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Originally Posted by ..:whitewolf:..
i like it but her eyes look weird and her head looks odd
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Word. The only thing I can see is the eye-size and possibly the head-shape. It might be a bit too wide. An honest mistake. I do this alot. Sometimes I end up rubbing through the paper because I cant' draw light lines for some reason. Thank goodness for computors is all i can say. <3 ctrl+z
About the revised version:
The eyes are a little bit too big, this time. Also, I suggest changing the nose a little bit. It should only be to the side if her head is pointed to the side. If shes looking right at u, it should be like this:

or a straight line with some shading to one side. Whichever you prefer.
also, I would make the neck a bit shorter.
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