Pokmon: Unknown Force

Started by Omega Latios January 28th, 2006 4:05 AM
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Age 28
Finland
Seen March 4th, 2008
Posted March 4th, 2008
2,877 posts
18.5 Years
This Is My Newest Comic Series.

::...~Story~...::
Long Time Ago, There Was War Between Pokmon And Humans. Then There Was Really Bright Light Coming From Sky, And Shadowy Figure Fall From Sky. It Destroyed Everything, Pokmon And Humans And Then Just Disappeared. Many Years After That, Team Rocket Found Mysterious Tower From Desert. It Was Guarded By Many Strong Pokmon. What Is Secret Of The Tower?

Story Will Continue...

Chapter 1 - The Mission
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If You Want To Join, Fill This Form.

Name:
Age:
Personality:
Pokmon:
Sprite And Overworld:
Age 30
I am sobbing with Mew...He is dying...
Seen April 12th, 2016
Posted February 14th, 2008
337 posts
17.4 Years

You know all about my charecter check my comic and yea I will be in Team Rocket!
PM me for a battle! Here is my name and freindcode!

Name: Michael
Friend Code: 5197 9887 7813

http://z15.invisionfree.com/PokemonSpritersForum/

Jaybob

\/Chat down there\/

Age 29
Somewhere in the Uk not quite sure where XD
Seen June 5th, 2016
Posted November 19th, 2013
1,624 posts
18 Years
Name: Yen
Age: 16
Personality: Stubborn but kind
Pokmon: Vulpix lvl 30, Pichu Lvl 20 and Eevee lvl 25
Sprite And Overworld:

I'll be a member of team rocket if you wanna edit my character and put and R on him then that's fine by me ^_^
Pokemon Y
FC: 3797-7091-5531
Safari Type: Normal
Safari Pokemon: Chansey - Lillipup - Minccino
PM Me if you add me
Age 28
By a tree next to a beach relaxing.
Seen August 9th, 2007
Posted March 6th, 2007
868 posts
17.5 Years
Good comic! Reminds me of silons comic though. Anyway knowing you, It will turn out awsome. So ill join now.
Name: Danial Gretto
Age: 16
Personality: Brave/picky
Pokemon: Bayleaf,Quilava,Crocanaw.
Sprites:

Thx Diamond star!

I Used to be ~Dragon~Master~

Smarties-chan

Should've had that name change

Age 21
Seen September 12th, 2015
Posted September 5th, 2009
3,966 posts
18.4 Years
Is it just me or is the main character being a Team Rocket member becoming a clich here? Anyways...

The panels are way too big, me thinks -.- The spelling and grammar are horrible too. I'll just take some quotes from your comic and show you what I mean... (corrections in bold)

Thanks for coming here, Silon! I have a mission for you
So what do I have to do?
Some other team rocket members found a mysterious (not mysteroius) from the desert(the name of the desert would be nice here -.-)
I have a mission to do, so (I don't think so fits in here very well, but w/e...) can I use the teleport machine?
That was just the beggining. I couldn't help noticing your characters seem to have no personality at all, how often have you seen TR members thanking or talking politely to eachother? Your plot needs to be much more descriptive too. Why does Giovanni want Silon to investigate the tower? Is there a rumor of a strong Pokmon dwelling there or something? (that would fit TRs style). And how come the black thing that fell from the sky destroyed everything, but only a few years later the Silph.co has been rebuilded and TR has taken over it again? And how the heck can someone who's dead make buildings anyway? You said the creature destroyed everything. Surely you didn't mean that. Did you mean it destroyed everything in its path, perhaps? And why don't people bother actually making their own casts nowadays?
Age 31
Mystic Peak, Seibo Region
Seen March 2nd, 2008
Posted October 31st, 2006
237 posts
17.7 Years
ok heres my trainer....

Name:Latias Tamer
Age:18
Personality:Brave,Funny/Humerous, Kind,
Pokmon:Latias

These are latias tamer sprites. With LT disgiused as a rocket, magma and aqua.(Newly New and improved version).

Favourite Comics
1.Pokemon: Odyssey
2.Pokemon:Instincts NB
3.Pokemon:Exterminators
4.Pokemon: Travelers
5.Destiny of Darkness
Age 31
Mystic Peak, Seibo Region
Seen March 2nd, 2008
Posted October 31st, 2006
237 posts
17.7 Years
sorry i didnt mean to double post i axadently pressed post twice..im sorry

also im changing my sprites a bit

These are latias tamer sprites. With LT disgiused as a rocket, magma and aqua.(Newly New and improved version).

Favourite Comics
1.Pokemon: Odyssey
2.Pokemon:Instincts NB
3.Pokemon:Exterminators
4.Pokemon: Travelers
5.Destiny of Darkness
Age 30
I am sobbing with Mew...He is dying...
Seen April 12th, 2016
Posted February 14th, 2008
337 posts
17.4 Years
Omega may I just say why is everyone making a TR comic now!
Last week I started Prepare 4 Trouble and it seemed nobody had one like it then suddenly you make one it starts the same as mine...and the way the speech is set is not that good either I am sorry but I would have to rate it 3/10 maybe it will be good in later comics... Please do not take that as an insult...
PM me for a battle! Here is my name and freindcode!

Name: Michael
Friend Code: 5197 9887 7813

http://z15.invisionfree.com/PokemonSpritersForum/