Pokemon The 4th Generation

Started by Kurosaki Ichigo March 15th, 2006 8:42 PM
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What do you think of my comics? ^_~

Age 33
Lucy's Lap
Seen October 20th, 2009
Posted September 27th, 2009
2,489 posts
17.3 Years
If you read here post here... Dont be selfish.

Plot: This is a comic that is based on my 4th Generation Hack, about the stories and adventures of the brother and sister rivals, Terry and Alexis.

Season One - A Whole New Adventure
Episode 1: The Problem With Professor Roberts
Episode 2: The Journey Begins
Episode 3: The Bugotrosity/The Eeveetrosity
Episode 4: Team Forest Appears
Episode 5: Lovers Paths
Episode 6: The Gym Parcel
Episode 7: Team Forest Again?!
Episode 8: The Brother And Sister Reunion
Episode 9a: Houndox vs Salamander
Episode 9b: A Leech Of Ralts
Episode 10a: The Team Is Complete
Episode 10b: Team Forest's Admin Wes - Final Episode of Season 1

Season 2 - The Phasania Region
Episode 11: A Bird Of A Capture
Episode 12: Its A Birjavu
Episode 13: A Buggy Encounter
Episode 14: New Friends, New Arguements

Bonus DVD Material
Sneek Peak 1: The Three Starters - Just a Peek of the Three Starters from the Front
Bonus Episode 1: Professor Roberts Dream ** Warning ** (One Frame About Them Saying They Want To Make Love More XD)
** Porfessor Roberts OW Was Fixed **
** ONLY Episode To Show Terry With No Bandena **
Bonus Episode 2: The Third Trainer?! - (Partially Reveals A Later Section Of The Comic) -
Bonus Episode 3: The Bad Dream - What Really Happened In Tropical Forest!
Bonus Episode 4: That Darn Cat!

Character Bios


Credits
Spriters Resource - Alot Of Pokestuff
Nusegi - Professor Roberts Trainer Sprite - Helped A Bit -
UmbreonMaster - Helped With New 4th Gen Pokes
DarthJarJar - Helped With Cassandra Sprite
Pokesho - For Several Sprites for Later On
Coronis - For Several Sprites for Later On
Unknown Spriter - For A Pre-Evo for Later On
Wilph - For Several New 4th Gen Pokemon Sprites for Later On
Dude396 - For Female Trainer, And Some Poke Sprites
MysticLugia - For Starters Evos and Deserpent
Other People - For Making Sprites, Or Providing Them For Thier Trainers In The Comic
Myself XD - Everything Else

If You'd Like To Help
Simply claim the character you'd like to work on, overworlds and overworld poses and so on and then post the sprite in the same post or separately, i'll have a form in a bit. People will be able to join in the comic soon.

Other Notes
Mapping is Temp, as is the Overworlds, if you'd like to contribute to anything in the comic, you know what to do.
**Formely Known As Kakashi Hatake**

**Flannery is my Goddess, I'm her #1 Obsessor**
Bishies: Matsumoto Rangiku, Shiba Kuukaku, Soi Fong, Hikari(Pearl), Raven
Pairings: Ichigo x Shihouin Yoruichi, Genis X Presea, Aang X Katara, Toph X Sokka, Kratos X Raine
My Trainer Card
Age 33
Lucy's Lap
Seen October 20th, 2009
Posted September 27th, 2009
2,489 posts
17.3 Years
Hmm?, in what way is it new, and thanks its my first for a long time but my first Pokemon wise comic, i've always done sidescroller types, aka Mario, Sonic DBZ Etc.
**Formely Known As Kakashi Hatake**

**Flannery is my Goddess, I'm her #1 Obsessor**
Bishies: Matsumoto Rangiku, Shiba Kuukaku, Soi Fong, Hikari(Pearl), Raven
Pairings: Ichigo x Shihouin Yoruichi, Genis X Presea, Aang X Katara, Toph X Sokka, Kratos X Raine
My Trainer Card
Age 33
Lucy's Lap
Seen October 20th, 2009
Posted September 27th, 2009
2,489 posts
17.3 Years
Ah, i see ^_^, thanks its based off my hack too, i hope people like it and wanna help, and the text bubble from pokemon fire red really helps.
**Formely Known As Kakashi Hatake**

**Flannery is my Goddess, I'm her #1 Obsessor**
Bishies: Matsumoto Rangiku, Shiba Kuukaku, Soi Fong, Hikari(Pearl), Raven
Pairings: Ichigo x Shihouin Yoruichi, Genis X Presea, Aang X Katara, Toph X Sokka, Kratos X Raine
My Trainer Card
Age 33
Lucy's Lap
Seen October 20th, 2009
Posted September 27th, 2009
2,489 posts
17.3 Years
^_^, thanks its great comments guys, i hope others will like it, episode 2 tomorrow hopefully.
**Formely Known As Kakashi Hatake**

