic7 http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Pokemon_Hoenn_XDA7.png
Comic8 http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Pokemon_Hoenn_XDA8.png
Comic9 http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/Pokemon_Hoenn_XDA9.png
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Bois

Name: Philip Speed
Genger:Male
Age:12-13
Hometown: A private island
Nature:Brave
Bio: Philip is a kid who would give up being inside somewhere for a chance to go outside. He went on a journey to get some fresh air and adventure.
Trainer Card: http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c326/Dragon_man_/TCXD1.png

Name: David Casprin
Genger:Male
Age:13
Hometown:Littleroot town
Nature: Timed
Bio: David was born in a rich family. He went on a journey to prove to his family that he doesnt need money to be sucsesful kid.
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Cradits:
Rad hair guy:kenada morspeed.
Island place {biggining}:[ DarkDragon ]
Most of the overworlds: Avatar
Template for tc's: Bhreg
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Thx Diamond star!

I Used to be ~Dragon~Master~

Kaneda Morspeed

Only the most powerful win...

Age 34
Dyna City
Seen December 31st, 2005
Posted December 25th, 2005
165 posts
17.5 Years
Umm... Did I say you could use my Overworld in that way? NO! I demand an explanation, and that you take out those episodes, or at least find another Overworld.
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Signomi

Age 32
Female
Britland (United Kingdom)
Seen 1 Week Ago
Posted October 10th, 2022
7,480 posts
17.8 Years
Please remember to give credit to people you borrow any kind of sprite from, otherwise it's considered stealing. Some spriters would prefer it if you PM them for their permission to use their sprites in your comic, in which I'd recommend doing. Always give credit to the spriters whom you borrow their sprites from. Remember that before you use a sprite from somewhere else in the future~ :)

Also, kindly please give credit to Avatar for most of those overworld sprites, as he was the person who made them~ :)

Well, keep at it with your comic! ;)

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Roy-Kun

t i t l e g o e s h e r e

Male
In the house, next to the car, that is close to the sea.
Seen January 25th, 2011
Posted April 30th, 2010
1,018 posts
18.1 Years
Where's the credit for the sprites? o.o

Also, i don't understand the history, try adding a plot, then Bios, that would make it understand.

Curremt obsession: (MMO)RPG, and S4 League.


Spoiler:

Credits to WindLord for the FE9 Roy sprite, and RoyLover for Sig and avvy.

Age 31
Who's Online? Page
Seen November 19th, 2012
Posted July 30th, 2008
570 posts
17.6 Years
Ok, its a good comic but you need to work on it a bit.

1. I can barely understand what's going on. Its kind of rushing
2. A lot of spelling and grammar errors
3. Where the plot of the story
4. Where are the bios and introducing the characters
5. Try to put each screen closer together and then crop it.
6. If you are going to use speech bubbles you need to work on them a bit try using a box at the bottom just until you can make better Speech Bubbles.

I'm sure this'll be a great comic if yuo can tidy it up more a bit.
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