Story of a Girl

Story of a Girl (Page 2 Up!)

Welcome to my first comic. I hope this is good, but if y'all don't like it - tell me. Constructive Critisicm is the best, so if you could supply me with some of that, you will be forever loved.
Okay, anywho ... to the comic:

Chapter 1 - Old World, New Beginnings
Part 1;; Just Forget It
Part 2;; Throw me a Bone


Which do you prefer?
Colored speech bubbles to determine who is speaking
Lines from the speech bubbles to determine who is speaking


Character Profiles/Trainer Cards
Arlynn Barron(First Appearance in Chapter 1, Part 1)
Arlynn is a fourteen year old soon-to-be trainer in the region of Meimu. She was born in the small town Yabun and was soon moved to Kousetsu by her older sister Anna. At the age of five, before her and her sister moved to Kousetsu, her mother and father disappeared, leaving only a note behind that read 'Off training, be back soon'. Three months passed, and still no sign of their parents. Poverty struck, and so they fled.
As she turned 14 on June Second, she was able to get her first Pokemon, and start lessons at the Kendall Academy.

Trainer Card To Be Added


Alec Taylor(First Appearance in Chapter 1, Part 2)
Alec Taylor is a fifteen year old Kousetsu Native. Last year on February fifteenth, he could have began his first year at Kendall Academy, but wanted to wait. His infatuation with Arlynn kept him away from it, he wanted to be in the same class as her. Now that she is starting her first year, he is as well.
Alec tries at every turn to get Arlynn to go on a date with him, but sadly - she won't even give him the time of day! The question is - why does he keep going after somone like Arlynn, when there are females much prettier and ... bustier ... than her, just throwing themselves at him?

Trainer Card to be Added


Anna Barron(First Appearance in Chapter 1, Part 1)
Anna Barron is Arlynn's older sister. Anna always dreamed of becoming a Pokemon trainer, but her dreams were smashed when their parents never returned. Anna spent her hard-earned money on two train tickets to Kousetsu, then quickly found two part-time jobs, and an old apartment building that was renting for little money. Anna is now like a mother to Arlynn, who still treats her with little respect.


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first comment yay!any way,i like it

i think the speech bubbles are to small,and a little hard to read,i think its kinda funny,cant really rate till i see bout 2 more comics tho,cant wait!^_^

Komo said:

first comment yay!any way,i like it

i think the speech bubbles are to small,and a little hard to read,i think its kinda funny,cant really rate till i see bout 2 more comics tho,cant wait!^_^

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Thank you! I guess that means I should start scripting the second part.

Nice comics!But the speechbubbles are small.

BonslyLover said:

Nice comics!But the speechbubbles are small.

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Thank you for the comments.

UPDATE
Installment 2 is up, I tried to space out the text a little more, and made the speech bubbles bigger. Comments are great!

Nice comic! It looks like it's going to be great and I enjoy the humor.

Houndoom1 said:

Nice comic! It looks like it's going to be great and I enjoy the humor.

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Heh, thanks. Especially the comment about the humour. I'm the opposite of a humourous person. ^-^

Sorry but I dont like it.. It confuses me and makes me wish I didnt read it. The only thing I liked was how you have the Story of a girl song at the beggining.

Thanks for voting for terrible and actually posting ...
YOu probably would have helped me more if you told me what to do to improve.

This is well put together, but just avoid recolors please. Recolors are bad.

I like your comic especially the song in the beginning. xD The text is a little hard to read though. Needs a little more characters, but then again, only the first 2 comics up so far...Overall it's a really nice comic. Keep posting....

Thanks y'all.
I've been really busy with Exams, Projects, and my story that's due at the end of the year, and I;m only done one chapter. (oops)
I'll try to get on more often near the end of the month. I started the third but never finished, you will get another new character!

Blizzara said:

Thanks y'all.
I've been really busy with Exams, Projects, and my story that's due at the end of the year, and I;m only done one chapter. (oops)
I'll try to get on more often near the end of the month. I started the third but never finished, you will get another new character!

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You don't have to rush on a comic, school comes first. (Unfortunately)

But can't wait for the next episode is sound interesting.

Thank you hun.
Not sadly though, I love science.

I liked it speech bubbles need to be a bit bigger once thats doine you could revamp the first part so it easier for people to re3ad I like where this is going illl see ift theres any more comics later

UPDATE;; Exams are tomorrow, Friday, Monday and Tuesday. On Wednesday I willbe on all day and will finish the third comic and possibly get started on the fourth!

ROFL, nice comic *laughs* keep it up