Anime girl.

Started by Katakoe May 24th, 2006 9:06 AM
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Age 31
Australia.
Seen December 6th, 2008
Posted October 11th, 2006
130 posts
17 Years
I really shoulda gave her a beanie. ._. Something to hide all that hair. xD
But like, my blur tool thingy wouldn't work, so the CG is only smudged.. but I kinda like it that way. >>

So yeah, criticize, comment and stuff. <3;
We'll just upload this to Photobucket.
Side note: Woot! First thread. xD

Forest Grovyle

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Age 36
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The deepest, darkest corner of Ilex Forest
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Hiya Katakoe,

Nice work! ^^ This is a very cute picture indeed. I'd actually advise against using the blur tool too much, so that's not a problem! ;)

Crit-wise, I think the anatomy is a bit off in places - her arm looks a bit too long up to the elbow, and her face shape appears a bit slanted; you should be able to see her other eye. :) I really like the shading on the clothing though, and the background is simple and effective!

Keep it up! ;)

--FG

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Age 31
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Seen December 6th, 2008
Posted October 11th, 2006
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Hiya Katakoe,

Crit-wise, I think the anatomy is a bit off in places - her arm looks a bit too long up to the elbow, and her face shape appears a bit slanted; you should be able to see her other eye. :) I really like the shading on the clothing though, and the background is simple and effective!

Keep it up! ;)

--FG
I agree. The line art I drew was just to practice my CG skill [which still need obvious improvement] so I didn't bother too much with proportions or detail and such, but after I finished I really liked the way she looked, but being the lazy individual I am, I couldn't be bothered going back to fix her up. [Like hair, eyes, the arm etc etc].

But thanks for the advice, really appreciated.<3
Age 31
Seen October 2nd, 2008
Posted October 2nd, 2008
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Hey, I like the background. Simplistic ones are my favorites, I think. <3 And am I the only one who likes the hair?! XD

Nicely drawn! X3 I agree with FG's crits. It's not a good thing to rely on blur to clean up your shading, because it doesn't always come out looking attractive -- use a low opacity watercolor brush to go over the shading a few times to get that soft look, instead.

Details are always important! If you know something's wrong with it, go back and fix it! XP [Otherwise, people will assume that you didn't know you messed up.] Also, I think the picture would look better if you put a little more detail into her hair and face. Just keep this stuff in mind the next time you do something, it'll come out looking better. :3

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Posted September 4th, 2014
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You did a nice job with the coloring and shading. But I really don't like her hair because its messy. I don't mean to be mean but where is the other eye at.

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