Art Thread Again!?

Started by buster_wolf January 15th, 2006 7:39 PM
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Cookie luvs Green

I am not a Trainer. I am Ash.

Age 15
FROM PALLET TOWN MEGAMANSSSSSSSSSSSZZZ
Seen February 11th, 2011
Posted February 11th, 2011
425 posts
17.9 Years
Wow! Nice pictures you got there! =D You do have a pretty steady hand to line them. I love how you drew the faces on both of them =D

My only critic really is that the leg position looks a bit awkward and stiff. Try making their legs a bit.. Err.. How should I say it? Spread out a bit? XDD

The 2nd one has some light blue sketches showing. You probably rushed on cleaning up but it's not bad at all =)

I also like how you made the pics look simple yet it's still good and cute XD
Great job on them! <33 You should post a few more :3
Thermopolis Wyoming. The, liek, only state that'll go DOWN in people.
Seen March 2nd, 2006
Posted January 29th, 2006
14 posts
18.4 Years
Y'know, Cookie, you somment, but you don't update your own. Yes, I like the pictures. I think the leg position is a bit stiff... but normal. Geez, I should watch more tv.

Have you ever tried doing guys before? I think these pics are awesome, and i want to see more.

Geez, I suck.

Forest Grovyle

Resident Reptilian Artist

Age 36
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Seen October 15th, 2019
Posted October 16th, 2013
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Very nice pics here, especially the first one! :D I agree with what people before have said - the legs on the second one look a little off, (perhaps a little bit thin?) but the first one looks great! ^_^

I like your use of coloured lineart, too! :D

Keep it up! *hugs!*

--FG

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Age 37
Seen April 10th, 2008
Posted April 10th, 2008
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They are all great. But I suggest you should put some more method into it, buster_wolf D;. The characters' poses are ordinary, and when you think contrary to the bottom line; its boring looks like 'ya have no taste. 8.5/10. Good job, I hope to see more. ;) And both of them need tidying up ><
Spend more time on your lineart too!

Miiburd

Benjamæl II von Tavireksumpf

a secret anchorland industrial lair
Seen December 4th, 2008
Posted June 23rd, 2006
35 posts
17.4 Years
Those looks very nice ^__^
I like the little bit of sketchyness on the second image.

My critique stuff would just be to perhaps put more detailing on the lines, some varied thickness so it doesn't all look the same. That only comes from personal preference though ^^

Keep it up!
Age 37
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Posted January 24th, 2010
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http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v135/thefinalfrontier/died.jpg

An idea for a story I was working on. It's just a sketchy idea when I'm working on something, but yeah.

Warning PG-13 because it's a death scene. It's pretty violent in a way.

Oh yes, thanks for the criticisms. It does help to improve me in some ways.