Rain's Legacy

Started by DragonQueenRachel May 19th, 2006 5:58 PM
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DragonQueenRachel

Soul of Trinity, Dragon Queen

Age 33
Neo Zion
Seen March 10th, 2009
Posted July 13th, 2007
755 posts
17 Years
This was very hard to make, so please be kind.

This story takes place in a distant region known as Rylia. It stars my own carachter Rain Skylark, her companion Steven Stone, the champion on occasion, Rachel Bolt, and of course Rain's Rival, Danielle Simms.

Okay, gotta get this cleared up quickly.

Credit for full trainer and Pokemon Sprites go to Pokemon2000, good site.

Everything else I found on a Serebii.net forum, credit goes to whoever found them.

I'm still getting the hang of this, so bear with me.

Chapter 1: The Beginning

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g261/DragonQueenRachel/Comic1.png - page 1.

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g261/DragonQueenRachel/Comic2.png - page 2

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g261/DragonQueenRachel/Comic3.png - page 3

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g261/DragonQueenRachel/Comic4.png - page 4

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g261/DragonQueenRachel/Comic5.png - page 5

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g261/DragonQueenRachel/Comic6.png - page 6

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g261/DragonQueenRachel/Comic7.png - page 7

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g261/DragonQueenRachel/Comic8.png - page 8

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g261/DragonQueenRachel/Comic9.png - page 9

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g261/DragonQueenRachel/Comic10.png - page 10

Chapter 2: First Pokemon, First Encounter

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g261/DragonQueenRachel/Comic11.png - page 11
Age 33
Lucy's Lap
Seen October 20th, 2009
Posted September 27th, 2009
2,489 posts
17.3 Years
Oh and...press the post button once...instead of making it 5 times...XD
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Bishies: Matsumoto Rangiku, Shiba Kuukaku, Soi Fong, Hikari(Pearl), Raven
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DragonQueenRachel

Soul of Trinity, Dragon Queen

Age 33
Neo Zion
Seen March 10th, 2009
Posted July 13th, 2007
755 posts
17 Years
Okay, let me explain everything.

1. I was having posting problems, that was an accident.
2. I didn't know what to save it as, I'm new at this.
3. I'm a terrible artist, and had to work with what I had.

Okay, thats finaly taken care of, please be kind, I only have experience in writing.

Chizzy

Comic coming soon...

Age 31
UK
Seen October 27th, 2010
Posted June 22nd, 2010
1,475 posts
17.6 Years
Here we go...Get ready to Take this on Board...

1. Poor Recolours...(and what looks like Paint Defaults)
2. Poorly Put in Sprites...Use the No Backgound Button on Paint!...
3. Have a Fixed Panel Size...Making sure the Battle Bsckgrounds Fit and that the Whole Comic is linked Together...
4. Use Pokemon Backsprites...Pokemon Elite 2000 has them...
5. I see no Credit. Sprite Theft is dealt with strongly.
6. In the Battle you used diffent Fonts and sizes and Colours for the Names. Keep them the Same...
7. Don't use *blahblah* Its a Comic...Not a Roleplay...Show what the Charachters do...
8. Gather the Correct Tilesets and use them well...Your water in the second comic is different...and don't make the comic if you need smething to make it... I have a lot of Self Ripped Stuff if you would like to borrow them...Just PM me...
Now you could remember me...

Then Again...

...its been a while

DragonQueenRachel

Soul of Trinity, Dragon Queen

Age 33
Neo Zion
Seen March 10th, 2009
Posted July 13th, 2007
755 posts
17 Years
Okay, reactions:

1. I have bad art skills, and they where the closest I could find.
2. I didn't know there was a no background button.
3. Working on it.
4. I looked, couldn't find them, help would be most apreciated.
5. The Credit issue has been taken care of, I had full intention of giving credit where it is due, it was an honest mistake.
6. Hey, this is my first Comic, I'm still working out the kinks in it.
7. Bad artistic skills is my only excuse.
8. Phew, last one, anyway, I'll be sure to do that, you really gotta keep in mind that all my experience is in writting.

DragonQueenRachel

Soul of Trinity, Dragon Queen

Age 33
Neo Zion
Seen March 10th, 2009
Posted July 13th, 2007
755 posts
17 Years
I'll see what I can do to get that done, but I've been focusing more on the characters recently, for some strange reason I've already done the sprites for the Gym Leaders and Elite 4, I guess I was bored.

Well, I was intending for it to be centered around a Pokemon journey, and naturaly the whole team trying to take over the world thing, which we got a small tidbit of information on in one of the pages, but so far I'm running low on good ideas.

Chizzy

Comic coming soon...

Age 31
UK
Seen October 27th, 2010
Posted June 22nd, 2010
1,475 posts
17.6 Years
I'll see what I can do to get that done, but I've been focusing more on the characters recently, for some strange reason I've already done the sprites for the Gym Leaders and Elite 4, I guess I was bored.

Well, I was intending for it to be centered around a Pokemon journey, and naturaly the whole team trying to take over the world thing, which we got a small tidbit of information on in one of the pages, but so far I'm running low on good ideas.
I Think that Most of the Sprite Comic Makers are Running Flat on Ideas...and as you said you are doing the Elite Four? and Gym Leaders? Do you want me to mkae the Sprites like im doing for 'Rain'?
Now you could remember me...

Then Again...

...its been a while

Signomi

Age 32
Female
Britland (United Kingdom)
Seen 1 Week Ago
Posted October 10th, 2022
7,480 posts
17.8 Years
Maneachicken: Remember, all posts (and I mean the whole content of the posts) must be relative to the comic only. You could've had a discusion about PC Families via PM, why on earth did you bring it here? Don't go offtopic.

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Age 31
Seen June 10th, 2006
Posted June 4th, 2006
438 posts
17.1 Years
Okay, reactions:

1. I have bad art skills, and they where the closest I could find.
2. I didn't know there was a no background button.
3. Working on it.
4. I looked, couldn't find them, help would be most apreciated.
5. The Credit issue has been taken care of, I had full intention of giving credit where it is due, it was an honest mistake.
6. Hey, this is my first Comic, I'm still working out the kinks in it.
7. Bad artistic skills is my only excuse.
8. Phew, last one, anyway, I'll be sure to do that, you really gotta keep in mind that all my experience is in writting.
You don't need art skills to make a recolor. Recoloring is the lowest form of spriting and takes no skill at all, aside from knowing how to double click and move an arrow in different places for darker and lighter colors.

Hantsuki

a little wolf inside a girl

Age 32
Female
A pain in your . . .
Seen June 23rd, 2014
Posted September 9th, 2010
5,469 posts
18.2 Years
This is why you need to make your sprites first and get better at them by improving and learning from your mistakes before making a comic. Look at everyone else's comic and you'll see the difference. You need to improve on your recoloring. You don't just add paint to a certain spot you want recolored, you need to shade it in as well or it will look terrible. Also, for doing the battles and your locations and such, you need to be a little creative. Don't get me wrong, the plot is rather creative, but you just editted the battle scenes and stuff and it doesn't look neat. You need to spend more time on improving these instead of rushing to do your next chapter. Good luck.

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