Forever, my love

Started by fallen_angel May 3rd, 2006 5:28 PM
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Age 30
Female
With phantom_zangetsu ^.~
Seen March 7th, 2014
Posted July 24th, 2011
238 posts
18.2 Years
Hey this is my latest poem. Help me correct anything wrong please. This is for of course phantom_of_death. ^_^

Forever, my love

My love for you will reach to the sky,
it will stretch towards the planets,
singing for you and I.

For it knows no end, my love,
surpasses the obstacles you may not know,
if can go from here to over there.

Don't you know how I feel?
No matter if you don't feel the same,
as I do, for it does not matter.

My love, how I want to wish you well,
with your troubles and your fears,
my heart aches with worry for you, my dear.

To me you're a silver treasure,
which surpasses any trinkets of gold.
Or sapphires or rubies.

So remember this well, my love,
will never cease or die,
it will always just grow every passing day.

Spoiler:
~*~My PC Family~*~
~My pair: phantom_zangetsu , My Big Sisters .: Dreamer :., Midori Chi, My father Cybex Mewtwo, my brother karasuma My brother-in-law code zero the deluge~


Age 31
together with fallen,ontop of shukaku's head
Seen December 9th, 2008
Posted April 28th, 2007
517 posts
17.8 Years
tee hee! i know this poem....
when you gave me the first copy, i sent it to microsoft word....and only a few spelling errors i saw, but i guess you corrected them right?

thanks anyways!


lovingly and forever paired with the one and only, fallen_angel


~pHaNt0m~