Pokemon : The other

Started by ~Yaio~ June 1st, 2006 12:13 PM
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The Dash

Hurr.

Age 31
Lurking in the shadows of the Games Development fourms.
Seen June 12th, 2021
Posted July 29th, 2018
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http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g279/DarkSideGallery/89b6c094.png
You fail at posting links.

Now then, Onto the comic.
In general this isent bad for a first time,
however there are many flaws. I'll start with the fact that you used chat speak, if someone suprised you in real life would you say wtf? No. I dident think so. Next is your chat boxes, in many instances the text was to close to the box, try and centre it a bit more. You really should add borders to your frames as it makes them look nicer, oh and..Another journy comic? Please PLEASE try and be more original. Too many comics have started like this.

4/10 not bad for a first attempt.