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Started by Live Update King April 2nd, 2006 5:36 AM
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Eon-Rider

An "Original" PC Supporter

Age 29
Male
Sydney
Seen July 5th, 2011
Posted March 31st, 2011
7,498 posts
18.4 Years
On the Pokemon part of your site, it's called Emerald, not Emraid.
My Links:
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If you think my posts are rude then you can't handle the truth.

saul

"My goodness, that's odd."

Age 31
LOL, at my House
Seen March 21st, 2015
Posted August 23rd, 2013
742 posts
19.2 Years
I'm posting =O

Okay, alot of stuff that needs work, but I'm guessing this is your first site? or you're at least new to all this.

Anyways, first thing - grammar. We all tend to not use it when on the net (I'm guilty of that *looks over at "net"* but we still need to use it for the most part.

"Go on. join it" -- sounds choppy xD (I know I sound like a teacher) but really (honestly) some people get VERY annoyed by it when I first started a site I was flamed for not using grammar. Not to mention, many people consider it "n00bish"

Next, links. I saw a post above complaining about too many links. There's no such thing as too many links, just unorganized links. Why not try to organize them? have stuff that realtes more to your SITE (not the content, the SITE) in one group, your personal pages in another, and thye content in one. take the following as an example:

Home
Latest News
Coming Soon
Forums
Polls Please Vote
Guest Room
Chat Room

Sonic
Pokemon
My Pictures
Weather
Test Page

Favorites Websites
Favorite Music
My Blog

See how all of those are seperated according to what they would belong in?

And last, layout. I would first like to say (to everyone). LAYOUTS ARE NOT WHAT THE WEBSITE IS ABOUT! You go to a website for information. entertainment, etc. not to stare at a shiny layout (sorry, but if you do then you might as well not be on the internet). Now, theer are times when the layout is not "appropriate" and I can think of one on your site. the Pokemon section -- what's with the baby feet? Changing the icture that has SOMETHING to do with Pokemon would be nice =D
Next I'll give a couple ideas that might make the layout better, believe it or not a premade freewebs template can be nice. Instead of the background your using now where the content goes, why not use white? it blends in with the header and side bar. and the logo might be better a tad bit larger and a color that would go with the rest of the design, maybe a very light blue?

And yes, It's not the best layout I've seen (freewebs isn't my favorite) but it's still nice and you shouldn't criticize people on their layouts, even if it is horrid (no I'm not saying your site is horrid). Remember, layouts are more of a decoration.

Anyways, hope that helps ^^;;

Faltzer

Male
Seen April 19th, 2020
Posted March 22nd, 2017
1,670 posts
17.6 Years
I would have to say you need to improve your spelling and Grammar

Also what is the need for a weather website?No offense but that sounds kinda noobish.And instead of making a whole page just to insert a link to it Just link the whole page for it

You seriously need to learn HTML.


usami

biohazard

Age 32
Male
Iowa
Seen October 5th, 2021
Posted May 1st, 2014
7,305 posts
19.5 Years
Phillip, please do not double post and you can delete your own messages.
Though the two posts are two days apart which would seem okay to me, but there is nothing worth posting in that post, therfore, it isn't alright.

aRedMoon

Wait for me outside the lines

Age 34
Male
Minnesota
Seen April 23rd, 2018
Posted September 10th, 2013
11,126 posts
19.2 Years
I don't think I have ever seen a website that deserved as much hate and dislike as yours.
facebook \\ twitter \\ blog a.k.a life // tumblr // google+

june 10, 2003 = registered at old pc
march 24, 2004 = registered at new pc
june, 2004 = modded ;;; august, 2004 = quit/fired (point of debate)
december, 2004 = banned ;;; december 2, 2005 = unbanned
june 10, 2008 = omg... five years!
june 10, 2012 = countdown to nine years on pc...

aRedMoon

Wait for me outside the lines

Age 34
Male
Minnesota
Seen April 23rd, 2018
Posted September 10th, 2013
11,126 posts
19.2 Years
There is nothing worth commenting on. It's a default freewebs site that kills braincells.

And he's spammed it everywhere, which earns it the bolded terms. ;O
facebook \\ twitter \\ blog a.k.a life // tumblr // google+

june 10, 2003 = registered at old pc
march 24, 2004 = registered at new pc
june, 2004 = modded ;;; august, 2004 = quit/fired (point of debate)
december, 2004 = banned ;;; december 2, 2005 = unbanned
june 10, 2008 = omg... five years!
june 10, 2012 = countdown to nine years on pc...

aRedMoon

Wait for me outside the lines

Age 34
Male
Minnesota
Seen April 23rd, 2018
Posted September 10th, 2013
11,126 posts
19.2 Years
He must use spellcheck or something then ;D
facebook \\ twitter \\ blog a.k.a life // tumblr // google+

june 10, 2003 = registered at old pc
march 24, 2004 = registered at new pc
june, 2004 = modded ;;; august, 2004 = quit/fired (point of debate)
december, 2004 = banned ;;; december 2, 2005 = unbanned
june 10, 2008 = omg... five years!
june 10, 2012 = countdown to nine years on pc...

usami

biohazard

Age 32
Male
Iowa
Seen October 5th, 2021
Posted May 1st, 2014
7,305 posts
19.5 Years
Ugh, there is no need to bash him, he is banned for now, so to stop any further posting and bashing in here I shall close this. >>;

closed


Since Phillip in now unbanned, thread is reopened.

opened

Eon-Rider

An "Original" PC Supporter

Age 29
Male
Sydney
Seen July 5th, 2011
Posted March 31st, 2011
7,498 posts
18.4 Years
I'm just curious, but why do you need two forums for your site?
My Links:
Kablooza // My YouTube Channel // Friend Codes


ANYTHING works in-game

Want a free PokePark Meowth?


If you think my posts are rude then you can't handle the truth.

aRedMoon

Wait for me outside the lines

Age 34
Male
Minnesota
Seen April 23rd, 2018
Posted September 10th, 2013
11,126 posts
19.2 Years
"Philips website."

It's missing an apostrophe. I won't even continue beyond that.
facebook \\ twitter \\ blog a.k.a life // tumblr // google+

june 10, 2003 = registered at old pc
march 24, 2004 = registered at new pc
june, 2004 = modded ;;; august, 2004 = quit/fired (point of debate)
december, 2004 = banned ;;; december 2, 2005 = unbanned
june 10, 2008 = omg... five years!
june 10, 2012 = countdown to nine years on pc...

aRedMoon

Wait for me outside the lines

Age 34
Male
Minnesota
Seen April 23rd, 2018
Posted September 10th, 2013
11,126 posts
19.2 Years
A website is made to please both you and its visitors.

You need to remember that.
facebook \\ twitter \\ blog a.k.a life // tumblr // google+

june 10, 2003 = registered at old pc
march 24, 2004 = registered at new pc
june, 2004 = modded ;;; august, 2004 = quit/fired (point of debate)
december, 2004 = banned ;;; december 2, 2005 = unbanned
june 10, 2008 = omg... five years!
june 10, 2012 = countdown to nine years on pc...