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Old February 10th, 2010 (10:27 AM). Edited February 11th, 2010 by Muffin™.
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    CopperBrown Version

    First of all, I'd like to thank YouTube (Yes, YOUTUBE) and PokeCommunity to inspire me to make a hack.


    Thank you



    Story
    You live in the small town of Salinia Town, the town in which you lived in for about a year. You heard that you have to go to school today. It's graduation day if you get a test score of 90 or over. Your mom says you are to old for you to get dropped of at school.
    You try to get to Quilvania Academy, but you must have a Pokemon to go to Quilvania Academy. You go to Prof. Pine's Lab, and get your Pokemon. Then you go to Quilvania Academy. You graduate and set off on your Pokemon journey with your Rival! Meanwhile, Team Core is trying to use Mew's and MewTwo's power to create a Pokemon so big, and so powerful, that you must stop it. There's only one thing to do...


    Features
    -New starters, Eevee, Jolteon, Flareon, Vaporeon, Espeon, Umbreon
    -New Evolution Steps (Scyther to Scizor give item Metal Coat, Umbreon needs Moon Stone and Espeon needs Sun Stone)
    -New bank system!
    -Headbutt Trees and new HM, Rock Climb!
    -New Maps and New Story line.
    -New scripts
    -2 Professors!
    -Day/Night System


    Videos
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    (None yet :D)



    Screen Shots
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    Code:
    [URL=http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?p=5542175/][IMG]http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/5844/42910935.png[*/IMG][*/URL]
    (Remove the *)





    Jobs
    -Someone to hack the title screen
    -Someone to hack the sprites
    -Script help (20% of the time)


    Credits
    HackMew - XSE, A-Trainer, Free Space Finder, Tutorials, unLZ.GBA, and some help
    LU-HO - Advance Map 1.92
    VisualBoyAdvance
    Game Freak + Nintendo - Fire Red ROM
    Darthatron - Script help
    diegoisawesome - XSE tutorial

    Thanks everybody!!!!


    Downloads
    None yet!

    Alpha 1
    Scripts - 10% done
    Mapping - 60% done

    Estimate Time of completion of Alpha 1 :
    Over February Vacation

    That's about it!
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    Old February 10th, 2010 (10:56 AM).
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      This doesn't seem bad. I haven't seen a school-based hack pulled off yet, tbh, so maybe this will fill that gap. The screenshots aren't too shabby, either.


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      Just saying. xD. Mind changing that to "Well, hello there, [player]!"? Good punctuation/grammar is epic in hacks.
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      Old February 10th, 2010 (11:33 AM).
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        This doesn't seem bad. I haven't seen a school-based hack pulled off yet, tbh, so maybe this will fill that gap. The screenshots aren't too shabby, either.


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        Grammar Nazi Alert~

        Just saying. xD. Mind changing that to "Well, hello there, [player]!"? Good punctuation/grammar is epic in hacks.

        You only go into the school for one day though...
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        Old February 10th, 2010 (8:53 PM).
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        Nice~
        I like the school, even if you only go for a day. :D
        Good Luck! :D
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        Old February 11th, 2010 (11:13 AM).
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          Yo...The one thing that stuck out in my mind when I saw the screenshots is, if you're using a Pokemon's HM to climb rocks, why do you have to talk to the Hiker dude to use it? Or...Is he the guy who gives you the HM for Rock Climb?

          The school sounds like a good idea, and I'd like to see how that's set up, too. Aside from that, there's not too much else I can really comment about on this.
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          Old February 11th, 2010 (11:46 AM).
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            Yo...The one thing that stuck out in my mind when I saw the screenshots is, if you're using a Pokemon's HM to climb rocks, why do you have to talk to the Hiker dude to use it? Or...Is he the guy who gives you the HM for Rock Climb?

            The school sounds like a good idea, and I'd like to see how that's set up, too. Aside from that, there's not too much else I can really comment about on this.


            Yea... One of the screenies is out of date...


            And the school? It only has 2 floors you can go in. 3 Doors you can go in. (The school has some doors locked.. due to the fact that teachers like to have some privacy...)



            BTW, I need some help with this hack. I'm only 11, and this is one of my BIG projects.
            So, yea.

            That's 'bout it :3
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              You only go into the school for one day though...
              Yeah. But, I was just saying. xD. Anything involving going to school, for whatever amount of time.
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                nice the school, i think it would be better if you don't go to school anly one day but more often.......
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                  nice the school, i think it would be better if you don't go to school anly one day but more often.......

                  You do, afte- WAIT!!! I'm giving away to much info!!! I should keep my mouth shut!!! X: Ok, thar.
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                    ok no need to say everything if you want to keep it a surprise

                    well so good luck ;D
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                      Old February 13th, 2010 (11:48 AM).
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                      Okay. I'm not so sure about the story, it seems a little undeveloped. It doesn't have much appeal because, for example, I don't see any other background info besides about the player.To make it effective, it would be a good idea to try and weave in the evil team story with either the player's history or the academy.

                      About the screenshots, your maps don't look too good. Your building indoors seem too big an empty. The way you've done your mountains isn't t good either, it needs some work.

                      I can't really say anything else due to the lack of screens, but good luck!
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                      Old February 17th, 2010 (10:43 AM).
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                        It's very sucks............ worst..
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