**Flannery is my Goddess, I'm her #1 Obsessor**
Bishies: Matsumoto Rangiku, Shiba Kuukaku, Soi Fong, Hikari(Pearl), Raven
Pairings: Ichigo x Shihouin Yoruichi, Genis X Presea, Aang X Katara, Toph X Sokka, Kratos X Raine
My Trainer Card
Age 33
Lucy's Lap
Seen October 20th, 2009
Posted September 27th, 2009
2,489 posts
17.3 Years
I've only done one, and your saying "My Comics" are good, lol, going to bed now.
**Formely Known As Kakashi Hatake**

**Flannery is my Goddess, I'm her #1 Obsessor**
Bishies: Matsumoto Rangiku, Shiba Kuukaku, Soi Fong, Hikari(Pearl), Raven
Pairings: Ichigo x Shihouin Yoruichi, Genis X Presea, Aang X Katara, Toph X Sokka, Kratos X Raine
My Trainer Card
Age 33
Lucy's Lap
Seen October 20th, 2009
Posted September 27th, 2009
2,489 posts
17.3 Years
Yes, as i say i was being lazy and well yeah lol, also i have a massive character sheet thing but since not all the characters are done yet, i can't put the proper thing up but it has each chars descriptions ^^
**Formely Known As Kakashi Hatake**

**Flannery is my Goddess, I'm her #1 Obsessor**
Bishies: Matsumoto Rangiku, Shiba Kuukaku, Soi Fong, Hikari(Pearl), Raven
Pairings: Ichigo x Shihouin Yoruichi, Genis X Presea, Aang X Katara, Toph X Sokka, Kratos X Raine
My Trainer Card
Age 33
Lucy's Lap
Seen October 20th, 2009
Posted September 27th, 2009
2,489 posts
17.3 Years
Any comments or suggestions you guys have?
**Formely Known As Kakashi Hatake**

**Flannery is my Goddess, I'm her #1 Obsessor**
Bishies: Matsumoto Rangiku, Shiba Kuukaku, Soi Fong, Hikari(Pearl), Raven
Pairings: Ichigo x Shihouin Yoruichi, Genis X Presea, Aang X Katara, Toph X Sokka, Kratos X Raine
My Trainer Card
Age 33
Lucy's Lap
Seen October 20th, 2009
Posted September 27th, 2009
2,489 posts
17.3 Years
TUP?, the speech i've used on this is very different from what i generally use, i honestly think the layout is the best i've done so far. And yes i will be allowing others to join, i'll be adding the form after Episode 2 or 3.
**Formely Known As Kakashi Hatake**

**Flannery is my Goddess, I'm her #1 Obsessor**
Bishies: Matsumoto Rangiku, Shiba Kuukaku, Soi Fong, Hikari(Pearl), Raven
Pairings: Ichigo x Shihouin Yoruichi, Genis X Presea, Aang X Katara, Toph X Sokka, Kratos X Raine
My Trainer Card
Age 29
England.
Seen January 5th, 2008
Posted August 8th, 2007
4,419 posts
18.7 Years
TUP?, the speech i've used on this is very different from what i generally use, i honestly think the layout is the best i've done so far. And yes i will be allowing others to join, i'll be adding the form after Episode 2 or 3.
Text Under Panels= TUP, its generally hated by most of the decent comic makers here on PC.
Age 33
Lucy's Lap
Seen October 20th, 2009
Posted September 27th, 2009
2,489 posts
17.3 Years
Of course Ryan, and well funny how most comics i see on here use that but thats just me, but i was using those to make it feel like the pokemon games.
**Formely Known As Kakashi Hatake**

**Flannery is my Goddess, I'm her #1 Obsessor**
Bishies: Matsumoto Rangiku, Shiba Kuukaku, Soi Fong, Hikari(Pearl), Raven
Pairings: Ichigo x Shihouin Yoruichi, Genis X Presea, Aang X Katara, Toph X Sokka, Kratos X Raine
My Trainer Card
Age 31
Seen October 20th, 2019
Posted April 8th, 2016
2,881 posts
18.9 Years
Well for this comic I have a few things to say. I don't really like the text under the panels, there was one minor grammar mistake I noticed. Weren't they supposed to be carrying the Professor? If its's supposed to be a new region, then you should avoid using Kanto and Hoenn maps. I mean whats the point if every map is from a different game, except with some color changes. I'll give you a grade later on.

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Age 33
He/him
Denmark
Seen April 3rd, 2023
Posted March 11th, 2022
2,405 posts
19.7 Years
Of course Ryan, and well funny how most comics i see on here use that but thats just me, but i was using those to make it feel like the pokemon games.
It is not the way comics were meant to be. It distracts the attention from comic itself, and it also looks stupid.
Age 33
Lucy's Lap
Seen October 20th, 2009
Posted September 27th, 2009
2,489 posts
17.3 Years
Ok to clear things up first of all, i can't really make them carrying her so thats a problem, also i suck at mapping so the mapping and overworlds are just temp for the moment, but i'll try and improve for the next episode.
**Formely Known As Kakashi Hatake**

**Flannery is my Goddess, I'm her #1 Obsessor**
Bishies: Matsumoto Rangiku, Shiba Kuukaku, Soi Fong, Hikari(Pearl), Raven
Pairings: Ichigo x Shihouin Yoruichi, Genis X Presea, Aang X Katara, Toph X Sokka, Kratos X Raine
My Trainer Card