~My Poetry~

Started by pink-tiger January 20th, 2006 7:41 PM
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This is were i'll keep all my poems.....hope u like them so much..its who I am an what I feel...

Moonlight

At night you see everything.....my shame, my hate....my heart...
You who watches me every day at night...You're my moonlight..
You're the light that comes from the moon to guide me....you who
shine's on me on cold windy nights...You who I tell everything when you're there.....
You're my moonlight....The one who listens. The one who understands....
There's no other like you.......
You're up there day and night....But you are my moonlight....
My one and only moonlight............................Moonlight........
My Dear Sisters: Midori Chi,Miss ReynaWe are the: HCSC My Twin:HazukiEvil Twin: Haruhi-chan
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Few grammar errors, but the poetry itself is very good. ^^ I like the flow to this. The "....." show some good emotional pauses. Could you make your next one longer though? Your poems are good, so don't make 'em so short.

*4.8 out of 5.0*
Yes!!!
I will do..I just wanted 2 see if they were good to be posted on poetry section....thanks Midori i'll work on the next 1!!!
My Dear Sisters: Midori Chi,Miss ReynaWe are the: HCSC My Twin:HazukiEvil Twin: Haruhi-chan
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Heres another poem......


Meaning of Life

As I open the dood, I realize that the meaning of life passes before my
eyes.. I then remembered what life's about...

Life's a gift given to each of us, only we can choose how to live it...
Life's something to appreciate, something not to waste.

I now see the meaning of life through my eyes. And now I know how I lived.
And I have to admit that as my life passes before my eyes, I've figured out that I have wasted life, but I also know I've used life to its limits.

And although I do regret the times I wasted precious life, I have to admit that even if I spent life as well.........

I'm glad of the life I have, and the life I lived. Im proud of who I was, and who I am.

I know life's important, but there's one thing I love the most. And it's something life give's to us. And it's a family, that loves and cares for us.

Life may be different for each of us, but there's one thing we all think the same. I dont think anyone could not care, because I'm sure we all appreciate. And it's the life we have and get. Because without it, we would'nt be were we are today...

So if you have wasted life, don't worry.. ANd long as you know, you can start living it well....Just remember the meaning of life...
My Dear Sisters: Midori Chi,Miss ReynaWe are the: HCSC My Twin:HazukiEvil Twin: Haruhi-chan
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Its realy good!!Inspires me a lot sis!!
And it makes people realize what lifes all about!!
This seems like it goes to everyone on pc.Cause it talks 2 everyone about the meaning of life!!clapp clapp!!! Good job sis!!
Listen to the night's wind, what's it saying?


Yuki's the coolest........ Look at her....Purple's the best.....
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Its realy good!!Inspires me a lot sis!!
And it makes people realize what lifes all about!!
This seems like it goes to everyone on pc.Cause it talks 2 everyone about the meaning of life!!clapp clapp!!! Good job sis!!
Yey!!!!I did good!!!!
Thanks sis!!
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Here's my next poem:

"My Love"

My friend, I see you everyday
and I must tell you some day...

You may not know, but I can truly
say...I love you...I know it's hard
to accept...Sorry my friend.

Time passes and I haven't said
a thing. When you wrote to me,
I blushed all day.

When I read what you wrote,
my heart grew with happiness
...And then I can truly say,"My love."

As time passes by, we have a great
time, and I'm happy to say,"My love."

I seems like it's been years, but
truly it's been three days. But already
my love, I'm happier than ever
before....Thanks to you,"My love."

Together forever I wish to be. My love,
I'm always with you..

Difficulties will occur,
I'm sure. But if you love me like I love you...our love will
succeed...I love you..."My love."
My Dear Sisters: Midori Chi,Miss ReynaWe are the: HCSC My Twin:HazukiEvil Twin: Haruhi-chan
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I like it a lot. very cool.

OOC: wow sisters in like real life. PT you never told me. ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
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~ Feelings of Love ~


I must tell you someday my friend
That I have feelings for you
I know it could change our friendship
But I must tell you


Its been a week since that day
And you havent said a think
I dont dare look at you at all, because I know i'll blush
Im scared of what you'll say my friend


Its been again another week
And you finally looked at me
You send me a letter with works i'll carry in my heart and mind
I was happy that day my friend
Because my feelingds for you have reached you


Its been a while since that day you gave me that letter
And im happy ever since
My heart bumps when seeing you in the halls

We walk together knowing we are together
And knowing you love me as well
And I know my feelings of love have been responded by you

My feelings for you are really deep
And I know your are too
Together my friend we'll be
And we'll soar together forever


Umm I cant find the original 1 so..its a little sort..So when I find it i'll post it..is it okay?
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Pink-chan, I love your poems, just as I said about Purple's poems, yours touch me as well...Keep up the great work ^-^, your last 2 poems remind me of my gf and how our relationship started and what she told me ^^ I am looking forward to the next poems. also if you want to be friends lease PM me if you like. ^^

As the memories of old days disappear,
As should all your losses and fears.
I shall always be there for you,
Even though you start anew.
The days we spent so lost and worried,
Will always be there never buried.
You were always the bravest of us both,
And we had both taken the oath.
So as you stand there so brave,
While you weep upon my grave.
And while the days pass you by,
Just remember…I did not die.

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Wow sis...Your making new friends, and its sad u cant find the poem..sorry I could'nt go over to help u find it....
Listen to the night's wind, what's it saying?


Yuki's the coolest........ Look at her....Purple's the best.....
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you are a very good poet. much of it sounds a bit like my old mentor, (just kidding) edgar allan poe. some are deeply very sad and that's how i liked it! very nice!!! 98/100!!! mayb i should make a poetry thread myslef?


lovingly and forever paired with the one and only, fallen_angel


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you are a very good poet. much of it sounds a bit like my old mentor, (just kidding) edgar allan poe. some are deeply very sad and that's how i liked it! very nice!!! 98/100!!! mayb i should make a poetry thread myslef?
Thanks I know maybe I double posted...
But I just want 2 say that I found my original poem!!!^^
Next time I'll have it!!!
Thanks death bringer!!!
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well let's here it. putt it up.
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I was dr.jay

my two sites are http://www.freewebs.com/chimpythelonestar/
and join http://s7.invisionfree.com/Nintendo_Online

Me and Pink-Tiger together.


Phantom of Death is my Brother

Midori Chi my sis-in-law
So is fallen angel

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♥ My feelings for you ♥


I see you in the hall
I wonder if you notice me..
Can't you see in me what I feel?

Please look into my eyes and tell me what you see..
Look inside of me
Look in my heart you'll find a glittered place,
Where you are kept inside

Look at my eyes
You'll see my tears
What I feel for you is not a temporarely crush..

My tears are fears of what you'll sat..
But I know I must accept the truth..

When the time comes to know the truth
I'll be ready
Although you may not love me
My tears will fall
My heart shall shine
To know at leat you'll stand by
And shine with me

But when I find out the truth..
And find out you love me
We'll stand together
Ans be together..
With golden tears flowing down my eyes...
And my heart shall shine like the morning sun..

In time i'll find out the truth of my one true love.....

Sorry if theres mistakes on spelling..><
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I like it..its really good.and im not sure about the splelling cant help you there!!Sissy!!
But I give it a 10!!
Listen to the night's wind, what's it saying?


Yuki's the coolest........ Look at her....Purple's the best.....
The Best Person To Me: pink-tiger