Kisho Comic

Started by Eshamuel April 30th, 2006 3:20 PM
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Loved it i cant wait for the real stuff homes

EDIT by FG: UnseenIdiot, do not evade the censor bypass. Don't use extra letters to disguise language which is banned on these boards. You have been warned.

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UnseenIdiot: Don't use 'gay' in a manner like that again. As it can easily provoke peoples' feelings and you shouldn't be using that as an insult anyway, it's both immature and unacceptable. Recheck the rules of the forum for things you must NOT do. Meanwhile, I'll edit your post. Use an insult like that again and it's a warning.

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Ok sorry my bad my bad i cant even remember what i said lol cuz you changed it so sorry tho wont let it happen again!

Oh yah and guys the next episode is cool!
and btw all the names have meanings too!
Like Kisho Means Knows His Own Mind
And Tomo means Twin (youll see why l8r in story)


Sorry for double posting the edit thing would not load so i just used quick reply...
Well if u want to support kisho put this on ur signature and link to here!
Crap i messed up!

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The background GFX were disgusting,no shading,not textured in any way and they dident fit in/ You need to use Text Boxes instead of just slapping the words on and try to refrain from using Italic fonts. Try and form some kind of plot because that is just random fighting and therefor, VERY BORING! Try and use english properly in it, so words like..."WTF" are replaced with "What the ****"(or something less rude preferably). I see little random pixels scatterd about in some frames (especially on the word "The End" and "Kisho", these make the comic look very messy. By not giving credit in your first post you are stealing those sprites and that is frowned apon alot here. You changed the background color numerous times. That makes the comic also look messy.
Sorry to say but this comic is disgraceful. You need to try harder as this is a simple 5 minuite job (if not less).

1/10 sorry.

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The background GFX were disgusting,no shading,not textured in any way and they dident fit in/ You need to use Text Boxes instead of just slapping the words on and try to refrain from using Italic fonts. Try and form some kind of plot because that is just random fighting and therefor, VERY BORING! Try and use english properly in it, so words like..."WTF" are replaced with "What the ****"(or something less rude preferably). I see little random pixels scatterd about in some frames (especially on the word "The End" and "Kisho", these make the comic look very messy. By not giving credit in your first post you are stealing those sprites and that is frowned apon alot here. You changed the background color numerous times. That makes the comic also look messy.
Sorry to say but this comic is disgraceful. You need to try harder as this is a simple 5 minuite job (if not less).

1/10 sorry.
The reason there was no plot is b/c it was a demo and i stated where he got the sprites from... But otherwise thanx for helping him out...

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The background GFX were disgusting,no shading,not textured in any way and they dident fit in/ You need to use Text Boxes instead of just slapping the words on and try to refrain from using Italic fonts. Try and form some kind of plot because that is just random fighting and therefor, VERY BORING! Try and use english properly in it, so words like..."WTF" are replaced with "What the ****"(or something less rude preferably). I see little random pixels scatterd about in some frames (especially on the word "The End" and "Kisho", these make the comic look very messy. By not giving credit in your first post you are stealing those sprites and that is frowned apon alot here. You changed the background color numerous times. That makes the comic also look messy.
Sorry to say but this comic is disgraceful. You need to try harder as this is a simple 5 minuite job (if not less).

1/10 sorry.
I agree. Try getting backgrounds from the Shy Guy Kingdom or other sprite websites.
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Posted May 15th, 2006
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Alright ya'll really sorry to have messed up so bad. I'm new on this stuff. And I'm normally rather busy.

To UnseenIdiot: Thanks for helpin me out dude.

To Dashiel: Thanks for your... slams? Well you see Dashiel, there is an art to origininality in comics. When a comic is different, it can catch attention (which would explain the lack of text boxes). Also, as UnseenIdiot stated, I was new, and didn't know how to edit it so I could put in credit to Panel Monkey (so sorry by the way). Also, the scattered pixels: Those would be there because of the Paintshop design technique I call spray paint. It's not there to look plane, it's to look cool to some people. Also, the fact that it's a demo to more show a little on how I do things (excluding the background) and also it's not a real "episode" explains a little bit. And since I have already started on production of the 1st official episode, it will lead more into the plot in the 2nd. If you havn't noticed already, I enjoy being different from other people in forms of art. It's how people be people. The color background change: In numerous anime shows and games, the sky changes color (often darker) when fight action or an evil force presents itself. And for the red and blue color, it's a cheesy motion action scene thing. But really, you had some good pointers if you look at it from your way. And as a last note: I don't really have the time or want to put the time into making this thing look awesome. It's for fun, and in my spare time.

To Zone: Thanks for the website refrences. I'll look into that.

To Hyperion & Maneachicken: More is on its way.

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Well seeing as I dont even know the meaning of that word (Must be some kind of strange slang." Yes. I presume there is a massive difference.
I presumed "Slashing" meant trying to throw the comic back in your face and to sound mean.
Criticism however,
Is completely different.

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Queen Boo, no offence bt you think anything that takes over 2 minutes to compile is good.

Anyways, the comic isn't exactly graphically pleasing, for some reason the background changes virtually every pannel, speach bubbles would be nice and if I were you I'd pay a visit to bghq.com

Also, Dashiel wasn't "Slammin'" you as you so affectionatly put it, he was critisisn you, if you can;t handle it then you're not fit for the trade.

Unseenidiot: How the hell you avoid a permanent ban is beyond me.

Signomi

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Er, Eshamuel, if you can't take criticism then don't even show your comics at all. There is always someone that's going to provide criticism on a certain part of a comic. Please take that fact and use such criticism to explore where the faults may be, not accuse the criticiser of something derogatorily.

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Queen Boo, no offence bt you think anything that takes over 2 minutes to compile is good.

Okay what is that suppost to mean? All I said was I never seen a comic or somethig similar like this before.

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honestly i think esham took it VERY well and im getting tired of the people on this forum u dont diss someone for likeing something there is something wrong with you people none of the stuff you say is helpful at all hes new and u totally slam him and basically say hes ignorant with the whole slang thin ur not better than anyone dashiel no one isd better than anyone...

BTW how did he take the critisism bad all he did was explain himself which there is nothing wrong with and once more Dashiel provoked him about it with the whole slang thing which was very uncalled for . and Vaati-san you arent a very cool person u know nothing about how long it took to make the comic... Esham hasnt posted another one b/c he thinks it is pointless because you people you all should be ashamed Vaati w/e dont come in unless you plan on helping and dont come in to say I agree with him make ur own comment and give ADVICE rather than say it sucks gawd you people are just not right...

Queen Boo thanks for giving him a GOOD comment even if it wasnt helpful its more helpful than a SLAM...

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