Pokemon crypton scnd thread

Started by Deano Beano March 2nd, 2006 12:51 PM
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Seen May 29th, 2007
Posted May 8th, 2006
15 posts
17.2 Years
Story:
You are a boy named jack, you are new to the pokemon world and you want to become a pokemon master. You start with a pokmon calld cambreon. You have to battle through the pokemon in the wild and beat the gym leaders to get to the pokemon leage where you will have to battle skilled trainers, and your winning prize is cryptonite which yuo can use to stop all evel with it...

I will post some screenshots later but how do u post them
Age 30
Seyda Neen
Seen July 22nd, 2006
Posted April 2nd, 2006
35 posts
17.5 Years
Erm....what happened to the 5-line storyline?

It looks good.....but then again, not good.

The storyline basically seems like a clone from Red and Blue.

Basically, it's 'Get Pokemon, Beat Gym Leaders, Beat Elite Four, Stop Evil'

Try more originality in your storyline. :)

I'm one to criticize, so I'm sorry if this was taken offensively.


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Seen May 29th, 2007
Posted May 8th, 2006
15 posts
17.2 Years
Ok im making a new story line
Story:
You are a boy named jack, you are new to the pokemon world and you want to become a pokemon master. You start with a pokmon calld cambreon. You get to pick an extra pokemon from proffesser oak. You have to battle your way theough jyms and do secret missions like wearing a Team Genetic suite to pretend to be one of them. You have to eventually get the cryptonite from Team Genetic wich allows you to power the rocket in invetion city and fly to cryptoland where there are wierd pokemon that could wipe out the hole human race and pokemon race if controlled by Team Genetic. You have to beat the pokemon then return to the region of Plantezo and hope to save the world......

and thanks for pointing that out for me to do a better story

Yuoaman

I don't know who I am either.

Age 30
Male
Ontario, Canada
Seen January 28th, 2023
Posted December 12th, 2018
4,582 posts
17.8 Years
Its going to be tuff making all new pokemon and geting people to give them to you. I have a few but they belong to Zerro Dev. and it's members only sorry.
Please don't use the word 'tuff' that way, the word is 'tough', tuff means cool...

On Topic: The screen looks pretty good for someone new- notice I don't call you n00b, because you actually know what you are doing- I hope you do finish it. It shows some real potential- your mapping.

P.S. Work on your spelling...
"pps new screenie" - No, really shut up yuoaman.

Haaave you read my LP?
Pokémon Quartz - The only one of mine really worth reading.

What about my [Un]Abridged series?
Aquaman the Unabridged Parody Series - Language warning.
In the belly of a Ozone Snake
Seen March 13th, 2021
Posted November 21st, 2006
40 posts
17.3 Years
Wow This looks really cool! I cant really do a lot untill I learn how to scratch sprite better but I support the project all the way!
Im leaving the pokemon community for a while. I will be in Oekaki. I barely post but I feel like when I post a ton of people ignore me or just plain be rude to me(once in a while). For some reason when Every I post in a moteratly going good thread it shuts down after my post. I dont see whats wrong with me, It just seems like people dont except me for who I am. Dont ban me since I see no reason too, I might come back in a couple of months or a year.

Want to see some art work I did? Well Then Check out my thread: The newest Psp fanatic there is! Hey I also made a comic: Celey: A Weird Story My Eggs